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December 27, 2023 at 12:23 pm #171250Anonymous
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@smiley That scene is the BEST ššš©·
Steve at the endš¤£š
December 27, 2023 at 1:50 pm #171266@freedomwriter76
I came in writing the scene not sure what I was going to do and then I had the idea of Peter grabbing a chocalte which led to that whole chaotic scene LOL
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-ThorneDecember 27, 2023 at 1:52 pm #171267Also I’m texting on phone so please ignore errors
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-ThorneDecember 27, 2023 at 3:26 pm #171288Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley It’s perfect š
December 28, 2023 at 11:17 am #171385@freedomwriter76
Girl!!! I just found this…and it uhhh changed the way I saw Bucky
it’s kind of long
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-ThorneDecember 28, 2023 at 2:55 pm #171407Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley WOAH.
This changes everythingggggggggg
I will never see that movie the same again š
I can see where Bucky wasn’t a complete puppet tho, y’know? Like, I never really saw him as someone that was controlled ENTIRELY, y’know?
Mostly, but not entirely…he may not have understood that he was sparing Steve, but either way, this changes a lot XD
December 28, 2023 at 3:16 pm #171413@freedomwriter76
I know right?! XD
yeah, I kind of figured he had some control but still like… I never thought of it that way! LOL
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-ThorneJanuary 5, 2024 at 12:03 pm #172457@freedomwriter76
Okay so this is the first thing I’ve written in a while, and I don’t think it’s my best writing but I enjoyed it somewhat.
I still did cry a little
The church was small, then again Pietro didnāt have many friends or relatives. Wanda had obviously come, and a few other Sokovians whom Pietro had tried to help through the years.
The Avengers came, though Wanda knew they hated her, and she didnāt blame them.
Guilt was heavy on her, everything that happened had been her fault. How had she been so wrong?
She now stood alone in the church, staring at the casket. She begged she could go back and redo things, she wished she had never gotten these powers! Her brother was dead because of her, and he was never coming back.
She heard footsteps but she didnāt turn to look, she knew who it was.
āIām sorry,ā Was all Steve could think of to say. He couldnāt bring her brother back nor could he go back and make sure Ultron never got built.
āIām the guilty one, Johannesburg, Sokoviaā¦ they were both my fault, this was all my fault.ā Wanda wiped a tear away. āInnocent lives were taken cause of me.ā
āYou thought you were doing the best for your country,ā Steve argued, he refused to see her put all the guilt on her.
āI let that blind me, I didnāt feel anything when I put those thoughts into Bruce, nor did I care when I gave you guys those dreams. I felt nothing,ā
āAnd now?ā
āNow I feel like the only person who cared for me is in this casket.ā Wanda rested a hand on it.
āNobody hates you.ā
āReally? Cause I hate myself.ā Wanda turned to face Steve, showing him her stained red face from two hours of horrid sobs. āI donāt want to be the villain, I never wanted to be the villain, I just wantedā¦ I just wanted to make things right.ā
Wanda was shocked that she actually admitted that. She hated the coldness that came with everyone blaming her, she hated knowing they were right. She wondered if she had been the one to die, would anyone even come? Pietro would, only because he couldnāt think one ill thought of her but everyone elseā¦ they wouldnāt.
Steve stepped forward. āWanda, Ultron was everyoneās fault, this battle we all made mistakes, some of us knew better, and some of us honestly thought we were doing what was right. The blame isnāt on one person, and when an Avenger messes up, itās on all of us.ā
Wanda looked at Steve, skeptical yet something in his blue eyes showed he meant it.
At that moment another person entered the room, it was Zrinka. A Sokovian citizen.
Wanda walked away from Steve and over to her, she was happy to see someone of familiarity, but guilt came over her once again. āIām sorry, for everything.ā
Zrinka gave a moment of shock at the apology. āFor what?! That you lost your brother so I could have mine?ā
Zrinkaās little brother had been the one Clint and Pietro saved.
