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September 15, 2023 at 8:59 pm #156543
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings
I was inspired by Pinterest and Freedom’s wonderful story to write a fic about Wanda and Pietro celebrating Christmas!!
Now you have two options for reading this
One: you can pretend that Pietro’s lives and that this is just a sweet story that will never end
Two: You can cry
I did option two
Wanda walked through the crowded streets. Pietro ran at a normal pace, (which he didnât do often) giving food and coats to the people. Wanda had made her brother promise that none of the stuff would be stolen, which he did.
They didnât have much money but Hydra took care of them, meaning that they could use the extra money to help the people of Sokovia.
âEveryone is enjoying their gifts,â Wanda stated as Pietro caught up to her.
âYes, Iâm like Santa to them,â
âAnd so very humble about it too,â Wanda grinned at her brother, stopping to give a basket of food to another family.
âStark Industries has one goal, and thatâs to make the improvements today, to help the world of tomorrow,â
Wanda and Pietro stopped in front of a tiny radio, hearing the voice of Pepper Potts giving a speech.
âYes if tomorrow is war,â Wanda said, looking at her brother.
Pietro didnât move, his feet felt planted t the ground, thoughts and memories coming back. Stark, that word could trigger so many terrible memories.
âWanda!â Pietro screamed, pulling his sister under the bed.
The two looked up as a second shell hit, a red dot blinking, yet it didnât go off but instead lay there, right in front of them. The word Stark was painted in white on it.
âPietro!â Wandaâs accent echoed through Pietroâs head until he finally looked at her.
âIâm sorry what did you say?â
âDid it happen again?â Wanda set her hand on her brotherâs shoulder.
âWe there, starring at that bomb,â
âBut we arenât there, weâre right here, celebrating the holidays,â Wanda stated.
Pietro smiled at his sister, shaking off the pain, they could handle Stark later, right now they had better things to do.
Besides, she preferred to ignore the flashbacks, to ignore the pain and trauma.
âIâll beat you there,â Pietro took off running.
Wanda didnât want to run, she never ran, instead, she quickened her walking pace, letting her brother beat her.
She preferred the time to think anyway. She couldnât help but look around the city, tired and starving people everywhere. Her brother wanted revenge, and she did too, but they needed more.
Perhaps killing Stark wasnât enough, it would satisfy them for a while, but it wouldnât help Sokovia or any other country.
Sokovia was a large country, filled with starving and thirsty people, organizations would say theyâd help, and theyâd give them food but never a way to get more, so when they left, the country went back to ruin.
Pietro and Wanda didnât have enough money to feed all the people on their block, let alone a whole country.
But every December they tried to give gifts to everyone, coats, toys, and food. Whatever they could manage.
Pietro waited up for Wanda before opening the door. âWhat happened to racing,â
âThe fact that I donât like to run,â
Pietro rolled his eyes and then opened the building door. Wanda and Pietro both stepped inside, closing the door behind them. The hustling city noise faded and all they could hear was a faint Christmas song. It seemed so very peaceful and lovely, but then rumbling down the stairs, footsteps broke the silence, and the twins shared a smile.
Kids cascaded into the room, all excited to see the two, Pietro didnât waste any time before carrying kids around on his back.
Wanda smiled at her brother, who truly had as much energy as all of the kids here in the orphanage. All of the kids were clearly starving, looking bony and worn, but that didnât seem to stop their energy. I suppose they were used to not having much to eat.
In a matter of minutes, Pietro had them all playing a game of tag, every now and then Pietro would dart and a hint of his abilities would show, but not enough for any of the kids to really notice.
Wanda stood smiling at the kids, but she wasnât certain where she was needed.
Suddenly a little girl came up beside Wanda, her brown hair covering most of her face.
Wanda knelt down to be the same height as the girl, smiling. âAnd who are you?â
âOlivia,â The girl said in a quiet whisper.
Wanda smiled, tucking the girlâs beautiful brown hair behind her ear. âWell Olivia, Iâm Wanda, and itâs nice to meet you,â
Olivia gave a faint smile.
