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June 16, 2017 at 11:21 pm #35238
@dragon-snapper Lol. Loved the addition of Michael as the overlord and the reference to Daniel in that section. xD
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June 17, 2017 at 11:06 am #35260Round of applause to this hilarious work.
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June 17, 2017 at 6:53 pm #35316Loving it!!!! Haaahahahaaaaa….
June 18, 2017 at 1:07 pm #35347@dragon-snapper My family asked me why I was laughing, and I realized there is no good way to explain this. It’s just too jam packed with inside jokes. XD I do believe that you, my dear, have become a legendary writer of KP.
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June 21, 2017 at 11:39 am #35586DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH THIS IS SO FUN AND HILARIOUS AND PERFECT!!!!!
Ice cream with soy, (GROSS) raspberries, The Wiser, dragons, cliches!!!!!
@daeus So, do you really know Spanish? Could you really read the Count of Monte Cristo in Spanish?
@mariposa @daeus All Coffee Loathers unite! But what is your preferred drink then? Mine is Dark Chocolate Cocoa.NEXT PART PLEASE! @dragon-snapper *asked respectfully on bended knee, mindful of the greatness and sensitivity of dragons*
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June 21, 2017 at 11:45 am #35587@anne-of-lothlorien No, I don’t know Spanish.
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June 21, 2017 at 11:50 am #35590Aw, too bade @daeus. So would it drive you crazy to have a copy of TCoMC that you couldn’t read, or would it be a comfort, because your favorite book was still with you, though unreadable?
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June 21, 2017 at 11:53 am #35591@anne-of-lothlorien I think it would be a comfort. Until I got bored. Then I would want something to read.
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June 21, 2017 at 12:12 pm #35593I’m still so in love with this. The part with the raspberries and the ice cream… *cackles*
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June 21, 2017 at 12:20 pm #35595@anne-of-lothlorien Probably any kind of fruit smoothie. I’m not much on pop (although I do like orange Fanta) and I’ve never had tea. Aberdeen my dinosaur (he’s a book-eating Authorosaurus from the createtus period), likes to drink ink. 😉
June 22, 2017 at 8:48 am #35645@ethryndal *bows* Why, thank you, elf friend. I’m honored.
@anne-of-lothlorien *stares down nose at the kneeling Lady of Lothlorien…* Next part….ah well, I suppose 😛 😛 😛
@daeus I think that you not knowing spanish was part of Dark Evil Overlord @michael-stanton ‘s evil plan. 😛
@hope I agree. 😛
@that_writer_girl_99 Yes. Knowing the KeePers makes this funnier. And thank you about the characterization, because most of the time, that is my very extremely weak spot in writing. 😀
@graciegirl (I sorta like coffee, but I know that Daeus doesn’t, so I had to incorporate that) And don’t worry, 😀 I have several diary-free ice creams in my house to. 😀 I don’t eat them, but some people in my family do. 😀
@perfectfifths *steeples fingers and reclines in chair* Most likely. 🙂
@aratrea Yes…I couldn’t resist. I hadn’t seen your all’s videos before, but when I did…ah…☀ ☀ ☀ ENFP ☀ ☀ ☀
June 22, 2017 at 8:48 am #35647@kate-flournoy *waves manically* The Legend of King Daeus Sequel is over here, just in case I forgot to tag you before. 😀
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June 22, 2017 at 11:15 am #35659DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW DID I MISS THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????
*falls to pieces over everything* All the stuffs. It’s hilarious. And I predict that soon Cadet Snapper will rise to the rank of Head Knight and Kate shall have to retire as King’s Secretary. XD
June 22, 2017 at 11:15 am #35660June 23, 2017 at 9:05 am #35717I shall remain here on bended knee, @dragon-snapper the Magnicicent, until the next part is relinquished to us for perusal. Also, *plasters on cute puppy dog face and speaks in an adorable voice* Think I could have a tiny part in the next section?
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