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September 19, 2023 at 7:39 pm #156753
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings
Hey y’all
I’ve made some changes to a few of my stories
Diana… does anyone remember her? I introduced her to be Pietro’s love interest in my Pietro and Wanda fic
Well… as I learned more about Pietro and his personality, I suddenly felt that she wasn’t right for him
So she won’t be in that fic but instead filling a gap in another book, and it’s not a fanfic but…
Project Elites (more updates on her in the future)!!!! Obviously with some change in her background
Which leaves poor Pietro alone
But I have a new charrie that’s perfect
Hannah!!!!! (22)
Kind, smart, stubborn, resourceful, compassionate, snarky, and has a sense of humor
Hannah was just an ordinary girl working for Stark Industries, but when workers above her were making an immoral decision she decided to stand up for the side of right. In the middle of a heated debate between her and the managers, Maria happens to see her. She sees potential in the young girl and offers her a job beside her. Working as an assistant to the Avengers.
Hannah starts to find her place in the business and even befriends most of the Avengers, but when the battle in Sokovia happens, Maria leaves to help Nick Fury, leaving Hannah in charge of it all.
But things take a wonderful turn when she forms a bond with the new recruit, Pietro Maximoff.
Also… because of this change, I think the story of Pietro and Wanda will be rewritten, and both of my Pietro and Wanda short stories (the Civil War one and Christmas one) are cannon to this universe
Also… I found a perfect song for Broken Heroes (my Yelena and Avengers fic) No Man Is An Island, by Tenth Avenue North
That’s it… for now
I’d love to hear any ideas or thoughts on the updates
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneSeptember 20, 2023 at 11:00 am #156761@freedomwriter76
heyyy! so as far as your question about sam sacrificing himself… i think I would say something similar to Min, in that if Thor or Captain Marvel are there and could potentially survive, why make Sam do it? It might leave a reader frustrated over a pointless death.
but also agree that Bucky would so sad!! he’s already gone through so much and taking away another person from him would be horrible. 😭
and that scene! that was so good! but saaaad. girl, you’re putting bucky through it.
(but yes to Ryo and Morgan!)
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
September 20, 2023 at 11:01 am #156762Ooooooo! I like it! Hannah sounds wonderful for Pietro too!!!
I’m excited to hear more!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
September 20, 2023 at 11:06 am #156763Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision Thx for the input! 💗
i knowwwwww, poor boi 😭😭
(haha, ikr!? SOOOO cute!!!! 😍😍)
@smiley Love it!!! She sounds PERFECT for Pietro!! 😍September 21, 2023 at 5:25 pm #156859Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley @keilah-h @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings
I have another Fanfiction Short Story!!!!
I absolutely fell in love with this one too…and ahhh, y’allllllll, I just…..😍😍
The song “I Hope You Dance” by Lee Ann Womack helped inspire a lot of this, and just…I love writing these sweet short stories 💕💕
Here it is….Daybreak on the Horizon:
A crisp summer breeze blew.
He hefted a heavy bag of feed onto several other bags and maneuvered around a pack of sheep.
The African sun blared down, warming him entirely from head to toe.
“White Wolf! Bucky!”
He turned around just as small, thin arms wrapped around his waist, hugging him tight.
He’d been in Wakanda for a little more than a year…he owed everything to Wakanda, and the people there were amazing…but no one could beat Imani.
Bucky smiled from ear to ear and hugged the small, young Wakandan girl back. “Imani!”
“I missed you, Bucky! I had to go see Princess Shuri.”
Bucky’s smile faded.
Imani, whose right leg was paralyzed from the hip down was only able to walk thanks to several surgeries and even an implant in her leg, both of which Shuri handled.
Imani, only eight, already had sixteen surgeries.
“Bucky,” Imani looked up at him; she smiled, “can I feed the sheep?”
How could he ever refuse…especially looking at that adorable face?
Bucky smiled and nodded. “You sure can…come on, I’ll help you get some food to give them.”
