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August 2, 2023 at 6:54 pm #152797
@keilah-h @euodia-vision @hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @anyone-else
Guys, so it’s time to talk about my newest fic
but before I do, I have to say that I was looking at the boards for my WandaVision fic and I was in tears… That book has been emotionally exhausting to write, yet I love writing it XD
anyways it’s time for Victorian Avengers AU
honestly, I’ve had this idea forever but never the confidence to pull it off
but since I’m writing a novel around this time frame, I figured this would be good practice
so… I’ll start the rant i.n just a second
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneAugust 2, 2023 at 9:48 pm #152812@euodia-vision @hybridlore @freedomwriter76
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-ThorneAugust 2, 2023 at 9:58 pm #152815@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @keilah-h
Alright it’s time to begin with the characters
The first up is…
Carol (she’s never in any of our fics XD but she’s such an excellent character
I found these images of the Avengers, it’s a fantasy filter, it’s not perfect for Victorian times but there still cool
Carol Fury is the second oldest child of her father. A strong and determined child, her behavior is quite different than most of the girls around her. She hates the idea of marriage, and she can’t stand all the spoiled girls, especially Lila Ross, the girl who’s courting her brother.
And while marriage has always sounded terrible, she starts to change her mind when she meets Loki Odison a cunning and sweet man, who she instantly falls for, but since he isn’t the oldest in his family he won’t inherit anything
which makes her father terribly nervous
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-ThorneAugust 2, 2023 at 10:11 pm #152817James Fury
James is the oldest son and the one to inherit the estate and run the Fury house. he truthfully hates being an inheritor because it means he has to do the boring work, while his brother Steve can do some more wild things. It also means he has to date a girl who he finds terribly unpleasant, Lila Ross, a snobbish and spoiled girl. But when his sisters get a new lady’s maid, Wanda Maximoff, he starts to have feelings for her. But of course, he couldn’t be with a maid, not at this time, not ever.
but he can’t let her go…
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-ThorneAugust 2, 2023 at 10:16 pm #152818Steve Fury
I don’t have an image of him…
but he’s the son of Nick Fury, but since he’s not the oldest he won’t inherit, which is fine with him. After seeing what his father and brother do all day, he’s fine with being the boy, who has lots of time to go riding, hunting, and of course, avoid the looks and stares from everyone.
He’s nervous about his picks for marriage, but when he finds a respectful girl, who is also a good-hearted lady, he imminently falls for her. Her name… Natasha Romanoff
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-ThorneAugust 2, 2023 at 10:23 pm #152820Also if you haven’t noticed this isn’t going to be the most historically accurate book, but it’s still based on the Victorian and further time.
Rebecca Fury
The youngest child in the family, she is often treated like it. A beautiful and elegant lady, she dreams of falling in love and when she meets Peter Stark, she falls head over heels, and he’s a respectful match for her. But the drama between her siblings and their lives makes her fear her future with Peter and the expectations that will be put on them. she also hopes to prove that she’s not the baby of the family.
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-ThorneAugust 3, 2023 at 9:26 am #152833Oohhhh @smiley looks cool!!! ☺️
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph and Eric from Ellette*
August 3, 2023 at 12:04 pm #152847Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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AHHH @SMILEY LOVE IT SO FAR!!!!!!!!
(and they’re all siblings??? Epic 😂😂🤩)
August 3, 2023 at 12:10 pm #152850@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore
Thanks, guys!!
Yeah… I don’t know why I chose these random 4 to be siblings XD probably because they had some sort of relationship with Nick Fury in the movies
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-ThorneAugust 3, 2023 at 2:44 pm #152865Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h Next Chapter is done!!!!
(and the next one may have a certain raven-haired girl as the POV charrie…😏)
C H A P T E R 7
She tumbled over a rock but caught herself.
She normally wasn’t so clumsy…but she was…well…thinking about her friends.
Where could they be?
Arabella closed her eyes, tight. “Dear Light One, help me find them…please let them be safe.”
A small sense of calm, of peace, washed over her.
Yes, The Light One would protect her friends…she trusted them into his hands.
Still, it didn’t quite take away her anxieties.
Ara reopened her eyes and began walking again.
There was an…odd looking white building close by, with a large yard…she wondered…could one of her friends be there?
Jocelyn…Nyx…Grimm…Luna…Paxton…and November.
She only hoped that they were all safe.
“What are you doing here?” A feminine voice asked, demanded.
Ara almost jumped out of her skin.
She turned to face a woman with chin-length, red hair…wearing a tight-fitting, odd looking black suit. The woman raised an eyebrow, her green eyes sparkling in the sunlight. “So…who are you and what are you doing here?”
“My name is Arabella…Arabella Fabel. I-I’m looking for my friends…do you know the way back to the land near A’Grend?”
The woman’s eyebrows furrowed together. “Can’t say I know where that is. Who are your friends?”
“Jocelyn, Nyx, Grimm, Luna, Paxton, and November…have you seen any of them?”
