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August 3, 2023 at 3:20 pm #152871
@freedomwriter76
Oh my word!!! I love this!!! so much!!!
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.ā
āāIsaiah⬠ā43ā¬:ā1ā¬August 3, 2023 at 3:24 pm #152872Anonymous
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@smiley aww, tysm!!! šš If you like this, you’re gonna have to get Godly to tell you about her series in general…it is AMAZING, btw š
August 3, 2023 at 4:04 pm #152875@freedomwriter76 AHHH CORI!!!! And yesss sheās such a mixed up Charrie š but it all turns out okay in the end!!! š I really love her so much, and her theme.
Also THANK YOU FOR THE COMPLIMENT! Iām so happy you think my series is so great š„°
@smiley glad u like my charries! And isnāt Freedomās fanfic/writing awesome?!?#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebAugust 3, 2023 at 4:33 pm #152884Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12 Yeah, poor girl š Certainly glad it all works out š„°š„° (
and Arthur is totally amazing, hehe)aww, you are soooo welcome, girl!!!! šššš
AWWWW, TYSM for the compliment! ššššš Means so much to me!! ššššš
August 3, 2023 at 5:22 pm #152901@smiley OOH I like it!! Also making them siblings was awesome-paws.
@freedomwriter76 I love yours too!!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 3, 2023 at 5:34 pm #152905@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
You guys are both amazing writers!! and Freedom using your incredible characters is awesome XD
And godlyfantasy12 please tag me on any writing you do!! Honestly, I don’t know a ton about your charries but I always liked Arthur XD
also not going to lie, I want a Wanda and Corvina meet up XD
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.ā
āāIsaiah⬠ā43ā¬:ā1ā¬August 4, 2023 at 9:08 am #152932Anonymous
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@smiley @keilah-h aww, thx y’all šš @hybridlore @godlyfantasy12
Here’s chapter 1 of my WWII Marvel AU…(let’s hope it posts it this time š)
C H A P T E RĀ 1
May 1944
āCareful. Stay right behind meā¦youāll stay safe that way.ā
āBut Buckyā¦ā
He pressed a finger to his lips, signaling for his eleven-year-old sister to quiet. They couldnāt say or do anything that would attract any sort of attentionā¦especially negative attention.
āBecca, you know what Mama has always told us.ā
āI knowā¦never attract attention to yourselfā¦ā
āExactly. Come on, follow right behind me.ā
Bucky led his sister, walking in the gutter, knowing they were unable to walk on the sidewalk. The yellow stars on their coats almost glowed in the bright May sunlight.
Sunlight reflected off the red flag that hang from every single flagpoleā¦decorated with a white circle and a crooked, almost double cross-like symbol in the middle.
He so dearly missed America.
Almost silently, save for their shoes clicking against a gutter every now and then, Bucky led his sister back to the Ghetto.
He reached theirs and nudged the door open.
Becca released his hand and walked into the tiny building. āMama, weāre home!ā Becca looked around the tiny room. āMamaā¦? Mama? Mama!ā She briskly turned around. āBucky, I donāt see Mama!ā
Bucky closed the door and removed his coat. āShe has to be here, Beccaā¦she wouldnāt just-ā
āOhhhā¦you two are homeā¦ā Frau Abrams, an elderly, widowed woman who had come to live in their same Ghetto a few weeks ago, whispered, her voice croaking and cracking, āā¦I was wondering when youād be hereā¦your Mother wanted me to tell you that sheās fineā¦sheās very fine,ā the woman coughed, āā¦but the Gestapo came and took her this afternoon while you two were out and aboutā¦in that dangerous world out there.ā
Bucky didnāt speak. He couldnāt even breathe.
Their father, Josephā¦heād disappeared two years agoā¦and nowā¦their Mamaā¦Winifredā¦she wasā¦she was gone too.
āWhere did they take her?ā
āOhhh, the old Synagogueā¦theyāve imprisoned many of them there for nowā¦but you know as well as I do that she wonāt stay there for longā¦ā
āI have to go see her.ā
āI want to see her too!ā Becca cried, tears in her eyes, facing Bucky, fists clenched and at her sides.
