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October 5, 2022 at 2:30 pm #118676
@koshka same here….
@freedomwriter76 You’re welcome!!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 6, 2022 at 2:35 pm #118745@freedomwriter76 any idea when the next chapter will be up? No rush just curious đ
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@godlyfantasy12. RIGHT NOWWW!!! (I forgot that I finished it, lol. XDXDXDXD Thanks for the reminder! XDXDXD) @ava-blue. @gracie-j. @queen_of_alvastia. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka. @keilah-h.
Chapter 30
Nick let out a deep breath.
Tonyâs heart was beating, and it was steady.
But he was still out.
Nick tapped his fingers on his knees. Closed his eyes. This was too close for comfort.
SureâŚThor and Loki had gone to the hospital a few times for small injuries or breaksâŚespecially LokiâŚbut this was something new.
Then again, everything about the kids was new.
Thor and Loki hadnât been traumatized and abused like Tony and the others were.
Steve was fifteen years old, had PTSD, and needed to go to therapy.
Bucky had been used as a child soldier.
Even precious little Peter was traumatized in a way.
Nick took in a deep breath. Slowly let it out.
He had never been prepared for this.
This was⌠different.
New.
Absolutely terrifying.
The doctors had said Tonyâs reactor used too much power and had done too much too fast.
Once he awoke and went homeâŚheâd still need to stay out of school for a while.
And no exercise or other strenuous activity for three weeks.
They would have something to monitor how much energy his reactor was using, and if it started using too much or Tony felt pain in his chest or other problems with his heartâŚthey were ordered to head straight to the hospital.
Nick opened his eyes.
Maria squeezed his hand. âHeâs going to be okay. We all will.â
Nick smiled gratefully. ââŚThank you for the reminder. I really need it sometimes.â
âYouâre Welcome.â
The door opened, and Phil stepped back inside, the kids all following close behind him.
Nick smiled. âWelcome in.â
âIs he still asleep?â Sam asked, raising an eyebrow.
Maria nodded. âYes. He hasnât woken up yet.â
âTony is sleepingâŚshhâŚâ Peter whispered. Yawned. Laid his head on Steveâs shoulder.
âWill he wake up soon?â Wanda asked. Sheâd recovered from being sick after a few days. Just a small virus. Thank goodness, it hadnât spread to anyone else.
âWe donât know. But Iâm sure he will.â Maria replied. Motioned for Wanda to sit in her lap.
Wanda did so.
Pietro sat in Philâs lap after he sat down.
Bruce pushed up his glasses. âWhat happened to him?â
Nick let out a deep breath. Told them what the doctors had said. âBut itâs not certain thatâs what happened.â Nick finished. âHeâllâŚhave to rest for a while.â
âTony sleepy?â Peter asked quietly.
âYes. Tonyâs sleepy right now.â Thor replied. Ruffled Peterâs hair.
Peter squealed and pushed his hand away. âThor! Youâre silly!â
Nick smiled.
Thor made a wonderful oldest sibling.
âHeâll be awake soon thoughâŚright?â Natasha asked softly.
Nick nodded. âIâm sure he will.â
Clint nodded and wrapped an arm around Natasha. âYeah. We canât lose hope.â
Nick nodded. âRight.â
He looked up and saw Bucky standing still. One of the few who hadnât spoken. Bucky had thatâŚfaraway look in his eyes. Like he wasâŚsomewhere else. That wasnât there anymore. And he was clenching and unclenching his left fist. âBuckyâŚare you alright?â Nick asked softly.
Bucky slowly looked at him. Nodded. âYeah. I justâŚdonât like hospitals.â
âMe neither.â Steve agreed.
Nick slowly nodded. There was more to it than that.
For both of them.
âNo one doesâŚbut sometimes we have to go inside them.â
Bucky shrugged. âDoesnât mean we have to like it.â
âOf course not.â Nick agreed.
Heâd work on getting to the bottom of it later.
âHeyâŚPeter replaced me. No fair.â
Nick turned to face the Hospital bed. âTony!?â
Tony smiled faintly. âIâm awake. And I wake upâŚand Peter replaced me.â
âTony!â Peter cried.
âHe can get up there, but he needs to be careful.â Phil noted.
Steve nodded and set Peter on the bed.
He instantly crawled over to Tony.
Tony wrapped an arm around him and held him close. âHey Peter…â
âI love you TonyâŚâ Peter mumbled, curling up into Tonyâs embrace.
Those two were close.
There was no doubt about that.
Nick stood and walked over to the bed. He gave Tony a kiss on the forehead.
