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August 1, 2023 at 4:20 pm #152631Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12 *joins you to cry over Grimm and Steve, bringing tissues*
Haha…well, I’m glad I could make you want to write šš
WAIT-HANG ON A SEC-I HAVEN’T SEEN ALL OF GRIMM’S AWESOMENESS!?!?!?!?
girllll…you’re gonna make me fall even more in love with Grimm šš„°š„°š
August 1, 2023 at 4:20 pm #152632@freedomwriter76 wow, that was fun to read!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 1, 2023 at 4:21 pm #152634Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h tysm! šš Glad I could give you some fun!! š
August 1, 2023 at 4:25 pm #152636@freedomwriter76 you’re welcome!
Also, who’s your profile pic of? It’s too small for me to make it out, although I can kinda guess that it’s your favorite lol
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 1, 2023 at 4:27 pm #152638Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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yeahhhhhhh, it’s Bucky šš
August 1, 2023 at 4:36 pm #152643@freedowmriter76 yep….
And mine’s Tech.
We just love our charries don’t we.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 1, 2023 at 4:36 pm #152644@freedomwriter76 agh tagged u wrong.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 1, 2023 at 4:39 pm #152646Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h Indeed we do šš some charries are just amazing, what else can we say??? XXD
August 1, 2023 at 4:43 pm #152648@freedomwriter76 ikr??
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 1, 2023 at 4:47 pm #152650Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h I have Chapter 3!!!!
(ngl, this one got longer…what else could y’all expect when I’m writing Grimm, ok??? šš)
C H A P T E RĀ 3
None of the others were aroundā¦he was aloneā¦and chances were, the others were too.
Grimm changed back into his human form in an alleyway, having already avoided as many people as possibleā¦knowing that maybe most people wouldnāt be used to a young man who could shift between a human and a wolf.
It justā¦wasnāt the kind of thing he assumed would be normal in thisā¦odd place.
His finger drifted to the golden locket he wore and carried always.
Heād make it up to Mirellaā¦one day.
Grimm walked out of the alleyway, walking as if this was normalā¦as if nothing was wrongā¦so he wouldnāt attract anyoneās attention.
It was how he survived.
Even though others hadnāt.
Grimm walked forward, forcing himself to do so. If he ignored the pain long enoughā¦the wound would heal over, right?
Time heals all wounds, right?
Grimm shook his head, shoving aside the thoughts.
He needed to find the othersā¦and fast.
Grimm walked further and faster.
He couldnāt deal with those thoughtsā¦not now.
He needed to find the othersā¦protect them.
Lyn, Nyx, and Snow especially.
They needed himā¦and he needed them.
Grimm stepped off the platform he was walking on, onto a gray street with white lines.
A loud honking-like sound sounded, and before Grimm even knew what was happening, a weird looking vehicle of some kind, but not a wagon, was heading for him.
He would leap out of the way, but he didnāt have time.
He felt something knock into him, hard, knocking the breath out of him. He gasped for air, laying back on the platform heād been walking onā¦a sidewalk of some kind.
āYou okay, kid?ā
He blinked several times, trying to clear his blurred vision. He stared up at the man that stood above him, who wore some odd, blue, red, and white clothing with a big white star on the chest.
The manās gaze shifted, and worry filled his blue eyes. āYou have a cut right there.ā
Grimm slowly sat up and looked at his left arm.
Sure enough, there was a cut about the length of his ring finger.
āThereās a pharmacy nearbyā¦I can get a first aid kit and help you get that taken care ofā¦would you like my help?ā
He wasnāt exactly apt to receiving help from a strangerā¦nor did he know what a first aid kit wasā¦but with how lost he was in this placeā¦he didnāt really have a choice, now did he?
āThanksā¦for saving meā¦I mean. Andā¦yeah, we canā
āYouāre welcome. Come on, let me help you. Here, I have this scrap of cloth. Press it against that cut for a few minutes.ā
Grimm did so. He slowly rose to his feet and faced the man. āIām Grimmā¦Grimm Beowulf.ā
āSteve Rogers. Come on, letās get to the pharmacy.ā
Grimm followed after him, knowing that he probably didnāt really have another choiceā¦and besides, this man had just saved his life, hadnāt he?
They reached a small, white building.
āDo you want to come with me, or would you rather stay out here?ā
Grimm glanced at the building, then his arm. He slowly shrugged. āI guess Iāll stay out here.ā
āSure, whatever you need. Iāll be right back.ā
Grimm slowly sat down on a bench a little ways off from the āPharmacyā, a million thoughts tumbling in his head.