āBeccaā¦it will be dangerousā¦ā
āI donāt care! I want to see Mama, Buckyā¦I want to see herā¦pleaseā¦ā
āBecca-ā
āI donāt want Mama to leave too! Let me see her, Bucky, please!ā
āBecca, oh Becca,ā Bucky got down on one knee in front of his sister, āI know you want to see Mama, but I may have to sneak past guards to see herā¦and I canāt risk you being caught with me if I get caught, okay? Can you stay here and take care of Frau Abrams for me? Iāll tell Mama that you said hello, okay?ā
Becca slowly nodded. She sniffed and wiped tears away.
Bucky smiled gently and brushed a long strand of his sisterās long, dark brown hair out of her face. āThere we goā¦thereās my brave sisterā¦thereās my brave girl.ā He wrapped his arms around his sister and pulled her close. āI love you, Beccaā¦more than youāll ever knowā¦Iāll be back later, I promise you.ā
He only hoped that it was a promise he could keep.
~*~
He sank against the wall and onto the ground, a little out of breath from marching for so long.
Heād lasted much longer than he would have in the pastā¦no longer as small as he once was, thanks to an experienced scientist.
Steve removed his helmet and set it aside, letting out a deep sigh. He adjusted his Wehrmacht uniform, making sure it looked decent, just in case one of his superior officers found him.
They were picky about how their soldiers appeared.
āYou seem a little tired, Private.ā
Steve glanced up and smiled gently at a nurse, dressed in uniform, that stood above him. āYes Maāam, I guess I amā¦Iāve marched for several miles.ā
The nurse chuckled. āYou soldiers certainly do a lot of marching. Iām just surprised you arenāt already in combat.ā
āWellā¦uhā¦Iām a little bit of an experiment, so they want me to stay moreā¦uhā¦contained.ā
And he hated it.
Heād enlisted to serve his countryā¦and now he couldnāt go and fight.
āWell, if you ever need anything, Iām close by, alright? Just ask for Madeleneā¦theyāll know who to find.ā
āThank you, Maāamā¦Iāll remember that.ā
The blonde-haired nurse smiled and walked off to go tend to another man, checking on him.
She seemed niceā¦most of the women Steve had met in his life wanted nothing to do with him.
āSoldier, stand up!ā
Steve almost automatically jumped to his feet and snapped his commanding officer a salute.
The man nodded in approval and smiled. āThatās perfect. Now, Rogersā¦I need you for guard duty. We have a fewā¦prisoners that weāre holding in a nearby district, in an old church building. Since you have nothing else to doā¦Iām ordering you to report there. I will give you the address.ā
āOf course, sirā¦I will do everything I can.ā
āGood lad.ā
Steve nodded. After his commanding officer handed him a piece of paper with the address, Steve snapped another salute, and his commander walked away.
Steve looked down at the piece of the paper in his hands and smiled. Maybe he could prove himself somehowā¦maybeā¦just maybe.
August 4, 2023 at 9:50 am #152933@freedomwriter76
Ooohh it’s really good! Thanks xD
I just read the crossover between your fanfics and @godlyfantasy12’s , and it was soo good!!!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
August 4, 2023 at 10:12 am #152934@freedomwriter76
Girl!!! I love it!!!
And Bucky and Becca
So sweet and sad…
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.ā
āāIsaiah⬠ā43ā¬:ā1ā¬August 4, 2023 at 10:46 am #152939@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Is this cross-over the best thing I’ve ever read? Maybe?
MAYBE?!?!? What am I talking about?!?! Those 8 chapters were the most amazing thing EVER!
@freedomwriter76
And the Avengers WWII thing is the BEST! Anytime you include Madelene I am very happy.
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
August 4, 2023 at 11:16 am #152948Anonymous
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@hybridlore @smiley @euodia-vision
AWW, Y’ALL ARE SO SWEET!!!!! TYSM!!!!!! ššššššš
(also…I have a new Marvel historical AU…heh š )
August 4, 2023 at 11:24 am #152950@freedomwriter76
Of course you do… tell me more
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.ā
āāIsaiah⬠ā43ā¬:ā1ā¬August 4, 2023 at 11:27 am #152952Anonymous
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@smiley lol…š
ok…this one is an American Civil War AU!!!