He guided Imani in feeding the sheep, and though she spilled several handfuls by accident, seeing her happy face made it all worth it.
She was happy and Bucky was happy and even…peaceful.
Peace…still such a foreign word.
Imani finished feeding the sheep, and she smiled brightly up at Bucky. “The sheep aren’t hungry anymore, Bucky!”
“You did a great job, Imani-“
“Can we dance, Bucky…? I have to practice, Bucky! I’m going to be a dancer!”
Her dreams were so high, and yet she kept reaching…never giving up even when all seemed hopeless.
Bucky grabbed Imani’s left hand with his right, pulling her into a quick and gentle twirl.
Imani smiled from ear to ear, giggled, and danced as if she was meant to be a dancer ever since birth.
It didn’t matter that one of her legs didn’t work the same as everyone else’s…she was going to be a dancer, and nothing was going to stop her from getting there.
Bucky helped her dance for as long as she desired, so long that the sun began to set behind them.
Imani pulled out of the final twirl and smiled. “…Do you think I’ll be a dancer, Bucky?”
Bucky crouched in front of Imani, playfully tapping her nose. “I think you can do anything you put your mind to.”
Imani wrapped her arms around Bucky’s neck, and Bucky hugged her back, tight.
~*~
“You saved Imani’s life, you know…she could have died if she’d been in the ditch any longer. You saved her.”
Bucky shook his head. “No, I didn’t…her leg wouldn’t have been so weak if I hadn’t danced with her like she asked, and now…now…”
“White Wolf,” Shuri turned Bucky’s head; their eyes met, “it is not your fault. Imani’s right leg is already weak. It’s not anyone’s fault that she fell, and she’s alive because of you.”
Bucky looked away, unable to meet Shuri’s eyes for a second longer.
No, it was…it was his fault. Imani’s leg wouldn’t have been so weak if he’d just not danced with her.
“Bucky. Can you at least look at me?”
Silence fell.
Bucky felt a harsh jab in his left side. He cussed and turned to face Shuri. “Hey!”
“I got you to face me, didn’t I? Listen, you may not believe me, but Imani falling wasn’t your fault, and she’s alive only because of you. No one else was around, and if you hadn’t found her, she could have died of heat exhaustion. You saved Imani’s life.”
“…I ruined it.”
“White Wolf-“
“She’ll never be able to dance again, Shuri…she’ll never be able to follow her dreams, and all because of me.”
“Bucky…”
“Can you just finish tending to my shoulder? I don’t want to hear this right now.”
Shuri slowly nodded.
Bucky turned away as she tended to his shoulder. They had to remove practically all of his arm…it had taken months to recover, although Bucky had still recovered faster than most would thanks to his own enhanced healing abilities and the technology Wakanda possessed.
“There, I’m done.”
Bucky pulled and tightened the fabric he wore over his left side to hide the missing left arm and faced Shuri. “Thanks.”
“You’re welcome. Imani is okay, Bucky, and that’s more than enough…”
Bucky stood, his back to Shuri. His right fist clenched at his side, and he fought back tears. “‘More than enough’ isn’t going to take the place of her dream.”
~*~
Bucky slipped into days of numbness.
He cared for the sheep, he eat, he slept, he bathed, but the days blended together.
Patterns repeated…he felt nothing.
Life continued…Bucky broke.
He thought Wakanda could be a new path in life, and he was grateful they had helped get rid of his programming, but he had been so wrong.
How stupid of him to ever think that he could be more than the Monster Hydra created.
So many so many lives ruined…and Imani’s was one of them.
Numbness was bliss…at least he couldn’t feel the pain too much.
“Bucky! White Wolf! Bucky, I want to say Hi!”
Bucky blinked, sitting down on the grass beside his hut, a plate of untouched food beside him.
Crouched in front of him, Imani smiled brightly, showing her perfect white teeth. “Hi Bucky! What are you doing?”