âAre you new?â
Olivia nodded, her face falling. âMy Mommy and Daddy were taken by a fire in our apartment,â
Wanda looked into the girlâs green eyes, seeing the pain and sorrow this girl had felt. It felt so familiar to her, like not so long ago she had been the same way.
Pietro stopped mid-run to look at his sister in the corner of the room, he could see Wandaâs lips tremble. He continued to watch, not paying much attention to the game, but instead to the little girl and his sister.
âI understand, I lost my Mommy and Daddy too,â Wanda gave the girl a bright smile. âBut I wasnât alone,â Wanda shot a glance at her brother. âAnd neither are you,â
Oliviaâs face lit up a little, smiling at Wanda.
âPietro! What do you think of the tree?â David asked running up beside Pietro.
Pietro smiled at his sister and then looked at the tree. âIâd say itâs awesome, only itâs missing something,â
âWhat?â Olivia asked, turning her attention to Pietro.
âThe presents under the tree of course,â Pietro announced, running out of the room, and coming back with a giant bag. He turned to Wanda. âSee donât I look like Santa,â
âJust hand out the gifts, Mr. Clause,â
Pietro did as he was told and began to give something to everyone, dolls, mits, and plenty more.
Olivia ran over to Wanda, her arms tucked around her gift, which she proceeded to hold up to Wanda. âLook I got a doll!â
âSheâs beautiful, whatâs her name?â
Olivia gave held the doll tight. âSarah, the same as my Motherâs name,â
âThatâs a perfect name,â Wanda turned to watch as her brother gave Charles a Baseball.
âTo practice those skills of yours,â Pietro winked at Charles.
âJust not around lamps,â Wanda instructed.
Pietro set the empty bag down, as all of the kids began to play with their toys.
He walked over to Wanda, his eyes meeting his sisterâs. âYou werenât alone?â
Wanda rolled her eyes but then gave a sincere smile. âI lost a lot that day, but not everything,â
âI suppose we did overcome starvation, thirst, and poverty to be where we are,â
âAnd weâre still together,â Wanda looked at all the smiling kids, and then back at her brother. âOur fight isnât over, it has just begun,â
âWeâll fight together too,â
Wanda nodded, smiling at her brother. She then walked away, coming back with a hoodie. It was dark gray with a white pattern on the sleeves.
âHow did you get this?â
âI saved some money,â Wanda stated. âI know you want to help everyone, but I thought you needed a gift too,â
Pietro gave a soft smile to his sister, as one of the kids pressed play on the DVD player.
An old Christmas movie began to play, and everyone gathered to watch.
Wanda loved sitcoms and movies, and the happy endings were wonderful.
That was her dream, to someday have a simple life, with a husband and kids. It all sounded perfect to her.
Pietro slipped on his new sweatshirt and then smirked at Wanda. âIt fits perfectly,â
Wanda leaned her head on her brotherâs shoulder and smiled. âOf course it does, Iâm just perfect like that,â
Pietro chuckled, smiling at his sister.
Theyâd fight together, forever.
Do me a favorâŠ. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneSeptember 15, 2023 at 9:03 pm #156544I’m not even thinking about those options. I WILL BE HAPPY
>:(
That was so sweet and sad though!! The poor twins đ
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 16, 2023 at 10:16 am #156562ARGHHHHH
MARVEL! WE NEEDED TO SEE THIS IN THE MOVIES đđđ
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
September 16, 2023 at 4:34 pm #156574@smiley Aww that was so sweet!!
“What happened to racing?”
“I don’t like to run.”
This is so totally me and my brother….
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 16, 2023 at 9:00 pm #156596Probably best that way
I of course had to read it the sad way… I always do XD
Thanks!!
There’s a deleted scene AOU where Pietro is handing out stuff to some Sokovians and that was some big inspiration for it
Totally recommend watching it XD
I’m still mad that Marvel deleted a few scenes of Wanda and Pietro from AOU
Thanks
This is so totally me and my brotherâŠ.