āI made mistakes,ā Wanda said, a deep pain coming with her words.
āYouāre not at court Wanda, youāre at your brotherās funeral. You guys made mistakes but it was always with Sokovia in mind.ā Zrinka paused and then stated with gratitude. āStark relief foundation has already come in, Sokoiva is looking better already, even with a giant hole in it.ā
āI take it I canāt hate Stark anymore?ā
āI suppose, but you also canāt hate yourself anymore.ā
āHow is Costel?ā Wanda asked changing the subject.
Zrinka smiled, she was no doubt still thankful for her brother being alive. āHeās good, but uh, well he blames himself for what happened to Pietro.ā
āTell him Pietro was going to do what he was going to do, he died a hero, and not many people can say that about their brother.ā
āAnd you?ā
Wanda hesitated. āI think Iāll never be a hero, but someone who every now and then did the right thing.ā
Zrinka gave a warm smile, setting her hand on Wandaās. āThen know youāll always be a hero in Sokovia and in my house.ā
Wanda was thankful for Zrinkaās words, and the fact that she cared enough to come. After saying their goodbyes, Wanda walked back over to Steve. Who had waited patiently this whole time.
āIāll try to do better now, after all now Iām wearing the name Avenger.ā She said, giving a faint smile to Steve.
āI have no doubt,ā
Wanda set her hands on the casket, closing her eyes with pain. āYou know I tried to see my worst fear, but it wouldnāt show me. Now I know what it is because Iām living it.ā
A deep sob escaped her throat. A want to feel her brotherās hand again, to feel his protective gaze on her or just to say he understood the guilt she felt. Wanda looked at Steve, anger, and guilt leaving her and being replaced by grief that no one could take away.
Now she was just a twin missing her other twin, she missed her brother.
Also, I saw this thing that pointed out that Wanda never used her telepathic powers after Age of Ultron which showed she was still holding guilt over everything that happened
which is what inspired me to write this
plus I really wanted Zrinka in a story since I thought it was so sad to see that she got her brother back at the price of Wanda losing hers
Excuse as I get mad at marvel again
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-ThorneJanuary 6, 2024 at 4:19 pm #172552@keilah-h @freedomwriter76
I have boards!!
also, I realized I’ve created a fanfic series lol
1# (I don’t have a name for it but it takes place right after Age of Ultron and the one where Pietro survives and stuff) I’ve written and posted some of the chapters to that one before
2-3# (Civil War, Infinity War, and Endgame but with Hannah and Pietro in it) haven’t written anything for this time frame lol
4# The rebuild (after endgame, with Jade, Michael, and Falon, also this book is where Violet is introduced) written a few chapters for this one
and now 5# (takes place about a year after 4# and this one includes the chocolate scene XD) working on scenes
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-ThorneJanuary 6, 2024 at 5:45 pm #172567Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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January 6, 2024 at 5:48 pm #172568@freedomwriter76
Yeah they are (also I made a bunch of boards including one for Bucky but photos aren’t working!!)
I knowwww and I’m sorry!!!!!!!!
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-ThorneJanuary 6, 2024 at 5:54 pm #172570Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley (ughhh, I hate it everytime it does thatš)
*sobs*
…although I can’t lie…I’m writing a Pietro scene right now too
hehehe
January 6, 2024 at 5:54 pm #172571@smiley wow sad story!
Very interesting though.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 6, 2024 at 5:55 pm #172572Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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well, a short story, I should say haha
January 6, 2024 at 6:03 pm #172573Thanks!! and yeah it is, it made me cry
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ā¦although I canāt lieā¦Iām writing a Pietro scene right now too
Oooooohhhhhhhhhhh
Perhaps I’m writing a fanfic scene right now…
also, did I mention to either of you that I watched Infinity War yesterday? when it got Wanda destroying Vision I might have been full on sobbing (and I’m not kidding)
it hit me even harder that day and then I found the scene of Wanda at Sword and not being able to feel Vision and OH MY WORD I WAS DYING!!!
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