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September 14, 2023 at 7:03 pm #156429
@freedomwriter76
k I just read the ship list…
Woah there…
XD I could never see Steve with Wanda 🤣😂😂
You do you girl XD I mean Ig it could be cute, I’ve just seen so many scenes with her and vision my brain just says NO
Bucky and Yelena is really interesting because she’s got such a strong personality, Bucky seems to have a softer personally to me but it’s probably just that he’s become timid.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 14, 2023 at 7:21 pm #156432Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralized my pfp is actually Bucky 😂
haha…I get it…I’ve done another fanfic with Steve/Wanda before, lol…and I’ve become attached to it for AUs XD Idk tho (and nobody attack me for this, ok? xD), I find Wanda/Vision a little…odd 😅
Yesss, Yelena/Bucky is an interesting one…with the MCU, I’m either shipping Bucky with Yelena or Sarah…not sure which one I like better yet 😉
September 14, 2023 at 7:21 pm #156433Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings got your tag wrong somehow 😅 😛
September 14, 2023 at 7:35 pm #156440@freedomwriter76
I totally get wanda and vision seeming a little odd. I think because he is played by a real person, it doesn’t freak me out. They actually have to add the uncanny valley affect in post to make him look less human. But story wise, yeah I would never write something like that, I get it.
LOL it’s Bucky eating a plum! XD
He looked so pretty I couldn’t recognize him 😂🤣
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September 14, 2023 at 7:42 pm #156442Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings Yeahhhh, it’s not like I hate it or anything, and them being in love is fine I guess…but having a family is where I think it gets weird even if their kids ARE adopted 😅
It is!!! (while reading!! 😍) XD
ikr? xD
September 14, 2023 at 9:02 pm #156453@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
I see a Marvel conversation…
I totally get Wanda and Vision being a little odd, but I just love them a lot, to be honest
I think Marvel did a good job of making him seem less robot and more human
also I love the way they describe them, Wanda being chaos (her emotions, powers, and really just her XD) Vision being order
so together their order and chaos, which I think shows when she loses Vision because she’s just chaos after that
also… to be honest the fact that Vision bought her a property in the suburbs to build a home on because he knew her dream was to live a simple life is just too sweet… and then it’s just terribly sad
But again I totally get why it can seem weird, and I suppose sometimes it is weird to me, but Vision treats Wanda well and that’s enough for me
Also Freedom, I really love the profile pic too XD the poor boy just wanted plums XD
And y’all know how much I love Yelena and Bucky
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-ThorneSeptember 14, 2023 at 11:27 pm #156473@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision
I have two more chapters of Broken Heroes!!
And to the Bucky fans, (I mean you Freedom) I’m sorry that Yelena is hurting Bucky, but I promise everything will work out in the end
Chapter 6
Bucky walked into the room, where he found Yelena looking through files. She looked stressed and panicked.
“Why won’t you just rest?”
“I can’t, I have to figure out who that girl was,” Yelena stated.
“And all of these people are…?”
“People I’ve wronged,” Yelena showed a hint of guilt but she shook it off, changing the subject. “You should make the shield sharper, it would be more effective,”
Bucky took a few steps closer. “That’s not the goal of it,”
“Oh come on, the winter soldier in you loves it,” Yelena continued to look through the screen. “You were a legend to us soldiers, so cool and impressive,”
“I’m no longer the winter soldier,”
Yelena shook her head with a smirk. “And I’m no longer a widow,”
“You aren’t,”
Yelena turned to face Bucky. “Who do think is fighting on missions, are you really naive enough to think that you’re still 1942 James? Like you can just erase the winter soldier, you can’t. Believe me.” Yelena swallowed. “My sister tried,”
“You’re sister was a hero, and so are you,” Bucky stated, not showing a hint of doubt.
“Look at this list of people, these are all people who I hurt,” Yelena scrolled through the names.
“Bucky, Sam wants you,” Wanda said interrupting the conversation, She had been listening in, and now felt like a good time to interrupt.
“Okay,” Bucky nodded at Wanda and then turned to Yelena. “You’re more than your past,”
“We will always be what the red room and hydra made us,” Yelena stated coldly.
Bucky looked at her, he was trying to not let what she said get to him, but it was hard. It was hard to still be told he couldn’t move on from his past.
Bucky left the room, giving a faint smile to Wanda.
“You’re not being fair to him,” Wanda walked over to Yelena. “Bucky has worked hard to get away from the winter soldier,”
“I was just being honest with him,” Yelena leaned against the table, facing Wanda.
“How are you?”
Yelena swallowed, knowing what Wanda was getting at. “Fine,”
“Funny, I remember saying the same thing,” Wanda crossed her arms. “How are you really?”
Yelena looked up at Wanda with tear-filled eyes. “I feel that Nat is the only one who could possibly love me and still know my past,”
“I get it, but she’s not, believe me,” Wanda looked at the screen. “Why don’t you talk to Bucky, he’d understand, better than most.”
Yelena raised an eyebrow at Wanda. “And when did you turn into Cupid- in fact, when did you and Clint turn into the matchmakers?”