“Imani!? Imani, what are you doing here?”
“I wanted to see you…I came to-“
“Imani, you shouldn’t be here…you shouldn’t be near me…”
“Why not?”
“I hurt you, Imani, I-“
Imani giggled. “No-o you didn’t, Bucky. I wanted to tell you that my Mommy and Princess Shuri told me that I can-“
“Imani,” Bucky closed his eyes, tight, “I don’t want to hurt you again…”
“But White Wolf, I’m going to dance!”
Bucky’s eyes shot open. “Imani, what? I-“
“Come watch, Bucky…I’m going to dance tonight! You have to come see, White Wolf!”
“Imani, I…”
Imani slowly stepped forward and sat down in Bucky’s lap. She wrapped her small arms around Bucky’s neck and smiled up at him. “Princess Shuri says you saved me, Bucky…”
Bucky looked away, unable to meet Imani’s gentle eyes full of unconditional, trusting love. “But Imani…dancing…”
“White Wolf,” Imani stood and turned Bucky’s head; she smiled, “you danced with me…I want to dance for you!”
“Imani…”
“White Wolf, I want to dance because of you!”
Bucky shook his head, tears flowed out of his eyes. “Imani, I-I don’t deserve that…”
“Mommy says I can dream,” Imani’s warm, small fingers rested on Bucky’s bearded cheeks, “so you can too, White Wolf…Mommy always says to dream.”
“Oh, Imani,” Bucky touched his forehead to Imani’s; he smiled, “what would I ever do without you? You go and dream, Imani…go and dream.”
~*~
The entire auditorium erupted in an echo of claps.
The special ballerina was only thirteen…yet carried the grace and perfection of someone twice her age.
Five years…five years since she had first begun to pursue her dream.
Bucky pushed past several onlookers, apologizing when he had to push past a few. He’d missed so much while in the Blip…then he had to help Sam stop the Flag Smashers.
He was glad for Sam’s friendship, and Bucky loved Sam’s sister with everything he had…but Bucky still regretted that he hadn’t gotten to see the talented ballerina sooner.
He reached the steps that led to the backstage. A man stepped forward, holding up a hand. “Only authorized personnel past this point.”
“I want to see the ballerina…I need to see Imani. I-I’m an old friend…I’m Bucky.”
The man’s eyes widened, and he opened the door slightly, motioning Bucky inside.
Bucky stepped backstage, and she immediately caught her eye.
Donned in a flowy, pristine white leotard and tutu, a device trailed down her right leg, allowing her to dance and walk…but it didn’t seem to faze her one bit.
Bucky stepped forward, unsure if she’d even know him anymore. “Imani?”
Her head turned.
Her big brown eyes lit up…a thirteen-year-old girl now instead of eight, but still Imani. “Bucky! White Wolf!”
She ran for him, and he for her.
Bucky lifted her off the floor, holding her close. “Oh Imani…your dreams…”
“They’re coming true, Bucky! I’m a dancer…Mommy was right, you can always dream! Are you dreaming, Bucky?”
Imani’s dreams, having once seemed impossible, came true. Bucky imagined his future, a future which he hoped would possibly include Sarah and the others he cared most about, and he slowly nodded. “Yes…I’m dreaming.”
Imani giggled and smiled, touching her forehead to Bucky’s. “…Daybreak is just on the horizon, Bucky…we’ll see all of our dreams come true.”
Bucky hugged her tight. “We will.”
September 21, 2023 at 6:33 pm #156867@freedomwriter76
Girl!!!
I just have to be honest, I don’t know why but I love Shuri and Bucky, I feel that Shuri would’ve annoyed him like a brother when he was in Wakanda
But this story was amazing!!!!!
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneSeptember 22, 2023 at 3:19 pm #156949@freedomwriter76
AW! So cute!
We need more scenes from Bucky’s time in Wakanda!!!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
September 25, 2023 at 3:27 pm #157176Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision @smiley Ahh, thank y’all so much!!!
