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August 1, 2023 at 4:20 pm #152631
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@godlyfantasy12 *joins you to cry over Grimm and Steve, bringing tissues*
Haha…well, I’m glad I could make you want to write 😂😂
WAIT-HANG ON A SEC-I HAVEN’T SEEN ALL OF GRIMM’S AWESOMENESS!?!?!?!?
girllll…you’re gonna make me fall even more in love with Grimm 😂🥰🥰😍
August 1, 2023 at 4:20 pm #152632@freedomwriter76 wow, that was fun to read!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 1, 2023 at 4:21 pm #152634Anonymous
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@keilah-h tysm! 💖💖 Glad I could give you some fun!! 😄
August 1, 2023 at 4:25 pm #152636@freedomwriter76 you’re welcome!
Also, who’s your profile pic of? It’s too small for me to make it out, although I can kinda guess that it’s your favorite lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 1, 2023 at 4:27 pm #152638Anonymous
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yeahhhhhhh, it’s Bucky 😂😂
August 1, 2023 at 4:36 pm #152643@freedowmriter76 yep….
And mine’s Tech.
We just love our charries don’t we.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 1, 2023 at 4:36 pm #152644@freedomwriter76 agh tagged u wrong.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 1, 2023 at 4:39 pm #152646Anonymous
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@keilah-h Indeed we do 😂😂 some charries are just amazing, what else can we say??? XXD
August 1, 2023 at 4:43 pm #152648@freedomwriter76 ikr??
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 1, 2023 at 4:47 pm #152650Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h I have Chapter 3!!!!
(ngl, this one got longer…what else could y’all expect when I’m writing Grimm, ok??? 😂😂)
C H A P T E R 3
None of the others were around…he was alone…and chances were, the others were too.
Grimm changed back into his human form in an alleyway, having already avoided as many people as possible…knowing that maybe most people wouldn’t be used to a young man who could shift between a human and a wolf.
It just…wasn’t the kind of thing he assumed would be normal in this…odd place.
His finger drifted to the golden locket he wore and carried always.
He’d make it up to Mirella…one day.
Grimm walked out of the alleyway, walking as if this was normal…as if nothing was wrong…so he wouldn’t attract anyone’s attention.
It was how he survived.
Even though others hadn’t.
Grimm walked forward, forcing himself to do so. If he ignored the pain long enough…the wound would heal over, right?
Time heals all wounds, right?
Grimm shook his head, shoving aside the thoughts.
He needed to find the others…and fast.
Grimm walked further and faster.
He couldn’t deal with those thoughts…not now.
He needed to find the others…protect them.
Lyn, Nyx, and Snow especially.
They needed him…and he needed them.
Grimm stepped off the platform he was walking on, onto a gray street with white lines.
A loud honking-like sound sounded, and before Grimm even knew what was happening, a weird looking vehicle of some kind, but not a wagon, was heading for him.
He would leap out of the way, but he didn’t have time.
He felt something knock into him, hard, knocking the breath out of him. He gasped for air, laying back on the platform he’d been walking on…a sidewalk of some kind.
“You okay, kid?”
He blinked several times, trying to clear his blurred vision. He stared up at the man that stood above him, who wore some odd, blue, red, and white clothing with a big white star on the chest.
The man’s gaze shifted, and worry filled his blue eyes. “You have a cut right there.”
Grimm slowly sat up and looked at his left arm.
Sure enough, there was a cut about the length of his ring finger.
“There’s a pharmacy nearby…I can get a first aid kit and help you get that taken care of…would you like my help?”
He wasn’t exactly apt to receiving help from a stranger…nor did he know what a first aid kit was…but with how lost he was in this place…he didn’t really have a choice, now did he?
“Thanks…for saving me…I mean. And…yeah, we can”
“You’re welcome. Come on, let me help you. Here, I have this scrap of cloth. Press it against that cut for a few minutes.”
Grimm did so. He slowly rose to his feet and faced the man. “I’m Grimm…Grimm Beowulf.”
“Steve Rogers. Come on, let’s get to the pharmacy.”
Grimm followed after him, knowing that he probably didn’t really have another choice…and besides, this man had just saved his life, hadn’t he?
They reached a small, white building.
