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October 11, 2024 at 1:34 pm #187418
You’ve never had a crush on a fictional character??? Ever?
ERIC NO!!!!
If you want to find all the cops, they're hanging out in the donut shop.
October 11, 2024 at 1:40 pm #187419@theducktator ssssshhhhhh we’re pretending that conversation didn’t exist
lol just joking.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
October 11, 2024 at 1:46 pm #187420@theducktator actually I never did either
until last March
whyyyyyyyyyy
lol
he is my computer background right now"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
October 11, 2024 at 3:58 pm #187423I am choosing now to share that sometimes, while I read your book, I go to google something, thinking that I’ll find some fandom web page to answer my question, and then it hits me: there is no fandom yet. There is no wikipedia page. XD
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
October 11, 2024 at 3:59 pm #187424My fourteen year old brain refuses to comprehend the concept of a “crush on a fictional character.” Therefore, I will also pretend the above conversation does not exist.
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
October 11, 2024 at 4:23 pm #187425@stephie heh I’m the opposite. I can’t imagine what having a crush on a real person is like.
At least a fictional character can’t notice you like them or anything."When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
October 11, 2024 at 4:24 pm #187426Also that’s too funny with like a fandom wiki…..
Someone should make that! @linus-smallprint Are you planning to have a series guidebook or a wiki page or something like that someday?"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
October 11, 2024 at 5:40 pm #187428@theducktator @ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h
Could you please take your whole conversation about crushes on fictional characters elsewhere? Thank you!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
October 11, 2024 at 5:44 pm #187429I am choosing now to share that sometimes, while I read your book, I go to google something, thinking that I’ll find some fandom web page to answer my question, and then it hits me: there is no fandom yet. There is no Wikipedia page. XD
Yup, not there yet. Out of curiosity, what was your question(s)?
Also that’s too funny with like a fandom wiki…..
Someone should make that! linus-smallprint Are you planning to have a series guidebook or a wiki page or something like that someday?Um, step one, write the three books then publish them. I’ll cross that bridge when I get there. As for a fandom, that’s for you to make.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
October 11, 2024 at 5:44 pm #187430ERIC NO!!!!
Oh hey! An all-caps response. I must be doing something right!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
October 11, 2024 at 5:53 pm #187431@linus-smallprint I’m so sorry!! I’ll stop now. Honestly my two cents have already been put in.
If it really, REALLY bothers you, I think you can delete the replies. I’m not sure.
Oh and yeah it’d have to be once the books are done lol, but I’d love to make some kinda wiki or something for it.
I’m thinking of doing the same for all of mine haha"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
October 11, 2024 at 7:18 pm #187436Your wish is my command. No more character crushes.
If you want to find all the cops, they're hanging out in the donut shop.
October 12, 2024 at 2:25 pm #187460Whoah! I wasn’t even involved in that crush talk yesterday/this morning. This is the fist time I’ve been on since Thursday!
Okay, anyways, the chapter.
I don’t mind so much that Eric betrayed Martha as much as what worries me is that he denied being one of the Faithful. That’s not okay. I mean, take a look at the Bible if you think it is. Christ said he will deny us before His Father if we deny Him. Now, if that wasn’t in there I feel like I could focus more on the Martha thing. Right now tho, I’m super distracted thinking about that. I like this whole chapter tho, and I think it’s got a good stage to move off of into the next chapter. I’m excited to see what happens next! Good work on this one!
(The puns are driving me mad tho. You seriously need to stop or I’m going to lose it. lol)
Unless that’s your goal……….. lol
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
October 13, 2024 at 6:51 pm #187496I actually can’t remember; that’s the funny thing about questions I mean to ask.
I haven’t read the latest chapter yet, but seeing as everyone is yelling at you I think I will go and take a look XD
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
October 13, 2024 at 7:01 pm #187497NO!
Why? Why did Eric have to do this? “Oh why, oh why, oh why”
JUST WHY?
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
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