Yesss, we need more of Bucky in general XD
September 26, 2023 at 12:14 pm #157207Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley @euodia-vision @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings
Welp…I have written another Marvel Fanfic Short Story (writing these is soooo much fun, y’all…like, It’s one of my favorite things now XD A lot easier than trying to write a full fanfic…🤦♀️🤣)
Anywhooooooo this one is supposed to take place in the time following FATWS…and y’all…I am in love with this right now 😍😍
Here it is!!!!
❤️ ‘A New Chapter’ ❤️
Wind blew. Leaves fluttered to the ground, coloring the grass in various, beautiful shades of orange, yellow, red, and brown.
Sunlight danced off the trees, illuminating the yard.
She stood on the porch watching her sons, pumpkin latte in hand.
Cass and AJ laughed as they raked together piles of leaves to jump into as happy as they could be.
But Sarah had to wipe tears from her eyes.
So many years, and it still hurt.
He had left for the heavens ten years ago. Cass was only two and AJ was only a baby.
Sarah set down her latte, forcing down the pain.
October marked ten years since her husband’s death, and it still hurt as if it was yesterday.
She tried to stay positive and happy, for Cass and AJ’s sakes, but it was so hard…especially in October.
Cass and AJ leapt into a pile of leaves, laughing. They came out of the pile, messing with each other and pretend fighting when Cass looked up and gasped. “Uncle Sam!”
Sure enough, Sarah’s older brother was coming down up the walkway towards the house.
Cass leapt to his feet and chased after his uncle.
“Hey, wait!” AJ called, chasing after his brother.
The two of them enveloped Sam in a tight hug, and Sam reached down, slightly bending over, to hug both of them back.
Sarah left her drink on the railing of the porch and went to greet her brother. Sam stood and faced her with a smile as she reached him, and he enveloped her in a firm yet soft older brother hug.
Sam smiled. “How are you doing, Sarah?”
“As well as I can,” Sarah glanced at all of the trees, “fall is finally here. I didn’t know you were coming…the house is barely clean.”
“Your house is always clean.”
Sarah scoffed. “What have I told you about coming over without telling me?”
“I thought I’d surprise you.” Sam smiled. “Oh, and Cass, AJ, I brought another surprise for you.”
AJ turned, eyes wide. “What!? What surprise, Sam!?”
“This one.”
Cass and AJ turned around, fast, just as both of them were lifted off the ground by Bucky.
Cass laughed. “Bucky!”
Bucky laughed and set both boys down. “Surprise…I’m the surprise. Oh, and Sam brought a cake too for a special someone.”
AJ gasped. “My birthday!”
Sam grinned and picked up a cake, one which Sarah had no clue where he had put when he hugged Cass and AJ, and nodded. “Yep…I think someone’s tenth birthday is tomorrow.”
AJ hugged Sam, and Sarah smiled gently.
AJ’s birthday was tomorrow, and she needed to be sure everything was ready for his party.
~*~
Sarah pulled her small brown coat tighter around her shoulders, stepping outside into the chilly fall air.
Everyone was inside celebrating AJ’s tenth birthday, and she knew she was supposed to be inside, but she just couldn’t…not at the minute.
AJ’s birthday was wonderful, and she couldn’t be more thankful for all of the people that came to celebrate her precious son, but it also meant that it was only two weeks before it would mark her husband’s death.
Tears stung her eyes, and for once, knowing she was alone, Sarah let them fall.
Pain was easy to mask for a while, but she couldn’t do it forever.
“Sarah?”
She turned around instantly, wiping tears from her eyes.
Bucky stepped forward; his eyebrows furrowed in concern. “Hey…what’s wrong? I came out to get some fresh air, and I saw-“
“I’m fine, I should get back inside. AJ’s birthday is special, and I should serve all of the guests-“
“Sarah, wait,” Bucky laid a gentle hand on her arm; Sarah looked up at him, “are you really okay?”
