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October 26, 2022 at 9:25 am #120446Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. AHHH!!! THANK YOU!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️ YES, HELP HIM THOR! (I always feel so bad for all of them in this AU, but especially Steve…😭) Haha, yes! Best Big Brother EVER!!!! xD
October 26, 2022 at 12:34 pm #120457@freedomwriter76
also known as…
big broTHOR
XD XD XD XD!!!!
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#ProtectSebOctober 26, 2022 at 12:34 pm #120458I couldn’t resist 🤣
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#ProtectSebOctober 27, 2022 at 9:12 am #120509Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. LOL! XDXDXDXDXDXDXD
January 31, 2023 at 4:25 pm #130885Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. @keilah-h. @lightoverdarkness6. (since you said you read it before joining KP😊) @anyone-else-I-have-forgotten-lol.
Soooo…I was writing some more today…but I have a quick question. Is anyone still interested in this fanfiction?
I know I haven’t posted a chapter in SO LONG…but I’m working on this fic today, and I was curious if anyone was interested in reading it still or if I should just keep it to myself now…😅
Y’all can be honest. I won’t be hurt at all. 💕💕💕😊
January 31, 2023 at 4:27 pm #130888@freedomwriter76
Haha, yeah, I read it…it’s so good! OH Yes!! Definitely :D!!! I love it!!
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January 31, 2023 at 4:30 pm #130889Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. Aww, thank you!!! You’re always so sweet!!! 💕💕💕💕💕
I love my own charrie babies, but not gonna lie…I’ve missed little Steve and Tony and Peter and everyone. 😂😂😂
January 31, 2023 at 4:31 pm #130891@freedomwriter76 SURE!!!
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#ProtectSebJanuary 31, 2023 at 4:37 pm #130895Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Okay then!!! I think I already have a finished chapter from where I last posted a chapter, lol. 😅😂
@godlyfantasy12. @lightoverdarkness6.Chapter 32
Steve followed Thor down the block.
They were walking in silence.
Did Thor just want him to get fresh air?
“Thor…what are we doing? You can still pull pranks…it’s just…I knew you’d get in trouble.”
“Protecting people…it comes naturally to you, doesn’t it?”
Steve slowly nodded. “Yeah…I mean…I guess so…”
He’d had to protect them back at the orphanage.
And even now…he couldn’t…stop.
Even though Phil said he could.
And he trusted Phil.
He trusted Maria most of the way.
And Nick…he thought that he had trusted him.
But he seemed more…distant…and…a little more…calloused than Phil and Maria.
And sometimes…Steve had detected anger in him.
But he hadn’t known who or what it was directed at…so he’d simply given Nick a wide berth.
“What did you do to protect them back at the orphanage?”
Steve shrugged. “Different things.”
“And do you think you have to protect them from Nick?”
Steve shrugged. Zipped up his red hoodie more.
The wind was pretty chilly, after all.
Thor raised an eyebrow. “You don’t know?”
“I just…I don’t know Thor…”
“You’ve had to protect them for so long…you don’t know how to stop.”
Steve looked up at him. Blinked. What…what did Thor know about that?
Thor glanced at him and laughed. “Steve, I’ve had my fair share of experiences too.”
“He just seems…kinda…”
“Distant? Calloused?”
Steve slowly nodded, still shocked. “…Exactly.”
Thor laughed. “You seem very shocked.”
“I…I didn’t expect…”
“Steve…I was adopted too. Loki was only four…and I was seven…and Nick was even more distant and calloused back then. He’d only recently come back from war, after all…that’s how he lost his eye, and maybe that experience still has some of an effect on him.”
“But you and Loki…you were so young…”
Thor nodded. “We were. But I still felt like it was my responsibility to protect Loki, and I didn’t trust Nick for the longest time. Phil and Maria…they were easy to trust. But Nick…being so…distant and calloused…it took a lot of time. But he’s improved a lot since then.”
Steve shrugged. “I…I guess I have a problem with trusting people…”
Thor shook his head. “It’s something we can all work on, Steve, not just you. We all have trust issues.”
Steve shrugged. “I seem to have a lot…”
Thor smiled faintly. “And that’s alright. After what you’ve been through…I wouldn’t trust many people either.”
Steve shrugged again.
Was what he had been through an excuse to not trust people?
Or was he just…a problem?
Maybe he was the problem…he was the one who made Bucky fall after all…
“Thor…what if it’s…me?”
“I beg your pardon?” Thor said, suddenly stopping to turn and face Steve.
Steve slightly looked up at him. “What if I’m the reason all of the others got into trouble so much? What if I’m the reason Pierce was so angry? What if-“
“Steve, no, stop. Right now, Steve, stop,” Thor said, suddenly rushing to his side, squeezing his shoulders. “Steve, that is not true. You are not a problem. It is not your fault when the others got in trouble. You are not a problem. You’re Steve.”
“What’s the difference?” Steve asked quietly.
“There’s a big difference, Steve. You are not a problem. We all love you and cherish you and want you in our lives. Do you understand?”
Steve shrugged. “I don’t know…I guess.”
“Think about it, Steve, if you were gone…what would have happened to the others?”
Steve shrugged again.
He’d often protected them…but still. He made Bucky fall…he was the one who got in trouble all the time.
And sometimes, that led to the others getting in trouble.
“I must be the problem, Thor…”
“Steve, you are not a problem. Your brothers and sisters love you and cherish you, me and Loki included. And Nick, Maria, and Phil wouldn’t know what to do if they lost you…if they lost any of us. You are not a problem. It’s not your fault that your now brothers and sisters got in trouble, and you are not a problem. Do you understand?”
Steve slowly nodded. “Yeah…yeah Thor…I-I understand.”
Thor smiled and hugged him, tight. “Good. And never forget it, Steve, my brother.”
January 31, 2023 at 4:41 pm #130897AGGGGHHHH STEEEEEVE 😭
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#ProtectSebJanuary 31, 2023 at 4:43 pm #130898@freedomwriter76 he’s so sweet 😭
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#ProtectSebJanuary 31, 2023 at 4:44 pm #130899But….
I need more Peter and Pietro XD XD (no favoritism here…)
it doesn’t help that they’re my favorites in the MCU anyway….
(and Tony…and Loki…. XD)
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#ProtectSebJanuary 31, 2023 at 5:13 pm #130909@freedomwriter76
….you finally did it. I actually cried this time.
the problems of relating to characters and situations too muchXD I’m not sure if I should shake my fist at you or tell you congrats. Or both. I’ll go with both! XD
YOU TELL HIM THOR!!!! YOU TELL HIM GOOD!!!
AGH STEVE!!!!
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 31, 2023 at 7:02 pm #130934@freedomwriter76 Awwwwww!!! I love that! I’ve been waiting for more of this story!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 31, 2023 at 7:13 pm #130939@freedomwriter76
Aww, thank you!!! You’re always so sweet!!! 💕💕💕💕💕
You’re welcome!! 😊❤😊❤
I love my own charrie babies, but not gonna lie…I’ve missed little Steve and Tony and Peter and everyone. 😂😂😂
I know right?! Haha, they’re so lovable!!
Especially since those three are my absolute favorite MCU charries…OH!! And Bucky! Can’t forget Bucky ❤😂😂Ahhh TELL HIM THOR!!! UGH Steve you precious baby ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️!!!!
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