Yeah, but I’m usually the one suggesting to race
Do me a favorâŠ. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneSeptember 17, 2023 at 3:55 pm #156631@smiley lol so you’re the opposite then. I don’t care about racing.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 18, 2023 at 12:01 pm #156672Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h @euodia-vision Ahh, thx y’all!!! đđđ
@smiley Ahhh, I love the Wanda/Pietro Christmas thing!!! đđđđđđ but also…đđAlso, love those chapters…but YELENA, BE NICE TO THE BUCKY BOI!!!! He’s already been through so muchđ„đ
September 18, 2023 at 12:19 pm #156673Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @smiley
Sooooo….
I need y’all’s input đ
In my 6-fanfic series, the 5th fic involved a very powerful villain who, to complete his mission, opens up a wormhole-like thing that could grow big enough to engulf the entire universe if it isn’t stopped.
The hole engulfs the villain (Mind), and the Avengers are left with only one option:Â Someone leaping into the hole to destroy the core Mind used
HOWEVER, whoever does this…because of the power of the hole…
will have to sacrifice themself for everyone else
I need y’all’s opinion, because the one I’m considering to make the Heroic sacrifice is none other than….Sam Wilson, who is Captain America at this point.
His reasoning is that he doesn’t have a wife/kids and he can quickly fly in and destroy the core in the narrow timeframe they have to destroy it. He would thus make the heroic sacrifice…and leave the Captain America mantel to Bucky.
but uhhhhh…anyone have any thoughts on that?
i know it’s sad…đđđ„đbut do y’all think it could work? đ
September 18, 2023 at 12:41 pm #156675@freedomwriter76
Really cool concept! I can see why you’re asking for advice lol…
I think it could work. I don’t feel particularly attached to Sam at all (I think because he doesn’t have a solo series) so I could care less whether it’s him or not đđđ ok but his sis would be devastated đ
With it needing to be somebody that can fly… yeah it does make sense for it to be him.
Ok but idea here…
Both Thor and Captain Marvel (could include bruce as hulk) have the capacity to survive things the others cannot. Especially Captain Marvel, she’s like crazy strong. so you might need a reason for them to not be there in order for it to go to Sam, or of course maybe it’s so deadly not even they could survive it. If you wanted Sam to survive, maybe he jumps it to destroy it them somebody else who can fly (thor or captain marvel) rescues him right before he dies.
Or… I know you might want him to die because sacrifices are sad XD if you want it to be a sacrifice, I think it should be Sam or like is peter quill here? That would be interesting and he might do it to redeem himself from the events of infinity war.
Also boy, Bucky’s had some life here, his friend became cap, they were on the ice for a long time, he becomes the winter soldier, and fights cap, cap dies, sam becomes cap, sam sacrifices himself… now he’s cap… like the poor guy đ I guess he can take it ;( he’s losing all his friends over here đ
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 18, 2023 at 12:44 pm #156677Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings Thanks for all of your input!! Really gives me some things to think about! đ
September 18, 2023 at 2:51 pm #156686@freedomwriter76 yeah, idk if Bucky could handle that lol, nor Sam’s sister. Min made a point, Captain Marvel and Thor both also have the ability to fly and are far tougher, so if you really want Sam to do it, you’ll have to give a reason for the two of them to be either not there or incapacitated.
@mineralizedwritings noooo not Peter! Not the character that made me like Marvel!!I’m just kidding it would actually be an interesting ending. Sad, but….interesting
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 19, 2023 at 10:27 am #156704Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h đ€Hmmm…idk, I’m still thinking on it. I meannnn, Steve is still around, so Bucky would be okay…but idk, we’ll see
September 19, 2023 at 11:36 am #156705Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h @smiley @mineralizedwritings @euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6
Here’s a couple scenes from the 5th fanfic for y’all!!!!!!
Bucky tho…đ
Peggy wiped her hands on her apron and cupped them around her mouth. âNatalie, Anthony, Ryo, I made brownies!â
Quick and heavy footsteps sounded, and all three of Peggyâs kids were in the kitchen. Peggy laughed. âOkayâŠokayâŠyou three must have been hungry or something!â
âYour brownies are the best!â Anthony cried, taking one from the plate Peggy had already prepared.
