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Thanks for the input, I’m still trying to figure out how I’m going to introduce everyone without info dumping
It’s a struggle
Yesss, I understand. It’s so hardddd 😭 But you’ll get better at it the more you keep writing. Like, I read a ton of stuff about writing and I watch a lot of videos about it, but I don’t really get better until I put those principles I’ve learned into practice. And, if this is your first or second draft, don’t stress about it. You can fix it later on. I have to remind myself of that all the time. 😂
I love the arcs, and I think now that I know that it makes Ami make more sense to me LOL
And again I love Ev haha and yeah I can see how pride might be one of his flaws
Yes me too. 🤣 I didn’t notice how underdeveloped she actually was. 😅
Lol, it seriously is. XD
I know I’m butting in, lol, but you were talking about how it’s hard to find clean but well written books these days. Well I got a book for Christmas called Inside the Ten-Foot Line, written by Lori Z. Scott. (She writes articles for Story Embers) It’s really good so far. The writing itself is great, and the plot is also fantastic. It’s about volleyball, but the MC has struggles outside of that. I haven’t finished it yet, but so far they’ve mentioned some topics that I’ve rarely ever seen, or maybe not at all, discussed in fiction, like anorexia. It’s all from a Christian perspective and the Christian part of it isn’t super pushy or preachy in my opinion. It has a little romance in it, so far nothing more than a crush. I mean, the two are “sort of dating” but it’s more like friends. I feel like it’s handled pretty well. So yeah, just something to check out if it interests you. 😊
Anyway, if I can think of any other books that are clean and that you might like I’ll let you know. 🙃
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
Thanks! Yeah, I know. So many new possibilities for the plot… 😈
😂😂
Thank ya!
Oh no, you’re fine. I don’t know if there is much more to say. 😂
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Soooo I’ve seen these memes online where you have a certain amount of money and with that money you have to pick characters to build a team with, hang out with, etc…and welllll, I decided to make my own!! 😂
I know now all of y’all know the characters as well as others, but just do what you want…this is meant for fun!!
(and if you realize characters are missing, just know that these are the adult/teenage named/important characters that appear in Freedom’s Fire, not any of my other novels😜)
The characters are, from left to right:
$5: Riker, Leon, Leo, Fin, Aadelheide, Isaiah, Reuben, and Yosef
$4: Angelina, Jakob, Joshua, Ezekiel, Wolfgang, Iris, Jezyk, and Jennie
$2: Louisa, Ezra, Bruno, Aaron, and Wilhelm
$0 (freebies): Erich, Franz, Hans, Felix, Hilda, and Kurt
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Umm… Yes please!!! I love this idea so much!! 😝
M’kay, here we gooo…
Fin, Leo, Wolfgang, Jacob, Iris, Ezra andddd… Erich. (I don’t think that’s exactly $25, but whatever.)
(I am so gonna have to do this with my charries now… 😏)
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@esther-c I’m so happy you like it!!!! (i was inspired by a Marvel one I saw😂)
it’s close enough to 25 for me! XD I love all of your choices, btw😜
YES PLEASE!!!
I neeed it!!! 😍😍
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- Riker❤❤❤ You saw that coming
- Hans ❤❤❤
- Adelaide
- Isaiah
- Ezra (I personally know someone by this name)
- Wolfgang
I don’t think I’ll do this with my charries…I don’t think anyone would care…except Chase.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)I VERY VERY much would want to spend a day with Riker and Hans!
"You need French Toast."
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@rae EEEE, I love all of your choices!!! Those are some epic choices, and I am happy to see someone pick Hans 🩷 (the tragedy of his character is just…😭😭) and yes, I saw both Riker and Hans coming, haha, but that makes me happy, lol😂
I don’t think I’ll do this with my charries…I don’t think anyone would care…except Chase.
Excuse me?
I DEMAND ONE, THANK YOU
jkjk, just messing with you 😂
but I would like to see one from you🥰
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ikr? I wanna hang out with Riker so bad XD
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and I just wanna speak truth to Hans…shower him with love even tho he doesn’t deserve it (and I can’t help but think who he would have been if someone had done that in his youth🩷😭💔)
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lol, this seems fun!!
I guess just going off of the way they look, I’ll say…
Riker, Yosef, Erich, Jezyk, Ezra… and maaayyybbbeeee Wolfgang.
(I think that got to twenty? maybe a little less?)
Flaz: *yawns* Did the sun just come up? In the west?
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@grcr Nice choices 😉
I’m so happy everyone is having fun with this🩷🩷
@freedomwriter76
but I would like to see one from you🥰
I’ll think about it…It’ll probably be a no, so don’t get your hopes too high.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)@freedomwriter76
Weeeeeehhhh I love this
Leon and Adelaide (I wanted to give them more time together)
Jakob and Angelina
And then I want rueben for myself What?!! No I’m not setting up a three way date, that would be totally upsurd
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Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
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Okayyy! I’m copying Freedom, so you basically get to pick who you want to spend a day with. These are from different WIPs and I still don’t have as much as Freedom. (Does anyone really? 🤣) Sorry, I didn’t give a very good choice of freebies. XDD And yes, for those of you who noticed, I did change Easton’s face claim when I found out he looks better with glasses. 🤣
Characters:
$5 — Everton, Amidala, Amir, Hedieh, Hallie, Easton
$4 — Callista, Lukas, Skylar, Fynn
$3 — Dabir, Derek Len, Adrian, Dao
$2 — Destry, Ruben, Adalynn, Harlin
$0 — Kian, Asher, Malyk
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