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August 15, 2023 at 12:03 pm #153963Anonymous
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@smiley i knowwwwwwwww đđđ (i’m glad you like it tho!!!) ohhh, they won’t get separated, trust me…you just have to wait đ
yessssss, everyone’s backstories will go into more detail in this fic!!! đ
yesss, i knowwwww, I saw the beginning of Black Widow, but not the rest…đđ
August 15, 2023 at 12:04 pm #153964Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Chapter 2!!!
And y’all…I didn’t realize how broken Bruce is too đđ
Chapter 2
The radiation facility had only been a piece of his story.
The way he came to the orphanage was a little moreâŠcomplicated than that.
Heâd mutated from the gamma raysâŠit had been enough to kill him, yet it didnâtâŠbut that didnât mean it didnât come with effects.
When he was enraged, he turned into a giant, green monster that could destroy anything in his sight.
His father, the only parent heâd had for several years, ever since his mother died, said that he didnât want a monster for a sonâŠa freakâŠand he was given away to the orphanage.
Bruce knocked the side of his head. Why was he thinking about his past that he didnât want to remember!? His best friend had tried to warn himâŠbut Bruce was so fascinated by the facility, he didnât even try to listen.
Now he couldnât even see that friendâŠall because his father didnât want him.
He was a monsterâŠwasnât he?
Peterâs giggle pulled Bruce out of his thoughts, and he turned.
What in the world was Bucky-!?
âOh, hey Bruce,â Bucky chuckled, âyou look really confused.â
Bruce slowly nodded, walking over to Bucky. âWhy are you putting make-up on him to make his face look pale, and where did you even get the make-up?â
Peter giggled. âI have to look sick!â
Bruce raised an eyebrow.
Pietro laughed. âI want to go next!â
âIâll help you in just a second,â Bucky applied more make-up to Peterâs face, âandâŠthere we go, PeterâŠnow you look really pale. Alright Pietro, come here.â
Bucky quickly made Pietroâs face look just as pale and sickly.
âWhat are you doing?â Wanda whispered, walking over, her hands clasped in front of her.
âPutting my plan together.â
âAnd what is that plan, Bucky?â Bruce asked, raising an eyebrow. He pushed up on his glassesâŠthey always fell down.
âMaking them look sickâŠand having them âthrow upâ,â Bucky used quotation marks, âon the couple.â
âHow are you going to do that?â
Bucky chuckled, turning his attention back to Pietro. âSimple. Me and Tony made a concoction early this morning that looks just like real throw up.â
Peter scrunched up his nose. âThat nasty!â
âYeahâŠthatâs why you have to do it on the couple that youâll be talking to, so you can stay here with the rest of us.â Bucky replied with a smile.
âYeah, Peter, we want to stay here with Wanda and everyone else, so we have to put the nasty stuff on the people!â
Bruce rubbed the back of his neck.
He didnât want Peter and Pietro to leaveâŠbut this could get everyone in serious trouble. âI donât know, BuckyâŠâ
âWe have to convince them to not take them, BruceâŠitâll be okay.â
Bruce faced Bucky, fixing his glasses again, letting his hands fall to his sides. âAre you sure?â
Bucky nodded. âIâm sure. Now, Peter, Pietro, what are you two going to do?â
Peter laughed. âPretend to be sick!â
âAnd make the people leave us alone!â Pietro added with a grin.
Bruce let out a deep breath. He only hoped that this would workâŠand he could only hope that they wouldnât all get into serious trouble.
~*~
Natasha threw her paper airplane, and it flew through the air in the large bedroom.
Clint caught it in midair. âGot it.â
Natasha chuckled. âOf course, you did.â
So far, Buckyâs plan had been successfulâŠNatasha had heard the couple, especially the woman, scream when Peter and Pietro had âthrown upâ on them.
Peter and Pietro were still pretending to be sickâŠjust in case.
âCan I get up and playâŠ?â Peter whined.
âSorry, kiddo, but you gotta pretend to be sickâŠat least for a few more hours.â Tony replied, giving the young child a smile, tousling Peterâs hair.
Natasha smiled gently.
She didnât like this orphanageâŠhated it, evenâŠbut she had friends here.
Unlike the Red Room.
Natasha took in and let out a deep breath.
She wasnât there anymoreâŠshe wasnât there anymoreâŠshe was far from Russia and even further from the Red Room.
She still didnât have a family, but she had friends and she was no longer a trained assassinâŠshe was okay.
âNatasha, are you okay?â
Natasha faced Steve with a small smile. âYeah, Iâm good. How about you?â
Steve slowly nodded. ââŠIâm okay.â
Steve was tallerâŠmore muscularâŠthan most fourteen-year-oldsâŠall due to government experimentation that he had volunteered for.
But based on what Steve had told herâŠit hadnât been a good experienceâŠand he regretted ever doing it.
She hated that people like her, like Steve, could be so easily experimented onâŠall because they were young, innocent, alone, and orphaned.
Because what were orphans worth to society?
Nothing.
The door slammed open. âI ask you to be on your best behavior, and then you suddenly get sick and throw up on the couple willing to take some of you in.â
âTechnically, you ordered us to be on our best behavior, didnât ask us to.â
âClint, quiet,â Pierce snarled, âor youâre going to be in serious trouble as well. Where are Peter and Pietro?â
âIn bed, since theyâre sick.â Sam replied, leaning back against the wall close to Natasha, arms crossed across his chest.
