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    Ellette Giselle
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      @keilah-h

      also I headcanon this is kinda what his voice sounds like, but with more hissy S’s:

      How did I know it was going to be Sniper?

       


      @linus-smallprint

      Glad I could help!

      Sometimes I find all I need is someone else to hash out something in my story, and then I can say, “You know what, you’re totally wrong, thanks for clearing that up for me” lol.

      So yeah, if my advice is helpful in any way, I’m glad.

       

      You all aren’t going to leave me alone until this appears, are you?

      No! Because we all know that Ellette is the master author and you must take advice from her if you ever hope for success. *Conveniently ignores the fact that Justin almost tore her novel to pieces and it wouldn’t be publishable except for what he did to help her.*

      And, quite frankly, Stripe needs a hug.

      It’s a fact my friend, and you can argue with facts till your blue in the face, but it doesn’t change.

      (try asking an atheist after he died. He sure thought there was no God…. but then……..)

      Facts can’t be argued with.

      Stripe needs a hug.

      Need I continue?

       

      Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

      #186788
      Keilah H.
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        @ellette-giselle

        cause I’m madly in love with him that’s why

        help meeeeeee

        I’m kidding, I’m kidding, no need to lecture me on why fixating on a character is really bad for my mental health and what not

         

         

         

        lol but imagine Oliver with his voice.

        Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

        #186790
        Ellette Giselle
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          @keilah-h

          Girl, you are hopeless.

          I’ve never had a character crush.

          Never.

          *shushes wounded character because I told him I was in love with him and now….*

           

          Okay, just joking. But seriously, it is not healthy for characters when I fall in love with them. I mean, Aaron was my favorite character I have ever written ever, and look what happened to him!

          Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

          #186791
          Keilah H.
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            @ellette-giselle lolll

            Yeah I’ve never had any type of crush before. Then I turned 17 and my brain was like, “wowww, that is a handsome voice”

            and you know the rest of the story.

             

             

            And lol it’s the opposite for me. I like a character, I might give him physical or emotional pain for a while, but he’ll eventually have a good ending. Usually. At least in this case, I love him too much to kill him. Torture isn’t out of the question, though,, but we’re gonna ignore that for now.

            Lol

             

             

             

            listen to us talking about characters like they’re real people we have living in our minds. Writer brain strikes again.

            Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

            #186792
            Keilah H.
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              Sorry Linus for taking over your chat with my obsession with a character I have.

              Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

              #186793
              Ellette Giselle
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                @keilah-h

                 

                listen to us talking about characters like they’re real people we have living in our minds. Writer brain strikes again.

                No kidding!

                Poor Linus comes back and finds his WIP all blown up by two crazy author girls.

                 

                Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                #186830
                Keilah H.
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                  @ellette-giselle hahaha

                  oy, we have too much fun here.

                  Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                  #186910
                  Linus Smallprint
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                    I’m just going to pretend the conversation above does not exist. What conversation, you ask? I have no idea.

                    #186933
                    Keilah H.
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                      @linus-smallprint yes please, pretend it doesn’t exist lol.

                       

                      Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                      #186979
                      Stephie
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                        @linus-smallprint

                        Okay, okay, the kid hugging Charles was really cute, and it worked for the story. I guess I’ll have to respect the author’s wishes now.

                        "Courage, dear heart." -Aslan

                        #186980
                        Ellette Giselle
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                          @stephie

                          WHAT!!! STEPHIE!!! TRAITOR!!

                          We are still pushing for Stripe to get hugged, and it is going to happen.

                          Its a fact.

                          and I just gave Linus a rundown on facts.

                          😉

                          Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                          #187197
                          Stephie
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                            @ellette-giselle

                            I would like to offer my sincerest apologies XD

                            "Courage, dear heart." -Aslan

                            #187233
                            Ellette Giselle
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                              @stephie

                              Well then wonderful. Glad you rejoined the team. (The winning team)

                              😛

                              Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                              #187415
                              Linus Smallprint
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                                @ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow

                                Next chapter! We are about two-thirds through The Cost now. (Maybe a little under.) This scene was not in the first draft, so I’m interested to see what you think of it.

                                Chapter the 20th – The Eraser

                                #187416
                                Keilah H.
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                                  @linus-smallprint I love how the narrator decided that the puns aren’t worth directly translating and just inserted his own.

                                   

                                  and wow! Eric betrayed Martha but realized what he did and is now rushing to save her! Interesting!

                                  Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

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