âIâd agree,â Steve suddenly stepped into the room, wrapping one arm around Peggy and grabbing a brownie, âbut nothing can be as sweet as your Mom in general.â
Peggy lightly smacked Steve in the side. âOh, you.â
Natalie giggled, grabbing a brownie for herself.
Ryo took a bite out of his brownie, turning to face Steve. âHey Dad, can I go with my friends to the movies tonight? We wanted to see the new Star Wars movie.â
Steve swallowed a bite of brownie and nodded, releasing Peggy. âI donât see why not. Whoâs gonna take you?â
âLandon is going to drive. His brother Jake and his sister Kylie are going too, and I also invited Morgan to come.â
Peggy faced Ryo with a teasing smile. She tsked. âIs this the Morgan Stark I know?â
Ryo blushed and turned away, eating away at his brownie.
Peggy shared a knowing look with Steve. Steve chuckled and pulled some cash out of his pocket. âHere Ryo, you can buy yours and Morganâs tickets.â
Ryo smiled. âThank you so much, DadâŠthis means a lot.â
Peggy heard her phone ring, and she picked it up off the kitchen counter. Oh, it was Madelene!
Peggy answered. âHello? Madelene, how are you-?â
âOh PeggyâŠMason broke his arm, and-and Bucky isnât here so the car isnât here, and-and we couldnât all get into the ambulance, and-and, oh Peggy, I canât get to the hospital to take care of Mason!â Madelene sobbed, seemingly on the brink of collapse.
âOh, MadeleneâŠdonât cry, oh, please donât cryâŠMason will be okay, I promise.â
âI have no way of getting to him Peggy!â
âI knowâŠoh, I know, hang on Madelene, give me a second.â Peggy turned to Steve and gave him the brief version of the situation.
Steve finished off his brownie and picked up his leather jacket off the back of one of the kitchen chairs. âTell her Iâm on my way.â
Peggy nodded and put her ear back up to the phone. âMadeleneâŠMadelene, hey, take in deep breathsâŠSteve is on his way to take you and the other kids to the Hospital, okay? Yes, yesâŠjust hang tight, oh, and make sure you have everything for the babyâŠyes, yes, everythingâs going to be okayâŠSteve will be there soon, I promise.â
~*~
His boots echoed on the polished linoleum floors.
Reaching the room he needed, Bucky slammed the door open. âIâm here.â
Sitting in bed with a blue cast on his right arm, Masonâs blue eyes lit up. âDaddy!â
Bucky crossed the room, taking Mason into his arms. âHey buddy, how are you feeling?â
Masonâs lower lip jutted out. He held up his cast. âI donât like it, Daddy.â
âI know, but you gotta wear it for a whileâŠcome on buddy, how about you lay down for a little bit?â
Bucky helped his five-year-old son lay down. Mason yawned, and his eyes slowly closed.
âTook you long enough to get here.â
Bucky turned around to face his wife, who leaned against the wall close to the hospital room door. Bucky began to walk towards her. âI tried to get here sooner, but the mission-â
âOh, donât make excuses. Since when did missions become more important than your family?â
âMadelene, come on, missions arenât more important-â
âYou didnât even answer your phone. I could have been dying and you wouldnât have cared.â
Bucky wrapped his arms around his wife. âMadeleneâŠâ
Madelene pulled out of his embrace. âDonât make excuses, BuckyâŠI canât hear excuses right now.â
âMadelene, come on, at least I tried-â
The door opened and the doctor stepped inside. The man smiled. âI apologizeâŠam I interrupting something?â
Madelene turned around with a smile. She shook her head. âNot at all. Whatâs the reportâŠare we able to take Mason home?â
The man smiled and nodded. âYes, Mrs. Barnes, but I will recommend keeping a child-safe pain medication on hand, which I have already written a prescription for and will have my nurse give to you for whenever Mason is feeling some pain. It will make him sleepy, however, so please keep that in mind. I will see Mason again in five weeks to remove the cast.â
Madelene thanked the doctor, and when the nurse came in, she took the bottle of medicine with a warm tone and an even warmer smile.