He needed to find his friendsā¦he couldnāt let anything happen to them.
He couldnāt fail anyone else.
Minutes passed, but Grimm eventually heard footsteps. He turned his head, just as Steve exited the building and headed towards him, a small bag in hand.
Steve sat down on the bench beside him and smiled. āHere, you can take that cloth off now.ā
Grimm did so.
He watched as Steve unzipped the bag and opened it to reveal a lot of thingsā¦that Grimm had never seen before.
Steve ripped a cloth out of a package. āThis might sting for a minute.ā
Grimm nodded.
He wasnāt immune to painā¦nobody was.
Truth was, though, that someone whoād been through a lot of pain justā¦ignored it after a while.
It didnāt bother him as much as it once didā¦heād been through enough by now to justā¦pretend the pain wasnāt there.
Though his arm stung, he didnāt even flinch.
Steve threw the wipe in a large can and grabbed bandages and another piece of cloth. āHere, Iām going to wrap your cut up in this along with some gauze. You okay with that?ā
Grimm nodded.
Steve gently, but firmly, applied the bandage.
Grimm moved his arm.
It certainly felt better.
āThank youā¦it feels a lot better.ā
āYouāre welcome. If you donāt mind me asking, where are you fromā¦? You donāt look like youāre from around here.ā
āIām from a frozen kingdomā¦what is this place?ā
āNew York cityā¦is there somewhere you need to go?ā
Heād never heard of that place.
Grimm nodded. āYesā¦but first I need to find my friends first.ā
Steve raised an eyebrow, zipping up the kit. āYeah? How many friends are you looking for?ā
āSix.ā
āQuite a lot. Tell you what, after I finish my patrol, I can take you to the compoundā¦my friend Tony might be able to help you find your friends. How does that sound?ā
Steve offered his hand.
Grimm took it and shook it.
Heād already found someone that he could at least somewhat trust in this new placeā¦there was full honesty and evenā¦compassion in Steveās eyes.
āIt sounds good.ā
August 1, 2023 at 5:16 pm #152653Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Chapter 4 is done as well!!! š„°š„°
And y’alll!!!! Pax is next!!! š„°šš„°š„°š
C H A P T E RĀ 4
This place was interestingā¦strangeā¦and she was alone.
But it would be alright.
The Light One would guide her steps.
Luna walked on the pavement, several rushed prayers escaping her lips.
She didnāt understand this placeā¦but she would be alright.
She wished she knew where her friends wereā¦but again, it would all be alright.
Althoughā¦she was rather lost.
There were odd wagons everywhereā¦and just different things in general.
It was awe-inspiring, truthfully.
It was colorfulā¦brightā¦beautifulā¦very beautiful.
But she did need to find her friendsā¦and figure out where she was.
She saw a man that was standing a bit away, on the same kind of pavement she was, greeting people and waving them past.
Maybe he could help!
Luna walked over to the man. āExcuse me? Can I have some help?ā
The man looked down. His blue eyes widened a bit, and he raised an eyebrow. āOh, hey there. Can I help you, kid?ā
He was kindā¦honestā¦she could feel itā¦see it, even.
Luna smiled. āDo you know the way back to the land surrounding the city of AāGrend?ā
The man blinked several times. He chuckled and rubbed the back of his neck. āCanāt say I have. This is New York cityā¦are you lost?ā
Luna slowly nodded. āI believe soā¦Iām looking for my friends. Iām Dolunayā¦but everyone calls me Luna.ā
āNice to meet you, Luna,ā the man extended a hand, āthe nameās Clint.ā
Luna glanced at his hand, then him. She gasped. āOh, you want me to shake it? Oh, so sorry! Iāve only recently gotten out of the caverns.ā She giggled and shook the manās hand. āNice to meet you!ā
The man smiled, but he was confusedā¦very confused. āSame here. Alright Luna, who are your friends?ā
āThereās November, Arabella, Grimm, Jocelyn, Nyx, oh, and Paxton! Theyāre all my new friendsā¦and theyāre good friends. Do you know where I could look for them?ā
āSure, but youāre going to have to give me a minuteā¦I have to direct people away from an accident.ā
āOh, what kind of accident?ā
āWell, two cars collidedā¦and some people got hurt.ā
Luna gasped. āOh, I hope theyāre okayā¦may The Light One help them. Alsoā¦what is a car?ā
Clint blinked several times. āUhā¦have you been living under a rock?ā
āNot under a rockā¦but I have only recently left the only place Iāve ever livedā¦Iāve never really been anywhere until my friends came.ā
Clint let out a quiet chuckle and rubbed the back of his neck. āā¦Yeah, that explains a lot.ā
Luna slightly tilted her head.
