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February 5, 2025 at 9:37 pm #197289
Welcome one and all! This is where I shall share about ALL of my work in progresses! I have quit a few!
Anyway, here my WIPs I have:
The Kingdom of Kaimor (fantasy/sword and sorcery)
A Cellar’s tales, WIP name (group of horror stories, that are connected)
That other WIP, still doesn’t have a name 😅 The one about the immortal girl. (Historical fiction)
P.I.-C.A.F.E (Horror/thriller. Also connected to TKOK)
And the one story I am writing with my sister. (It is a dystopian. I think it is pretty creative) Also needs a name.
So, yeah, those are all of them! If you are interested in any of them in more specific details then just ask!
Here are tags!
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @stephine @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @power @freed_and_redeemed and @thearcaneaxiom!"MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"
February 5, 2025 at 9:40 pm #197290February 5, 2025 at 9:41 pm #197291@kefa
“Carrot Cake lights a match and sets the hospital ablaze, she smiles to herself.”
Are you okay? XD
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
February 5, 2025 at 9:43 pm #197292What the–
I would edit that post but I think it is way too funny that I tried to tag you with your username. Anyway, @the_lost-journal
Look up XD
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
February 5, 2025 at 9:50 pm #197293Oh trust me, I am fine… Carrot Cake on the other hand… nah, she is not okay…
What the–
I would edit that post but I think it is way too funny that I tried to tag you with your username. Anyway, @the_lost-journal
Look up XD
Lol, yeah! Kommen mistake. (Ik it is spelled with a “C” But “K” is better.) Do you want to know about any of my WIPs?
"MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"
February 5, 2025 at 9:53 pm #197294They all sound so interesting!
*glares at you* you must finish them ALL and publish them–
*glares harder* Don’t you abandon a SINGLE ONE
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
February 5, 2025 at 9:55 pm #197295Oh nice, a topic for your WIPs! *subscribes*
Which one of your works is Carrot Cake from?
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junior, double, triple whopperFebruary 5, 2025 at 10:07 pm #197296I will try my best. *slowly backs away*
Which one of your works is Carrot Cake from?
Guess!!
Okay I will tell you! P.I.-C.A.F.E
It stands for: Pretzel.Iris.Carrot Cake. Alex. Fern. Ellis. Those are the main characters from my WIP. (Kinda inspired by f.r.i.e.n.d.s… I have never watched it before, just the name alone)
"MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"
February 5, 2025 at 10:10 pm #197297Oh, cool!
my next question was going to be what those letters stood for lol so that’s a double answer! Lolol cool cool though.
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junior, double, triple whopperFebruary 5, 2025 at 10:14 pm #197298Here is a scene I have! Please do not immediately judge Rapha, she has been through a lot.
When they returned, the Keepers were now arguing on how Nissi shouldn’t have married early.
“So you are saying love is no reason to marry?” Nissi raised his voice.
“Love is a fine reason to marry for the people of the kingdom! But for people in power, such as us, love is no reason to marry anyone!” Rapha yelled back.
“You are just saying that because your love is royalty!” Nissi was shouting at this point. Rapha jumped back when she heard this. “I didn’t know that was public information!” She said shyly. “Your true love, The prince of the Pardalis people, announced it!” Nissi flew his arm back in a gesture of anger.
I would like to hear thoughts, any corrections, and what you liked and disliked… thank you! I know this scene is shot… it I from TKOK
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"MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"
February 5, 2025 at 11:00 pm #197300oh, yeah, lol! Here are the roles of the character!
Pretzel: He is mainly the side protagonist, he is trying to help end the infection that is spreading through the world, he helps the protagonist move forward, and supports the team! How the disease affected him: STATUS, infection ineffective on social and physical states, affects mental state greatly. MENTAL STATE, 54% SOCIAL STATE, 90% PHYSICAL STATE, 98%
Iris: She is also a side protagonist, but is more helpful then Pretzel (no offense to him of course 😅) she is trying to figure out a cure to the disease, mainly because she attempted to get a doctors degree. How the infection affected her. STATUS, physical state untouched, mental state decent, and social state dangerously low. MENTAL STATE, 75% SOCIAL STATE, 45% PHYSICAL STATE, 100%
Carrot Cake: More of an evil antagonist, unlike Alex and Fern, she sticks with the main group. She is considered bit of an antagonist, because she causes most of the trouble, like setting things on fire, and ruining things. She is not considered a full antagonist because she will do whatever it takes to protect Iris though, her best friend is all she has left… How the infection affected her: STATUS, Greatly impacted, only talks to Iris, acts as if she and her are the only humans left. MENTAL HEALTH, 20% SOCIAL HEALTH, 10% PHYSICAL HEALTH, 80%
Alex: An antagonist, she is actively trying to stop her friends from finding the cure, she believes this is what humanity deserves, she says that this is a test, and if you fail it, and get infected, then you are weak and deserve nothing. She even attempts to kill some of the protagonists, saying they shouldn’t “play God” (which they aren’t). STATUS, she has lost everything, she blames humans, she blames them for everything, she has no friends, no family, and nothing to love or care for. MENTAL HEALTH, 81% SOCIAL HEALTH, 0% PHYSICAL HEALTH, 99%
Fern:
HE IS INFECTED, HE TIES TO FIGHT IT?!?!?!?!?!?!????? HE LOST CONTROL… HE ACTS LIKE AN ANIMAL..>?@?!? JUST LIKE THE OTHER*@&*)!_!?!?!?(#&(!?! HE HAS THE POWER TO CONTROL VINES AND THORNS?!(#_)__)309-@#$*!%.STATUS, he is not okay… MENTAL HEALTH, 0% SOCIAL HEALTH, 0% PHYSICAL HEALTH, 100%Ellis: The main protagonist, he fights hard to find the cure, and leads Pretzel and Iris (sometimes Carrot Cake) to do everything they can. He used to be extremely close to Alex… before all of this happened… now Alex seems as if he is a monster, or one of those things… their encounters are no longer sweet, more so them both trying to… stop the other… STATUS, losing Alex has affected him, his physical health is fine, but his social health and mental health are not. MENTAL HEALTH, 35% SOCIAL HEALTH, 24% PHYSICAL HEALTH, 89%.
idk why I did this, thought I would explain more of the charries.
"MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"
February 5, 2025 at 11:14 pm #197301Oh, very interesting!
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junior, double, triple whopperFebruary 5, 2025 at 11:24 pm #197302February 6, 2025 at 7:06 am #197307Sounds interesting! What kind of virus has taken over the world?
How is PICAFE connected to TKOK?
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
February 6, 2025 at 8:24 am #197309What kind of virus has taken over the world?
Okay, so it is not you everyday flu, as you can imagine! It infects you, but makes you go crazy, it grows this black stuff onto your body, and makes you more powerful but you can’t control it. It is kind of alive in a way, where it wires into your brain, and looks through it, then based on what you were good at or loved to of, it amplifies it. Like with Fern, he loved gardening, and the virus made him grow and control vines, and caused black like vines to grow out of his back. 😅 There is a cure though!… no one has found it yet…
How is PICAFE connected to TKOK?
I was hoping somebody would ask! 😁 Do you know about my fallen? From TKOK?
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