Tony looked up at him and smiled. âSorry about the panic.â
âItâs okay TonyâŚdonât apologize. IâmâŚ.just happy youâre alive.â
Tony grinned. âGonna take a lot more than my heart stopping to take me out.â
Everyone laughed, including Tony.
Phil smiled. âWeâre glad youâre awake.â
âMe too. Staying asleep was boring.â Tony replied. Winked.
Maria laughed. âWellâŚsomeoneâs recovered.â
Nick laughed.
They talked, laughed, joked around, teased, and smiled for a few hours. The doctor came in a few times, happy to see that Tony was awake, talking, and laughing.
But soon the hospital would be closed to visitors.
âItâs probably about time for you all to head home.â Nick noted.
Peter had long since fallen asleep in Tonyâs arms.
Loki nodded. âWe do have school tomorrow.â
Phil nodded. âAt least one of us have to stay here with Tony.â
âI will.â Nick offered.
Maria nodded. âIâll go home with the kids if both of you want to stay here.â
Phil nodded. âSounds good to me.â
Steve carefully picked Peter up.
Peter stirred but didnât wake.
He laid his head on Steveâs shoulder and continued to sleep.
Tony waved to them. âSee you later.â
October 6, 2022 at 2:45 pm #118747@freedomwriter76 AWWWW!! UGH I LOVE PETER SOOOOOO MUCH!!!! PETER AND TONY AS BROTHERS
(and in the MCU and other stuff Peter and Tony as father/son lol)
IS JUST THE BESSSSSSSTTTTTTT!!!!!!
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#ProtectSebOctober 6, 2022 at 2:48 pm #118748Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Aww, THANK YOUUUU!!!!
IKR!? <3 <3 <3 <3
October 7, 2022 at 4:53 pm #118797@fredomwriter76 Aww, love it!!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 7, 2022 at 4:57 pm #118799Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h. Aww, thank you!!! â¤ď¸ đ
October 15, 2022 at 10:37 pm #119525Oh btw! @freedomwriter76 Ik ur not writing as much but any progress on the AU?
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#ProtectSebOctober 16, 2022 at 4:46 pm #119589Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. *nervous laugh* Nope, not yet. XD Trying to figure out where I want it to go from here.
They’ll go camping soon, but first they’re going to have a birthday party, but I’m still trying to decide how I want that to go, y’know? XDXDXD It’s Loki’s 18th birthday. đ
October 16, 2022 at 5:15 pm #119592@freedomwriter76 awww!! Cute!! Excited about to the camping too!! One of them totally needs to get poison ivy XD!!!
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#ProtectSebOctober 16, 2022 at 7:56 pm #119601Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Glad you’re excited! đ Lol, that would be funny if one of them got poison ivy, or maybe multiple of them. XDXDXD A marshmallow will most certainly be set on fire, that is for sure. đ
OH!
And Peter…will have his first s’more, which is sweet…but sad that he didn’t get one before. Then again…I hadn’t eaten a s’more before this year…a teenager…eating a s’more for the first time in her life…XDXD XDDD
October 16, 2022 at 8:00 pm #119604@freedomwriter76 AHHH IMAGINING CUTE PEPTER EATING A STICKY SMORE! Like getting his mouth all stuck is just the cutest thing eveeeer!!!
also, arenât they sooo good?! But messyâŚ
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#ProtectSebOctober 16, 2022 at 8:05 pm #119606Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. IKR!? XD SOOO CUTEEEEE!!!!
YES!!! They are absolutely DELICIOUS! XDXDXD But yes, very messy. XDXDXD
October 25, 2022 at 4:13 pm #120417Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. Finally, there’s another chapter. xD @koshka. @elishavet-pidyon. @keilah-h. @ava-blue. @gracie-j. @queen_of_alvastia.
Chapter 31
âDonât look yet! You have to wait!â
âWhat am I even waiting for, Thor? What are you hiding?â Loki asked, Thorâs hands covering his eyes as he led him downstairs.
Thor chuckled. âYouâll see soon! Patience, brother!â
Loki laughed. Thor always wanted him to be patient.
ButâŚThor wasnât always the most patient.
âOkayâŚopen them!â
Loki opened his eyes.
âHappy Birthday!â Everyone cried.
Loki looked up, where a banner was hanging above the table. âHappy 18th Birthdayâ.
âThank youâŚall of you.â
Phil smiled and came over, wrapping him in a hug. Maria did the same. âYouâre welcome, Loki. Hard to believe youâre this old already.â
Loki chuckled. âI guess so. Fourteen years since me and Thor came, right?â
Phil sighed. âAnd theyâve flown by way too fast.â
Loki grinned.