She slipped the medicine into her purse and went to Mason, gently picking him up and settling him on her hip, his head laid on her shoulder. Madelene walked past Bucky. âWe should get Mason home.â
Bucky followed after his wife. âMadelene, I-â
âThis isnât the place.â Madelene interrupted, voice hard.
Bucky followed Madelene downstairs and into the waiting room, where their other kids and Steveâs family, minus Ryo, waited.
Peggy stood the second they entered the room. âHowâs Mason? Is he alright?â
âHe has to come back in five weeks to get the cast removed,â Madelene rubbed Masonâs back and smiled softly, âbut heâs okayâŠthe doctor gave us some pain medicine for him.â
Peggy smiled gently, eyes on Mason. âPoor baby.â
Branson rushed to Madelene, trying to stretch to see his twin brother. âMama, I wanna see Mason!â
Madelene pressed a finger to her lips. âShh, heâs sleeping, Branson. You need to be quietâŠweâre going home, baby.â
âI wanted to stay with Anthony, Mama-â
âWe need to get home, darlingâŠnot tonight, okay? Maybe later.â
Bransonâs lower lip jutted out in a pout. âBut MamaâŠâ
âHey, what Mama says goes, okay? We should probably all get plenty of rest tonight, okay?â Bucky said to Branson, somewhat roughly, although he didnât mean to sound that way.
âOh, so now I and the kids matter.â Madelene muttered.
âMadelene,â Peggy scooped Charlotte into her arms, âhow about I help you get the kids in the car while Bucky makes sure Mason is completely checked out of the hospital?â
Madelene nodded and faked a smile. âThank you, Iâd really appreciate it.â
Peggy turned to face her own kids. âAnthony, Natalie, come along. Branson, take your mamaâs free hand,â Peggy picked up Graceâs baby carrier, âand Iâll get Charlotte and Grace.â
Bucky handed Madelene the car keys, and the two women and the six kids disappeared out the hospital doors. Bucky went to the counter to make sure everything was settled, which took several minutes.
Only when he exited out the doors did he realize Steve hadnât left. âWhat do you want?â
âWhatâs with you and Madelene, Buck?â
âWhatâs with what? Nothingâs wrong-â
âYeah, donât lie to me. You may think youâre a good liar, but youâre not.â
Bucky smirked, walking out into the parking lot. âBetter than you.â
âYeah, I can tell youâre trying to avoid the question. Whatâs between you and Madelene, Bucky?â
âNothing. Bug off.â
Steve grabbed Buckyâs arm and turned him around, making the two best friends face each other. âBucky, donât lie to me.â
âCan you just leave me alone? I donât want to talk-â
âItâs because you didnât show up immediately, isnât it? You were on a mission with Sam and the others, and you didnât get hereâŠand Madelene didnât take it the right way.â
Bucky shoved Steve away. âStay out of my business. I can handle this myself, Steve, so stay out of it.â
Steve grabbed Buckyâs arm and pulled him back. âI donât think weâre done here. Bucky, can you just talk to me?â
âNo.â Bucky retorted, and he pulled away once more.
He walked away, and finally, Steve didnât try to pull him back.
Bucky hurt MadeleneâŠagain.
He failed his familyâŠagain.
Maybe he really was nothing more than the monster Hydra created.
September 19, 2023 at 12:01 pm #156707@freedomwriter76
Wow, you’re laying it on thick for Bucky!! Poor boy
and Ryo and Morgan… *smiles* they’re perfect
Honestly I’m not emotionally attached to Sam, but his poor sister
Let’s see, we have Shuri, Yelena, and Wanda all victims to losing their siblings
And now we’re adding Sarah to the mix, poor girl
Which reminds me, have you seen the second black panther?
Do me a favorâŠ. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneSeptember 19, 2023 at 12:15 pm #156710@freedomwriter76
Man talk about communication issues đđđ
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