I have 5 characters done so far, so here they are š:
Steven (Steve) Grant Rogers
22 years old
Blonde hair, Blue eyes, tall & muscular
Growing up as a small, sickly child, Steve was the target of much bullying and getting beaten up was something that occurred almost daily. The only one who stood up for the young child was his best friend Buckyā¦but when Steve was 17, his friend disappeared one dayā¦and Steve never saw him again.
Steveās mother, the last family figure he had, died a year laterā¦and Steve, as a young adult, finally no longer small and sickly, was left on his own in the world around him. Old enough to enlist, as war rages, Steve enlists into the Union army, wanting to fight for his nation and for those bound in slavery.
Heād never guess where his journey would take himā¦or who he would see once again.
James Buchanan (Bucky) Barnes (Pierce)
23 years old
Brown hair, Blue eyes, tall & muscular
A strong, hard-headed, rebellious young man, Bucky was often at odds with his Army father, who asked for full obedience from his son. Bucky had Steve thoughā¦and it made up for it.
Even though it was just Bucky, his father, and his little sister, Beccaā¦life was goodā¦until things changed.
His father died, Becca was sent away to relatives, and when a building in their town burned to the ground, Bucky was the one blamed and arrested.
Bucky was unable to pay the money he owed to the man who owned the store that had burned down to the ground, even though Bucky wasnāt to blame, and the man demanded Bucky as his payment. Bucky was given as a slave to the man, but the man wanted money more than a slave, and Bucky was sold.
Bought by a hard, cruel, overly rich man known as Alexander Pierce, Buckyās life has been darker than itās ever been. The only brighter spot is Abigail Pierceās (Pierceās wife) chambermaid, Sarah. Bucky loves her, and Sarah feels the sameā¦but the two of them know they canāt be together.
Bucky only aches for freedomā¦and when he hears that Union forces are coming nearā¦he may just have his chance.
Samuel (Sam) Wilson
26 years old
Black hair, brown eyes, average height & muscular
Born as a slave, Sam lived a life of bondage, but shielded by his parents for several years, he didnāt really noticeā¦and he still loved his life. He had his family, after all.
But when Sam was 12, his younger sister, Sarah, only 6, was sold awayā¦aloneā¦and Sam never saw her again.
He vowed to do anything he could to get his sister back, and when his parents both died and Sam saw a chance to escape when he was 16ā¦he took it. He fled to the North and became a free manā¦but he still wants and needs to find his younger sisterā¦and he has vowed to do so. He enlists into a Colored Regiment in the Union Army to fight for the freedom of slaves like Sarah.
Heāll do anything for his sisterā¦anything.
Anthony (Tony) Edward Stark
38 years old
Black hair, brown eyes, average height & build
Born as the only son to a rich Virginia couple, Tony knew a life of riches and luxury. He was lonely, being an only child, but all of the slaves his parents had to play with him made up for it. Tony didnāt question anything in his lifeā¦until he met Nicholas J. Fury.
While in college, Tony met Nicholas J. Fury, a freed slave, nicknamed Nick, and his eyes were opened to the reality of the evil of slavery. Unwilling to let such things continueā¦Tony became a large member of an Abolitionist group, much to his parentsā dismay, and heās never looked back.
As war rages, Tony is required to join the Army somehow, and together with his friend from college, Bruce, a doctor, they enlist into the Union Army, Tony as an Officer, Bruce as a Doctor.
Tony strives to do what is rightā¦no matter what it looks like.
Peter B. Parker
16 years old
Brown hair, Brown eyes, average height & skinny build
Orphaned when he was only a toddler, Peter has lived with his Uncle Ben and Aunt May in New York for several years.
When his Uncle Ben is killed in the war, Peter knows he has to do something to avenge himā¦and keep his Aunt May safe.
He sneaks away and enlists into the Union Army, lying about his age to do so. Heās excitedā¦but nothing could prepare him for the realities of war.
What was he ever thinking!?
Peter is captured in battle and sent to one of the Confederate prisons. Heās aloneā¦what was he ever thinking, getting involved in war?
August 4, 2023 at 12:06 pm #152955@freedomwriter76
OOOOOO! I love this! I’m enjoying this marvel history thing going on… š
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
August 4, 2023 at 12:13 pm #152956Anonymous
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@euodia-vision Aww, thanks!! šš yess, you and me both š
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