“Do you want to come with me, or would you rather stay out here?”
Grimm glanced at the building, then his arm. He slowly shrugged. “I guess I’ll stay out here.”
“Sure, whatever you need. I’ll be right back.”
Grimm slowly sat down on a bench a little ways off from the “Pharmacy”, a million thoughts tumbling in his head.
He needed to find his friends…he couldn’t let anything happen to them.
He couldn’t fail anyone else.
Minutes passed, but Grimm eventually heard footsteps. He turned his head, just as Steve exited the building and headed towards him, a small bag in hand.
Steve sat down on the bench beside him and smiled. “Here, you can take that cloth off now.”
Grimm did so.
He watched as Steve unzipped the bag and opened it to reveal a lot of things…that Grimm had never seen before.
Steve ripped a cloth out of a package. “This might sting for a minute.”
Grimm nodded.
He wasn’t immune to pain…nobody was.
Truth was, though, that someone who’d been through a lot of pain just…ignored it after a while.
It didn’t bother him as much as it once did…he’d been through enough by now to just…pretend the pain wasn’t there.
Though his arm stung, he didn’t even flinch.
Steve threw the wipe in a large can and grabbed bandages and another piece of cloth. “Here, I’m going to wrap your cut up in this along with some gauze. You okay with that?”
Grimm nodded.
Steve gently, but firmly, applied the bandage.
Grimm moved his arm.
It certainly felt better.
“Thank you…it feels a lot better.”
“You’re welcome. If you don’t mind me asking, where are you from…? You don’t look like you’re from around here.”
“I’m from a frozen kingdom…what is this place?”
“New York city…is there somewhere you need to go?”
He’d never heard of that place.
Grimm nodded. “Yes…but first I need to find my friends first.”
Steve raised an eyebrow, zipping up the kit. “Yeah? How many friends are you looking for?”
“Six.”
“Quite a lot. Tell you what, after I finish my patrol, I can take you to the compound…my friend Tony might be able to help you find your friends. How does that sound?”
Steve offered his hand.
Grimm took it and shook it.
He’d already found someone that he could at least somewhat trust in this new place…there was full honesty and even…compassion in Steve’s eyes.
“It sounds good.”
August 1, 2023 at 5:16 pm #152653Anonymous
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Chapter 4 is done as well!!! 🥰🥰
And y’alll!!!! Pax is next!!! 🥰😭🥰🥰💖
C H A P T E R 4
This place was interesting…strange…and she was alone.
But it would be alright.
The Light One would guide her steps.
Luna walked on the pavement, several rushed prayers escaping her lips.
She didn’t understand this place…but she would be alright.
She wished she knew where her friends were…but again, it would all be alright.
Although…she was rather lost.
There were odd wagons everywhere…and just different things in general.
It was awe-inspiring, truthfully.
It was colorful…bright…beautiful…very beautiful.
But she did need to find her friends…and figure out where she was.
She saw a man that was standing a bit away, on the same kind of pavement she was, greeting people and waving them past.
Maybe he could help!
Luna walked over to the man. “Excuse me? Can I have some help?”
The man looked down. His blue eyes widened a bit, and he raised an eyebrow. “Oh, hey there. Can I help you, kid?”
He was kind…honest…she could feel it…see it, even.
Luna smiled. “Do you know the way back to the land surrounding the city of A’Grend?”
The man blinked several times. He chuckled and rubbed the back of his neck. “Can’t say I have. This is New York city…are you lost?”
Luna slowly nodded. “I believe so…I’m looking for my friends. I’m Dolunay…but everyone calls me Luna.”
“Nice to meet you, Luna,” the man extended a hand, “the name’s Clint.”
Luna glanced at his hand, then him. She gasped. “Oh, you want me to shake it? Oh, so sorry! I’ve only recently gotten out of the caverns.” She giggled and shook the man’s hand. “Nice to meet you!”
The man smiled, but he was confused…very confused. “Same here. Alright Luna, who are your friends?”
“There’s November, Arabella, Grimm, Jocelyn, Nyx, oh, and Paxton! They’re all my new friends…and they’re good friends. Do you know where I could look for them?”
“Sure, but you’re going to have to give me a minute…I have to direct people away from an accident.”
