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February 1, 2023 at 3:23 pm #131011
@freedomwriter76
Soooo…I was writing some more today…but I have a quick question. Is anyone still interested in this fanfiction?
*comes out of nowhere* I know not how I found this nor can I explain the joy this brought to my life this morning but please continue writing. *disappears again*
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
February 1, 2023 at 4:38 pm #131032Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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AHH!!! Thank all y’all sooo much!!! 💕💕💕💕💕
February 1, 2023 at 4:43 pm #131035@freedomwriter76 sooo I had an idea last night and u don’t have to use it buuut…
what if sometime in the story Pietro or Peter #bias XD
actually gets into real trouble? Like actual trouble and all the kids get scared about what’s going to happen, because this time it’s too late for any of the other kids to stick up for them (the truth is already out ya know?)
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#ProtectSebFebruary 1, 2023 at 4:50 pm #131039ALSO!! Did u see my RP? @freedomwriter76
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#ProtectSebFebruary 1, 2023 at 4:54 pm #131043Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. I saw the RP. I’ll get to it in just a sec. 😊💕
And oooh, I like that idea! But, like, what kind of trouble could they get into? 😅😂 Currently, they’re camping in the story…😂💖
February 1, 2023 at 4:57 pm #131044@freedomwriter76 it could be during the camping or after….
maybe both or one of them wanders into the woods purposely and hides as a “game”
but we all know that is NOT the kind of game ur supposed to play….
(this is sorta taken from personal experience when i was younger. I hid from my family in our church and had TONS of people looking for me, and they passed me multiple times calling my name and I never answered. I still think in my brain I thought we were playing a game XD. Needless to say I got into trouble because I scared them all soooooo bad. They didn’t know what had happened to me!)
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#ProtectSebFebruary 1, 2023 at 4:59 pm #131047I am now imagining Peter in this same scenario…I feel like little 6 year old Peter would totally be in this situation and make up this “game” and get in trouble by freaking EVERYONE out….
maybe at the very end of the camping trip before they head home? Maybe he decides he never wants the fun of the trip to end? and turns it into his own little “game?”
and of course gets in trouble.
And this time the rest of the kids can’t get him out of it, so they sit thru the whole car ride home worrying about what’s gonna happen….
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#ProtectSebFebruary 1, 2023 at 5:14 pm #131057Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Ooh…I like that idea. 😅😂💖
February 1, 2023 at 5:16 pm #131060@freedomwriter76 YAAAY MY IDEAS ARE VALUABLE XD XD
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#ProtectSebFebruary 1, 2023 at 11:31 pm #131107@freedomwriter76
Yay! She’s writing it again! Even though I know next to nothing (perhaps less than nothing?) about Marvel, this has been so much fun to read. I love the characters!
And I definitely have not created an AU of this AU. That would be preposterous! And I most definitely would not have made up a specific character either. Even if she was a young girl with an amazing yet tragic backstory including deactivating bombs for self-preservation at nine years of age; or if she had the ironic ability to communicate without words (ironic considering she was selectively mute… And only says words out loud after many weeks after being adopted… And it’s not in English); or if she loved Olympic trampolines! In fact, I wouldn’t even do it if said possible character had been kidnapped from the witness protection agency. Or if she had beautiful black hair and blue-green eyes.
I would never in a million years.
They call her Emmie.You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
February 2, 2023 at 12:23 pm #131169@elishavet-pidyon XD XD XD XD!!!!! Awesome charrie!!!!
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#ProtectSebFebruary 2, 2023 at 1:40 pm #131190Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@elishavet-pidyon. UHM…one thing: I NEED TO HEAR MORE ABOUT THIS GIRL!!!!
Like, right now!!!! 😂😂😂
February 2, 2023 at 2:49 pm #131203@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
XD What character? XD
Well, I am taking a momentary break from my math work. XD
She came to the orphanage a few years ago, and was put in with the “enhanced” kids even though she doesn’t seem to have any special “enhancement” or training. (she has training among other things, but does all she can to hide her past because she’s terrified that the group that had her for years will find her again. And she’d rather die.) They don’t even realize her native language is a form of Farsi because of her selective muteness (which is a result of anxiety heightened by childhood trauma). She’s quiet and reclusive, but she still becomes one of them and she loves them dearly; especially Natasha. She’d fight for each of them if they needed it, but she’d like to have Natasha to fight beside.
Also, with her ability to communicate (very Secret Benedict Society inspired) she’s able to get by pretty well without words. It’s only when one of the boys (whichever one is more likely, I think it would be Tom or Bucky, but I don’t know for certain.) seriously hurts himself while the adults left them all in Thor’s care. She panics and runs out screaming for help with everything in her. Now, most people can’t hear the words she says in her mind, but instead feel an impact on their emotions. For example, say she’s scared to do something. You feel a little uneasy about it, and if you look at her you’re struck with how terrified she is. Because of this most people think she’s just very expressive, but a very few select people have the gift to hear the actual words spoken. So, she surprises everyone because she goes screaming at the top of her lungs out loud, but someone among the group… I’m also not quite sure which.. gets really shocked because they hear her voice echo.
But they are all shocked when trouble arises and they find that of all of them, she might just be the target. And the key.
(Also, much later when they’ve all grown up, she marries, a soldier/reconnaissance specialist who incidentally, can hear her. Only Natasha knows they’re even talking untill Emmie asks if she can bring a friend named Dawid to a family get together. XD Needless to say, the brothers are on full alert. XD)
I just have to say, Freedom, your stuff has a dangerous tendency to make my brain explode with ideas. XD I’ve enjoyed it immensely (as is obvious). I’m looking forward to whatever else you put out.
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You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
February 2, 2023 at 5:21 pm #131235@freedomwriter76 You’re welcome! This story is the best!!
@elishavet-pidyon Your character is awesome.Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 2, 2023 at 7:12 pm #131259@freedomwriter76
hey freedom, u on?
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