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1. I couldn’t hear the music (I think it was a problem on my end) so no critiques there! 😂
2. Nah, I think it was fine. Reminds me of how obsessive thoughts go round and round, from melancholy to full grief. At least, speaking from reading stories like that.
Other notes: This is more of a neutral comment and you can take it however you want, but it felt very applicable to anyone separated from their lover. I don’t know if you want it to feel specific to Alpha and Emmie – but if so, you could find some fantasy-ish pics and add quotes belonging to the characters. That’s up to you, and if you want it to be more vague, that’s a stylistic choice 😅
The exhaustion is strong with this one
Love your forum signature lol : )
I’ve been hoping to buy a dvd of winter soldier, but I never see it in thrift stores for some reason
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anyone wanna see The Baumann family Aesthetics I have made for Against All Odds? (that is, The Bois’ fam (meaning Felix’s family) and The Bois’ book, hehe)
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@mineralizedwritings I think you’ve seen some of them…give me a sec. Lemme finish up a Pietro sketch and I’ll be back with Aesthetics 😂
@freedomwriter76 Yes!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Oh cool!!
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Yesss, plz tag meee!!
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I’ll post the characters ages/relation to The Bois as well (unless it’s one of the Bois, obviously XD)
So, first off…
Felix, 58 (Father)
Frida, 54 (Stepmother)
Adolphus, 28 (Stepbrother)
Dietrich, 27 (Stepbrother)
Leo, 26