“Oh, what kind of accident?”
“Well, two cars collided…and some people got hurt.”
Luna gasped. “Oh, I hope they’re okay…may The Light One help them. Also…what is a car?”
Clint blinked several times. “Uh…have you been living under a rock?”
“Not under a rock…but I have only recently left the only place I’ve ever lived…I’ve never really been anywhere until my friends came.”
Clint let out a quiet chuckle and rubbed the back of his neck. “…Yeah, that explains a lot.”
Luna slightly tilted her head.
What did he mean by that?
“I’ll help you, but like I said, you’re going to have to wait. My friend Tony may be able to help you find your friends and a way back home…but like I said, I have to finish directing people on the sidewalk.”
Luna glanced down at the pavement beneath her. “That’s what this is!? Hmm…sidewalk…it sounds fun!”
Clint raised an eyebrow, but he just as quickly shook his head and went back to directing people. “Yeah…okay…you can sit down in that bench over there, if you want.”
Luna nodded and went to the bench.
She quickly took a seat, gently kicking her legs.
The Light One had already given her someone that could help…oh, how good The Light One is.
Luna sat on the bench and waited for Clint.
“Thank you, Light One.” Luna whispered.
She’d find her friends soon…very soon.
August 1, 2023 at 5:53 pm #152654Anonymous
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Chapter 5 is done too!!!
(i’m on fire today 😂 having a lot of fun, lol)
C H A P T E R 5
“E-Ember? W-W-Wulf? L-Lyn? N-Nyx? L-L-Luna? A-A-Ara? Ara…” Paxton whimpered, walking around in the dark, crowded alleyway.
It was dark…he could barely see.
He was alone.
It was scary.
Paxton whimpered and buried his face in Hope’s tattered fur.
He…he didn’t like being alone!
His mother…or Edrich…or Aramis…they…they could find him!
Scratching sounded, and Paxton screeched, backing away as a black cat jumped, hissed, and ran away.
He sank to the ground, keeping his face buried in Hope’s fur.
He didn’t want to be alone.
He wanted Ember…and Lyn…and Nyx…and Luna…and Wulf.
He wanted Ara.
He really wanted Ara.
Paxton buried his face deeper into Hope’s fur.
He was scared…his family could find him…he was really scared.
He didn’t like the dark.
He didn’t like being alone.
He didn’t want to be alone…he wanted everyone else!
Footsteps sounded.
Paxton whimpered and crawled further into the shadows.
“Is someone in there?”
Someone found him!
It…it didn’t sound like his mother…or Aramis…or Edrich…but…but they could have sent someone to get him.
Paxton squeaked and held Hope closer.
“Hey…hey now, don’t be scared…I won’t hurt you, I promise. I just…I thought I heard something, and I wanted to make sure that no one was hurt. You can come out…”
If he came out…he’d be seen.
His…his family could find him.
Maybe this person was sent by his mother.
He…he didn’t wanna go home!
They’d hurt him…but he wanted to be safe…with everyone else…and Ara!
Paxton crawled deeper into the shadows.
A figure slowly sat down at the end of the alley.
Now Paxton was trapped!
Paxton lifted his knees to his chest and held Hope tighter. He didn’t want to be alone…he didn’t want to!
The man crossed his legs underneath him. “I promise, I won’t hurt you…I want to help you. Are you lost? I can help you find your family.”
Paxton squeaked.
“No family? Yeah, I get that. Well, then maybe I can help you find your friends.”
Find Ember and Wulf and Nyx and Luna and Lyn and Ara?
Paxton came out of the shadows a little bit.
Could he help him find Ara?
No…maybe this man was sent by mother…Paxton couldn’t trust him…he couldn’t go home to his mother…his brothers.
“…I’m Bucky. What’s your name?”
Bucky…Bucky…Paxton had never heard of that name.
Could he be someone that did want to help him?
Paxton came a bit more out of the shadows, but he didn’t lift his face from Hope…he wouldn’t…he couldn’t.
He loved Hope.
“There you go…see, I won’t hurt you, I promise. I just want to help you…I can try to help you find your friends. Now, what’s your name?”
Paxton came further out of the shadows. Light shone into his eyes. He closed them.
It was bright!