What did he mean by that?
āIāll help you, but like I said, youāre going to have to wait. My friend Tony may be able to help you find your friends and a way back homeā¦but like I said, I have to finish directing people on the sidewalk.ā
Luna glanced down at the pavement beneath her. āThatās what this is!? Hmmā¦sidewalkā¦it sounds fun!ā
Clint raised an eyebrow, but he just as quickly shook his head and went back to directing people. āYeahā¦okayā¦you can sit down in that bench over there, if you want.ā
Luna nodded and went to the bench.
She quickly took a seat, gently kicking her legs.
The Light One had already given her someone that could helpā¦oh, how good The Light One is.
Luna sat on the bench and waited for Clint.
āThank you, Light One.ā Luna whispered.
Sheād find her friends soonā¦very soon.
August 1, 2023 at 5:53 pm #152654Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Chapter 5 is done too!!!
(i’m on fire today š having a lot of fun, lol)
C H A P T E RĀ 5
āE-Ember? W-W-Wulf? L-Lyn? N-Nyx? L-L-Luna? A-A-Ara? Araā¦ā Paxton whimpered, walking around in the dark, crowded alleyway.
It was darkā¦he could barely see.
He was alone.
It was scary.
Paxton whimpered and buried his face in Hopeās tattered fur.
Heā¦he didnāt like being alone!
His motherā¦or Edrichā¦or Aramisā¦theyā¦they could find him!
Scratching sounded, and Paxton screeched, backing away as a black cat jumped, hissed, and ran away.
He sank to the ground, keeping his face buried in Hopeās fur.
He didnāt want to be alone.
He wanted Emberā¦and Lynā¦and Nyxā¦and Lunaā¦and Wulf.
He wanted Ara.
He really wanted Ara.
Paxton buried his face deeper into Hopeās fur.
He was scaredā¦his family could find himā¦he was really scared.
He didnāt like the dark.
He didnāt like being alone.
He didnāt want to be aloneā¦he wanted everyone else!
Footsteps sounded.
Paxton whimpered and crawled further into the shadows.
āIs someone in there?ā
Someone found him!
Itā¦it didnāt sound like his motherā¦or Aramisā¦or Edrichā¦butā¦but they could have sent someone to get him.
Paxton squeaked and held Hope closer.
āHeyā¦hey now, donāt be scaredā¦I wonāt hurt you, I promise. I justā¦I thought I heard something, and I wanted to make sure that no one was hurt. You can come outā¦ā
If he came outā¦heād be seen.
Hisā¦his family could find him.
Maybe this person was sent by his mother.
Heā¦he didnāt wanna go home!
Theyād hurt himā¦but he wanted to be safeā¦with everyone elseā¦and Ara!
Paxton crawled deeper into the shadows.
A figure slowly sat down at the end of the alley.
Now Paxton was trapped!
Paxton lifted his knees to his chest and held Hope tighter. He didnāt want to be aloneā¦he didnāt want to!
The man crossed his legs underneath him. āI promise, I wonāt hurt youā¦I want to help you. Are you lost? I can help you find your family.ā
Paxton squeaked.
āNo family? Yeah, I get that. Well, then maybe I can help you find your friends.ā
Find Ember and Wulf and Nyx and Luna and Lyn and Ara?
Paxton came out of the shadows a little bit.
Could he help him find Ara?
Noā¦maybe this man was sent by motherā¦Paxton couldnāt trust himā¦he couldnāt go home to his motherā¦his brothers.
āā¦Iām Bucky. Whatās your name?ā
Buckyā¦Buckyā¦Paxton had never heard of that name.
Could he be someone that did want to help him?
Paxton came a bit more out of the shadows, but he didnāt lift his face from Hopeā¦he wouldnātā¦he couldnāt.
He loved Hope.
āThere you goā¦see, I wonāt hurt you, I promise. I just want to help youā¦I can try to help you find your friends. Now, whatās your name?ā
Paxton came further out of the shadows. Light shone into his eyes. He closed them.