“November? Isn’t that…” the woman trailed off, “listen, my name is Natasha. Natasha Romanoff. I think I may know where one of your friends are. Come with me.”
“Oh, thank you…I just hope my friends are all alright.”
“I think I only know one of your friends…but I think Tony may be working on finding the others.”
Arabella nodded.
She especially hoped Paxton was safe…she was so worried about him…she always was.
November too.
He seemed so…different in recent months…but he wouldn’t explain what was wrong.
Everyone had their struggles…Ara knew that.
She had her struggles, same as everyone.
She still couldn’t put Riven in The Light One’s hands.
Arabella let out a deep sigh.
Now wasn’t the time to dwell on her inability to forgive November’s father.
“You okay back there? You seem pretty upset about something.”
Ara shook her head and gave her companion a smile. “No…I’m alright. Please, lead me to my friend.”
She followed the woman, Natasha, into the white building. It was large…magnificent…very…different.
“Here we are, the medical room.”
Natasha opened a door, and Ara followed her into the room.
A medical room? It certainly looked…“November!”
“A-Ara!?” November cried, standing from where he’d been sitting on a white bed, his left arm wrapped in several white bandages.
Ara ran to her friend, enveloping him in a tight embrace, but she was careful to not touch his arm…it was obviously injured. “Oh November…I’m so happy you’re safe…”
“Y-Yeah, me too…for-for you, I mean…heh.”
Ara squeezed her friend tighter, happy that her best friend was safe.
“Well, well…if it isn’t the girlfriend.”
Natasha elbowed the man who had spoken in the rib. “Tony!”
“Ow…why did you elbow me so hard?”
Ara faced the black-haired man with a soft smile. “Me and November are just friends…best friends.”
She squeezed November’s hand, and November did the same.
They were safe…they were together…as they were meant to be.
August 3, 2023 at 2:49 pm #152866@freedomwriter76 THE BABES ARE TOGETHER AGAIN!!! Ahhh!!! Love it!! And love how u incorporated the bit of tension between them recently (I’m guessing this is during the time where November knows of Corvina’s relation to him?)
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebAugust 3, 2023 at 3:00 pm #152867Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 AWW, SO GLAD YOU LOVE IT!!!! 🥰🥰🥰 aww, tysm!!! (yep…he knows about his relation to Corvina…heh)
August 3, 2023 at 3:17 pm #152868@freedomwriter76
Awwwww!!!!!!!!
We’re just friends,
Yeah… sure you are XD
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-ThorneAugust 3, 2023 at 3:17 pm #152869Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 Next Chapter!!!!
(and fair warning…later chapters will have SPOILERS of Godly’s books in them…so tread carefully 😂)
also…..Corvina is a lot of fun to write…but she’s so sad and I feel so bad for her 😭
C H A P T E R 8
This place was dark…but not dark enough.
She couldn’t disappear into the shadows enough.
Not to mention the fact that she had to be with people she wanted nothing to do with.
Lilith. Aramis. Edrich.
All imbeciles.
And the new man and woman she’d met…Viola and Alec…more imbeciles.
Truth be told…she was surrounded by complete imbeciles.
Corvina leaned back against the cold wall of Viola’s base, already tired of all of this.
Turning into a raven and flying off would seem like paradise…compared to being stuck with these…freaks.
‘You could stick in there…and trick them when the time comes.’
That was exhausting, and time consuming…and Corvina didn’t want to be around them at all.
“They’re imbeciles.”
‘Imbeciles can be easily tricked…you could take all the power for yourself.’
Corvina clenched her fists. Her nails scratched her palms. “…I don’t want power.”
‘Hmm? Well then, what do you want, Corvina…?’ the voice taunted.
What did she want?
Control…power…she craved neither.
Fame…fortune…she had no desire for either.
Love…it only brought pain.
So then, what did she crave?
‘Can’t figure it out, can you? You’re hopeless, Corvina…utterly hopeless.’
“Would you just shut it?” Corvina snarled…and the voice disappeared.
For now.
What did she crave?
She craved the things she knew she couldn’t have…she craved the things she knew someone like her didn’t deserve.
Freedom.
Peace.
Safety.
Comfort.
Hah, she deserved none of those things.
Besides, she was alive…not dead…what else could she expect?
Did she deserve anything more than life itself?
She was breathing.
But did she feel alive?
Not one bit.
Bah! Such thoughts were useless anyhow.
She watched her chattering companions with keen eyes.
She wouldn’t let her guard down.
She wouldn’t let any of them close.
She knew the kind of pain a mistake like that would bring.
Pain…that was her constant companion.
She’d learned how to live with it.
Pain made her…her.
Pain made her stronger.
Pain led her to finding him.
Corvina groaned, rubbing one of her hands across her head, trying to ease her headache.
Not that…she couldn’t think of him.
Thinking of him brought her pain.
He couldn’t be a part of her thoughts.
He couldn’t.
August 3, 2023 at 3:18 pm #152870Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley wellllllll….Ara is actually oblivious to November’s crush, so…😂😂
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