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    The Most Esteemed Feathered One
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      @stephie

      *violently defenestrates Eric*

      I, for one, really like Roman numerals.

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      Stepheroni and Cheese
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        @theducktator

        Maybe Eric is just having a Peter moment?

        Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.

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        Linus Smallprint
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          #187541
          Linus Smallprint
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            @ellette-giselle

            (The puns are driving me mad tho. You seriously need to stop or I’m going to lose it. lol)

            Unless that’s your goal……….. lol

            Eric right now:

            Hmm… I think you might be getting a break from bad puns right now.


            @theducktator

            *violently defenestrates Eric*

            *looks up what ‘defenestrate’ means* Oh!


            @stephie

            Maybe Eric is just having a Peter moment?

            #noSpoliers

            Oh yes, and happy Canadian Thanksgiving to all of you!

             

             

            Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

            #187554
            The Most Esteemed Feathered One
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              @linus-smallprint

              Oh yes, and happy Canadian Thanksgiving to all of you!

              Thanks! Happy Columbus Day! (Do they celebrate that in Canada?)

              I, for one, really like Roman numerals.

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              Keilah H.
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                @linus-smallprint Canadian Thanksgiving is today?

                That’s cool! Today’s my brother’s birthday. Also, are the traditions and history behind Canadian Thanksgiving any different than American Thanksgiving or are they largely the same?

                "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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                Linus Smallprint
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                  @theducktator

                  Thanks! Happy Columbus Day! (Do they celebrate that in Canada?)

                  Nope. Possibly because we’re tied to England. We do celebrate some English holidays such as Victoria Day in May.


                  @keilah-h

                  Canadian Thanksgiving is today?

                  Yes. Well, yesterday by now.

                  That’s cool! Today’s my brother’s birthday. 

                  Cool! Happy belated birthday to him!

                  Also, are the traditions and history behind Canadian Thanksgiving any different than American Thanksgiving or are they largely the same?

                  I don’t know the history behind our Thanksgiving but our traditions are similar. We get together with extended family and have turkey. However, we do not have sweet potatoes with marshmallows (though I would like to try that again.)

                  Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

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                  Keilah H.
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                    @linus-smallprint ohh cool! To be frank, I have never had sweet potatoes with marshmallows either.

                    "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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                    Stepheroni and Cheese
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                      @linus-smallprint

                      Happy Thanksgiving!

                      I just looked up what sweet potatoes and marshmallows is and I am going to have to try it. No kidding.

                      I usually get together with my cousins on Thanksgiving and have takeout Chinese food. 🙂

                      Edit: That made it sound like I’m Chinese. I am not Chinese.

                      Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.

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                      Ellette Giselle
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                        @linus-smallprint

                        I’m going to die laughing, because in a really weird way that totally fits Eric!

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                        Linus Smallprint
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                          @ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow

                          Here we go!

                          Chapter the 21st – The Arrest

                          Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

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                          Linus Smallprint
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                            @ellette-giselle

                            I’m going to die laughing, because in a really weird way that totally fits Eric!

                            You mean just the quote? Or Thor as well?

                            Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

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                              @stephie

                              I usually get together with my cousins on Thanksgiving and have takeout Chinese food. 

                              Actually, that’s what I sort of had for my Thanksgiving meal this year. Rice bowls.

                              Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

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                              Ellette Giselle
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                                @linus-smallprint

                                You mean just the quote? Or Thor as well?

                                All of it, because it’s so not Eric that it’s so funny.

                                 

                                Chapter the 21st – The Arrest

                                Oh Shoot.

                                 

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                                Ellette Giselle
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                                  @linus-smallprint

                                  Mannnnn!!!!! This just got intense!

                                  Shattering Glass! Eric is about to get everyone in a whole world of mess. Poor Martha. She’s such a sweet girl. Oh, that conversation between Eric and his siblings, that was one of your best scenes you have every done. I don’t know why, but for some reason the way you have been writing feels almost as though we’re on the surface of the story, and then that one just got deep. It was the expression, the word choices, the interaction of all three of them combined with personality……… I don’t know, something about that was different. It was really good. The responses each of them had were perfectly fitting for the characters that they were.

                                   

                                  Btw, if Alan doesn’t end up loving Martha I think I’m going to kill him. THEY. ARE. PERFECT.

                                  Just saying.

                                   

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