âThey acted just fine this morningâŠbut when the couple came to talk to them, they were suddenly sick. After cleaning up the mess, Sitwell realized that the throw up wasnât realâŠit was mostly slime and oatmeal mixed with other, various food productsâŠand one of the other employees said some of her make-up was missingâŠdoes anyone want to explain whatâs going on here!?â
Tony got off the bed with Peter and raised a smirk. âWho says it was us? BesidesâŠmaybe Peter and Pietro ate some slime and other food and thatâs why they threw upâŠkids can eat pretty weird things.â
Pierce glared at Tony. âExplain the make-up being gone, Tony.â
âMaybe it was someone elseâŠwhy do you always ask us first?â Sam retorted.
âBecause all of you have caused chaos for every single foster family youâve been with. Youâre lucky I donât get all of you in troubleâŠbut if no one tells me who is responsible for this mess, then you are all going to get in trouble.â
Natashaâs fists clenched.
Pierce was no better than the people who had worked in the Red RoomâŠno better.
Everything inside of her ached to hurt this manâŠhurt him in all of the ways he had hurt her friendsâŠbut she also knew that wouldnât solve their problemsâŠit would only make things worse.
Pierce crossed his arms and tapped his foot. âIâm waiting.â
âIt was me, sirâŠI stole the make-up and made the fake puke.â Bucky whispered, stepping forward, already close to Pierce.
Natasha glanced at Bucky.
Pierce muttered something beneath his breath and grasped Buckyâs metal wrist. âI should have known. All of you, go to the cafeteria for dinner, and get Peter and Pietro cleaned up. As for you, James, youâll be returning the make-up you stole from Miss Helen, and then youâll be coming with me.â
Pierce dragged Bucky out of the room and slammed the door closed behind him.
Natashaâs fists clenched again.
She hated this placeâŠso muchâŠalmost as much as she hated the Red Room.
Her friends were the only bright spotsâŠonly them.
They were all hurtâŠa lot.
They just wanted a familyâŠdidnât they?
Was there something so wrong about wanting to be loved?
August 15, 2023 at 12:12 pm #153965Ahhhh Yelena is so tragic đ
Hm… Idk, a new kid might be cool? I feel like Yelena could benefit from another kid/teen who can match her sass and sorrow.
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
August 15, 2023 at 12:18 pm #153966@freedomwriter76
Ah girl, all the kidsssss!!đ±đ I love them!!!
And this new fanfic… I’m excited to hear more of their backstories!!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
August 15, 2023 at 12:47 pm #153972@freedomwriter76
Natasha!!!!! *cries* poor girl
I love the broken girls…
Yeah, that’s how I’m feeling, and I had this idea in my head so… I think I’ll go that route but also make sure it’s still clever
Do me a favorâŠ. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneAugust 15, 2023 at 1:31 pm #153974@freedomwriter76 LOVE IT
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebAugust 15, 2023 at 1:58 pm #153979@freedomwriter76
Aww i love it!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
August 15, 2023 at 1:59 pm #153980Cool!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
August 15, 2023 at 2:56 pm #153998Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision @smiley @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 Aww, thx y’all!!! đ„°đ„°
August 15, 2023 at 4:06 pm #154021Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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I have an idea…đ
(i should really stop coming up with fanfics…but I legit can’t help myself đ)
so, I kinda really wanna focus on getting deeper into Marvel characters, especially ones I don’t write from the POV from…so…I wanna write a series of short stories, each of which will be written from a different Marvel character’s POV (not everyone, mind you…just the ones I wanna do XD) to kinda get into their head and things like that!!
so yeahhhhh, that’s my idea, everyone XXD
August 15, 2023 at 4:15 pm #154023@freedomwriter76
I feel you!!! There are so many Ships and fights I want to try, but I don’t want to write a whole fanfic… we should make a page or something XD or we… just use this XD
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-ThorneAugust 15, 2023 at 4:24 pm #154028Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley ikr!? XXD
so. many. things. to. try.
These are the 2 ideas I have so far, each as a separate short story:
#1: Trying To Mend the Broken (Tony Stark) (Tony dealing with the pain/guilt of Peter disappearing with the snap…but being reminded of how much he has with Pepper and Morgan…and remaining hopeful even then đđ)
#2: Gentle Hands of Love (Bucky Barnes) (i am actually 100% in love with this idea…it will be in the time that Bucky is in Romania and will meet an elderly couple that end up caring for him and loving on him as if he were their own son đđđ)
August 15, 2023 at 4:28 pm #154031@freedomwriter76 @smiley wow, I love your fanfics!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 15, 2023 at 4:29 pm #154032Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h *bows* thank you very much đ
August 15, 2023 at 4:34 pm #154035@freedomwriter76
Eeeeeh!! those sound really cool!!!!
I really want to try… Wanda&Loki, it’s a ship that’s been going around Pinterest and I feel like it would be really cool since they’re both connected to the mind stone
and they’re also two of my favorite characters
also, did you know… that in the comics the winter soldier was a trainer at the red room, and him and Natasha had a romantic interest when he was training her
Marvel even debated going that route for the movies but the actor for black widow left and we never saw it
but it would make a cool fanfic
I also want to do a Yelena and Bucky married and parents fanfic
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