Paxton slowly reopened his eyes.
The man sitting at the end of the alleyway wore all black…which was scary…but…but he had a kind face.
Not like Aramis or Edrich.
The man smiled…and it wasn’t mean…kinda like Wulf’s!
He still seemed sad…also like Wulf.
Paxton came a little closer, and the man smiled more.
He flicked a strand of his shoulder-length brown hair behind his shoulder.
His left arm…it was…gray…and shiny! That was different. Paxton had never seen a shiny arm…
“What’s your name, kiddo?”
“…P-P-Pax-Paxton.”
The man smiled again. “Hi there, Paxton. Like I said, I’m Bucky.” The man stood.
Paxton looked up at him.
He knew Aramis and Edrich didn’t like him talking…but this man seemed nice…like all of his friends.
“…Y-Y-You help m-me f-f-find A-Ara?”Bucky smiled. “Is she one of your friends?”
Paxton nodded.
Bucky nodded, still with a smile. “I’ll help you find her then, yes. Do you want to come with me? I’ll help you find your friends.”
Paxton slowly went to Bucky, still with his face partially buried in Hope’s fur.
“What’s his name?”
Paxton glanced at Bucky, then Hope.
“…Sh-She. H-H-her name is…is…H-Hope.”
Bucky smiled. “I like that name. Come on, follow me.”
Paxton followed Bucky out of the alley…it was so bright.
Paxton looked around, squeaked, and pulled away, burying his face in Hope’s fur again.
There were so many people…any of them could work with mother…and Aramis…and Edrich…and Paxton would have to go home…even though he didn’t want to.
“What’s wrong?”
Paxton pointed at all the people.
“You don’t like big crowds? I get that…would you feel better if I carried you?”
Paxton looked up at Bucky.
Bucky seemed so nice.
Those other people could be mean…like Aramis and Edrich.
Paxton slowly nodded.
He lifted one arm up, still holding onto Hope with his other arm.
Bucky smiled and bent down. Paxton was lifted into his arms.
Bucky held him close.
Paxton wrapped his arms around Hope.
Hope made him feel safe…and somehow, Bucky made him feel safe too.
Paxton yawned.
He was sleepy…so tired…so…
His eyes closed, and Paxton drifted off to sleep in Bucky’s arms.
August 1, 2023 at 5:58 pm #152655@freedomwriter76 AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I LOVE THEM SOOOO MUCH!!!
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THE WAY YOU WROTE LUNA AND PAXTON 😭 GAH!!! Those were probably my favorites!
Also it cracked me up when Clint asked if she’d been living under a rock cuz I was thinking “WELLLLL she’s technically been living under multiple.” XD XD
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#ProtectSebAugust 1, 2023 at 6:01 pm #152656I really have such a soft spot for Paxton….
he’s legit my baby…. (He is the baby of the group after all lol)
Him and November are just… *Squeezes both of them soooo tight*
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#ProtectSebAugust 1, 2023 at 7:13 pm #152658Anonymous
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@GODLYFANTASY12 AWW, GIRLLLLLL, TYSM!!!!!! 💖💖💖💖💖
Oh my goodness, I’m so glad you liked Luna and Paxton’s POVS!!!!!! I was probably the most worried about the two of them, heh, especially Luna 😅
I guess I just guessed to write Paxton as a frightened little boy with a sweet nature and write Luna as an empathetic, concerned, faithful, quite naive girl, lol…so I’m glad you liked it <3
And yessssss…Luna and Clint’s whole exchange was so much fun 😂😂
Yessss, Paxton is THE BABY!!!! 😭😭🥰🥰
OH, OH!!!! I know they’re #SPOILERS…but oh my goodness…I have to tell youuuuuu…I have this scene idea in my head where Paxton is really having a rough day where he’s really scared…and his friends aren’t really close by (all working to help the Avengers, stop villains, etc) and he’s just really having it rough (the baby 😭) but Bucky, having learned that Paxton likes to paint, gets Paxton some paint and lets Paxton paint on him…and Paxton is nervous at first, thinking Bucky will get mad, but Bucky gently leads Pax’s hand and has Paxton’s paint-covered finger touch his cheek, leaving paint behind…and my heart has officially melted 😍😍
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