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That’s a pretty good addition to the scene! I don’t think that deviated from your story’s voice at all.
You’ll see. Then you will understand why other readers are mad at him. It wasn’t pretty.
Hehe, okay.
“Everything is a mountain”
Good. I might still check with my sister to see what she thinks, but if you both like it, then I think I might go swap the ending.
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