It was bright!
Paxton slowly reopened his eyes.
The man sitting at the end of the alleyway wore all blackā¦which was scaryā¦butā¦but he had a kind face.
Not like Aramis or Edrich.
The man smiledā¦and it wasnāt meanā¦kinda like Wulfās!
He still seemed sadā¦also like Wulf.
Paxton came a little closer, and the man smiled more.
He flicked a strand of his shoulder-length brown hair behind his shoulder.
His left armā¦it wasā¦grayā¦and shiny! That was different. Paxton had never seen a shiny arm…
āWhatās your name, kiddo?ā
āā¦P-P-Pax-Paxton.ā
The man smiled again. āHi there, Paxton. Like I said, Iām Bucky.ā The man stood.
Paxton looked up at him.
He knew Aramis and Edrich didnāt like him talkingā¦but this man seemed niceā¦like all of his friends.
āā¦Y-Y-You help m-me f-f-find A-Ara?āBucky smiled. āIs she one of your friends?ā
Paxton nodded.
Bucky nodded, still with a smile. āIāll help you find her then, yes. Do you want to come with me? Iāll help you find your friends.ā
Paxton slowly went to Bucky, still with his face partially buried in Hopeās fur.
āWhatās his name?ā
Paxton glanced at Bucky, then Hope.
āā¦Sh-She. H-H-her name isā¦isā¦H-Hope.ā
Bucky smiled. āI like that name. Come on, follow me.ā
Paxton followed Bucky out of the alleyā¦it was so bright.
Paxton looked around, squeaked, and pulled away, burying his face in Hopeās fur again.
There were so many peopleā¦any of them could work with motherā¦and Aramisā¦and Edrichā¦and Paxton would have to go homeā¦even though he didnāt want to.
āWhatās wrong?ā
Paxton pointed at all the people.
āYou donāt like big crowds? I get thatā¦would you feel better if I carried you?ā
Paxton looked up at Bucky.
Bucky seemed so nice.
Those other people could be meanā¦like Aramis and Edrich.
Paxton slowly nodded.
He lifted one arm up, still holding onto Hope with his other arm.
Bucky smiled and bent down. Paxton was lifted into his arms.
Bucky held him close.
Paxton wrapped his arms around Hope.
Hope made him feel safeā¦and somehow, Bucky made him feel safe too.
Paxton yawned.
He was sleepyā¦so tiredā¦soā¦
His eyes closed, and Paxton drifted off to sleep in Buckyās arms.
August 1, 2023 at 5:58 pm #152655@freedomwriter76 AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I LOVE THEM SOOOO MUCH!!!
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THE WAY YOU WROTE LUNA AND PAXTON š GAH!!! Those were probably my favorites!
Also it cracked me up when Clint asked if sheād been living under a rock cuz I was thinking āWELLLLL sheās technically been living under multiple.ā XD XD
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#ProtectSebAugust 1, 2023 at 6:01 pm #152656I really have such a soft spot for Paxtonā¦.
heās legit my babyā¦. (He is the baby of the group after all lol)
Him and November are justā¦ *Squeezes both of them soooo tight*
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#ProtectSebAugust 1, 2023 at 7:13 pm #152658Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@GODLYFANTASY12 AWW, GIRLLLLLL, TYSM!!!!!! ššššš
Oh my goodness, I’m so glad you liked Luna and Paxton’s POVS!!!!!! I was probably the most worried about the two of them, heh, especially Luna š
I guess I just guessed to write Paxton as a frightened little boy with a sweet nature and write Luna as an empathetic, concerned, faithful, quite naive girl, lol…so I’m glad you liked it <3
And yessssss…Luna and Clint’s whole exchange was so much fun šš
Yessss, Paxton is THE BABY!!!! ššš„°š„°
OH, OH!!!! I know they’re #SPOILERS…but oh my goodness…I have to tell youuuuuu…I have this scene idea in my head where Paxton is really having a rough day where he’s really scared…and his friends aren’t really close by (all working to help the Avengers, stop villains, etc) and he’s just really having it rough (the baby š) but Bucky, having learned that Paxton likes to paint, gets Paxton some paint and lets Paxton paint on him…and Paxton is nervous at first, thinking Bucky will get mad, but Bucky gently leads Pax’s hand and has Paxton’s paint-covered finger touch his cheek, leaving paint behind…and my heart has officially melted šš
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