“We’re just trying to help, and uh… in my experience, life doesn’t wait for you,”
“Mom, Clint’s here,” Billy stated, entering the room.
Yelena gave a faint smile to the boy and then gave a skeptical look to Wanda. “Why is Clint here?”
“He came to drop some things off,” Wanda shrugged, as she and Billy left the room.
“I’ll be out in one second,” Yelena watched the door closed and then went back to searching through her records. None of these people fit the description or were capable of being there, but Yelena stopped at one mission.
It was a usual target mission, only the target had a daughter, Jayla. Yelena gave it some thought, She hadn’t actually seen what happened to the girl, but yet something about the whole mission had always bothered her.
This Jayla might be of some importance to her.
Chapter 7
Jayla screamed as they grabbed her, This had happened so fast, Mommy was gone and now these strangers were taking her away.
“I want to go home!” Jayla continued to kick, the rain trickling down her face. “I want to go home-”
Jayla’s voice fell to a tired and breathless whisper. “I want my Mommy…”
Jayla would never call her mother a hero, or a noble person. But in her younger mind, the person who had raised her had just been ripped away from her in a matter of seconds.
From there she was taken to the red room and taught to be a soldier, and she did well in the cruel environment. Then Natasha freed a lot of them, and from there the widows split up, helping the other widows.
Jayla had finally been freed, but she hadn’t been the only widow who had been hurt by the so-called heroes. Some lost their parents in Sokovia, some by weapons made by Stark, and others at the hands of Yelena and Natasha.
Jayla would make them all pay, that was her job now, well that and being a ballet instructor.
Which was where she was now, girls twirled around the room. All smiling, happy to be here, it reminded Jayla of her ballet lessons, it hadn’t been as enjoyable.
“Legs high, legs high,” Jayla instructed walking around the room.
Jayla turned to the studio entrance, Klara standing at the entrance.
“Alright girls, good job today,” Jayla saw all the girls out, except one who was still practicing her routine. “That includes you, Anna,”
Anna came out of her needle to look at Jayla. “I just want to get it right.”
“You did great today, you should be proud, but you also have to rest,”
Anna nodded, walking over to her duffel bag.
“Do you need a ride?”
“Uh… no my parents will be here shortly,” Anna didn’t sound very convincing.
“Alright…” Jayla watched Anna leave and then turned to Klara, who had kept to the shadows the whole time.
“Did he talk?”
Klara crossed her arms. “After sneaking into that prison and everything, he still refused to talk, Zemo is stubborn,”
“We’re helping his cause,” Jayla sighed, beginning to sweep the room.
“He says he’s done with the cause, he doesn’t think we’re doing the right thing,”
“Traitor…” Jayla mumbled. “Is there any other information?”
“Yeah… that girl you hit, was Kata Bishop, and now all of them are hiding out at the Avengers compound,”
“We’ll draw them out, I have ideas,” Jayla gave a clever smile.
“What if Zemo didn’t talk because he’s scared of the Avengers?” Klara asked, showing a hint of fear.
“Then I guess we’re braver than him,”
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-ThorneSeptember 15, 2023 at 11:00 am #156479@freedomwriter76
AHHHHHHH
That was SO good and adorable and amazingggggg
😭😭😭😭😍😍😍😍
I love Alpine’s backstory!!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
September 15, 2023 at 11:03 am #156480Yeah they did a good job of him seeming human. If vision looked straight up robot I think we’d all be going 🤮🤮🤮 about the romance XD
Also he is really sweet, and you can tell he cares about wanda.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 15, 2023 at 11:28 am #156487Awwwww those two chapters! I like Jayla’s background…
But Yelena! Don’t say those things to Buckyyyyyy 😭
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
September 15, 2023 at 12:13 pm #156492Thanks!
Yeah… poor boy
but they’ll get better XD
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-ThorneSeptember 15, 2023 at 12:14 pm #156493Yeah XD if he acted like a Star Wars robot or something I think it would be completely different
but I love the two
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-ThorneSeptember 15, 2023 at 5:20 pm #156512@freedomwriter76 @smiley @mineralizedwritings Wanda and Vision is weird, yes…..
but I just always think of Vision as a living being because 1) he technically is made out of Vibranium-enhanced flesh or something, right? and 2) he’s part mind stone and part self-aware A.I., so while maybe not human there’s some kind of sentient consciousness in there, thus you could call him part “alien” (making him and Wanda no weirder than Star Lord and Gamora or any other human/alien Marvel pairing. Neither ship worked out anyway lol).
well that and in Infinity War he looked like a human for a little bit and I decided I liked that better.
sorry bout the random logic XD.
oh and Miley I’m loving that scene.
“Sharpen the shield?” I saw a meme about that once lol.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 15, 2023 at 5:25 pm #156514@freedomwriter76 Bucky was so sweet in that story lol. Timid, but sweet.
And the kitty!! that’s so cute!!
He needs more nice people like that in his life…..
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 15, 2023 at 6:18 pm #156517 -
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