Slowly, Sarah shook her head. “No…I’m not. Only two weeks, and it will be ten years…ten years…” She trailed off and clenched her fists.
Bucky’s eyes filled with care and compassion…even understanding, and Sarah met his blue eyes with her dark brown.
He understood.
Maybe not completely, but he understood.
Bucky had lost…everything.
Sarah had heard the story.
“…Ten years since my husband died. AJ was still a two-week-old newborn, and my husband…h-he lost his life, and I…I…”
‘Lost my hope of a beautiful, love filled life,’ her heart wanted to say, but didn’t.
“Lost your hope of a beautiful life with a husband and kids that you loved? You still have the kids…but you lost the hope of having someone to love…lost the hope of ever being whole again.”
Sarah looked at him, tears slightly blurring her vision. She had lost her hope…her hope of being loved, her hope of having a second half of her again.
She was afraid to love, knowing that love could bring so much pain.
Her hope was lost.
Her heart was shattered.
But maybe it was time to start a new chapter of her story.
A smile found it’s way to Sarah’s face. “Take my hand.”
Bucky did so.
Cold metal chilled and warmed Sarah’s fingers at the same time. Right hand holding Bucky’s left, Sarah rose her left hand to rest on Bucky’s cheek. “You lost so much too…you lost yourself.”
Slowly, Bucky nodded. “I-I did.” He whispered, voice slightly cracking…vulnerable.
“…Then maybe it’s time we both open up a new chapter.”
Bucky’s hand came out of hers, and both of his hands rested on her cheeks.
Sarah rested both hands on his neck.
They both leaned towards each other, both broken and vulnerable.
Their lips met, full of joy, passion, and hope for a new and better future.
Sarah wrapped her arms around Bucky and leaned against his protective frame, looking up at him with a small smile. “A new chapter?”
Bucky planted a kiss to her forehead.
“A new chapter.”
September 26, 2023 at 12:30 pm #157209@freedomwriter76
Girl!!! You have to stop making me love Bucky so much!!!!!!!! XD XD XD
Also to be honest your making me rethink some things XD
Bucky and Sarah, it’s still not my favorite ship to be honest, but they are sweet
I kind of always thought of Bucky as tortured and broken, but I never really thought about how he also lost his parents and siblings when he came out of the ice
And now I feel like I haven’t given him justice
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneSeptember 26, 2023 at 12:32 pm #157210Also I’m reminded of a certain ship… that I’ve kind of forgotten about
Scarlet-Winter (aka Bucky and Wanda) XD
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneSeptember 26, 2023 at 12:47 pm #157211Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley But you should love Bucky!!!! XD
*maniacal laugh*
Ikr??? My BFF is a HUGE fan of Bucky and Sarah…and uhhhh, I’m starting to see why…😏🥰🥰XD
Yessss, poor boi!!! 🥺😭 he lost so much…😭😭❤️😭😭
Yesssss…Bucky and Wanda is kinda cute…
WinterWidow was an actual canon ship in the comics…hehe…(Bucky&Nat)
Steve was mostly shipped with Sharon Carter in the comics…and uh…I don’t like it 🤣🤣
September 26, 2023 at 1:07 pm #157212@freedomwriter76
WinterWidow was an actual canon ship in the comics…hehe…(Bucky&Nat)
Hmm… I don’t have a problem with the ship, I just can’t find the chemistry
Steve was mostly shipped with Sharon Carter in the comics…and uh…I don’t like it 🤣🤣
Oh my word yes!!! It was just so weird, I get the whole time thing, but no one should fall in love with their first love’s niece
that’s just so weird
Steve and Nat are my favs, their flirting is wonderful in Captain America Winter Soldier, and how their relationship grows is just wonderful
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneSeptember 26, 2023 at 2:10 pm #157215@freedomwriter76
Awwwww, that was so sweeeeet!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
September 26, 2023 at 2:30 pm #157220Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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