He was leaving a chapter behind.
Childhood.
But until he was out of Highschool, heâd enjoy still having a part of a childhood still.
âNow, why donât we start this very special day with a very special birthday breakfast?â Maria suggested.
Lokiâs stomach growled. He grinned. âSounds great to me!â
They gathered around the table and once everyone had food, dug into the pancakes Maria had made.
They were warm, buttery, and absolutely delicious. âThank you, Maria. Phil. Nick.â Loki said with a smile.
âYouâre Welcome.â They all chimed at once.
Nick seemed a littleâŚdistracted though. He was on his phone at the moment, looking at something, Loki guessed.
âWanda helped make the pancakes, just so you know.â Maria said with a smile.
Loki turned to Wanda. âWell then, thank you, Wanda, for helping make these delicious pancakes.â
Wanda smiled faintly. âYouâre welcomeâŚâ She whispered.
Loki took another bite.
Before long, laughter filled the room.
Loki smiled.
ThisâŚthis was a family.
And he loved it.
More than anything else.
~*~
Thor chuckled as Sam sat down on the whoopee cushion.
Sam turned and gave them a smirk and a glare before throwing the cushion at them.
Thor caught it and laughed.
Loki fell off the couch into the floor out of laughter. âIt may be old, but it is so good. Great job putting it there before he saw it Pietro.â
Pietro laughed and gave Loki a high-five. âYeah! It was funny!â
Thor laughed.
Loki could be a little childish in some ways, but when it was important, he was one of the most mature people Thor knew.
But, when it was a day like today, playing pranks was one of Lokiâs pastimes.
And, of course, it being his birthday, Thor had agreed to help and actually, to his own surprise, he wasâŚenjoying it.
It was a lot more fun than heâd openly admit.
And besides, the pranks werenât hurting anyone, which was good. Because some of Lokiâs old pranksâŚwellâŚtheyâd caused Thor to break his arm. Multiple times.
Thor grinned at his brother. âWhatâs next?â
Loki laughed. âYou like thisâŚdonât you?â
Thor chuckled. âI probably shouldnâtâŚâ He smirked. âBut I do anyways. Itâs pretty fun. And at least your pranks have improved.â
Loki laughed. âYouâll keep reminding me of that, wonât you?â
âWhat are all of you doing?â
Thor grabbed Steveâs arm and pulled him down into the floor with them. âShhâŚweâre pulling a few pranks. For Loki on his birthday.â
Steve raised an eyebrow. ââŚWhy?â
âLoki likes to pull pranks.â
âTheyâre fun!â Pietro cried. Laughed.
Steve bit his lip. âI donât see howâŚâ
âJust try it!â Loki replied. âItâs fun.â
Thor nodded. âIt actually isâŚâ
âYouâll get in trouble.â
âFor pulling a few harmless pranks? Sure, they might get annoyed, but none of us will get in trouble.â Loki replied. âItâs not like anyone is getting hurt.â
âAnd annoyance can lead to anger.â Steve argued.
Thor glanced at him.
Into those blue eyes that were very similar to his.
Those eyes full of fearâŚdoubt.
Still struggling to trust.
Phil, he seemed pretty comfortable with him.
Maria, decent.
But to be perfectly honestâŚThor noticed that he was still wary of Nick.
And the doubtâŚthe fearâŚin his eyes were perfect evidence that there was someone Steve didnât completely trust.
âWe wonât get in trouble! Have fun with us, Steve!â Pietro cried.
Steve shook his head. âYouâre going to get in troubleâŚNick will be mad.â
Thor slowly stood.
Heâd been right.
âSteveâŚheâll be annoyed at the most.â Loki replied, his brows furrowing together.
âAnd how do you know that? Annoyance can lead to anger if heâs pushed the wrong way.â Steve replied quietly. Chewed on his bottom lip.
Doubt colored his every movementâŚhis every word.
âIâll be back, Loki and Pietro. Steve, would you like to go on a walk down the neighborhood with me?â Thor asked with a smile.
Steve looked up at him. ââŚUhmâŚyeahâŚyeahâŚsureâŚâ
Thor smiled. âCome along, then. Donât forget your coat. It is September after all.â
Steve silently followed him.
Thor only hoped that his own experiences could help Steve.
October 25, 2022 at 4:47 pm #120419@freedomwriter76 YAAAY LUV IT!!! And awwww Steve!!!!! đ THOR HELP HIM BABY!!! U GOT THIS #BESTBIGBROTHOR
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