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August 1, 2023 at 3:24 pm #152616
@freedomwriter76 AAAHHHH MY BABY 😭 I love it already!!! And again no pressure to write this obviously (or to get everything right because umm I don’t expect that from anyone and I hope if I ever write a fanfic for y’all I wouldn’t be expected of that XD)
AHHH I AM SO HAPPY/EXCITED
and yusss it won’t take long for them to realize about Ara XD
may I ask the timeline of this?
is this after their adventure of my series or during? (Totally up to u, some things do kinda depend on that tho, so u might want to have it be during the series 😉 or since it’s a fanfic u can just have whatever u want and break the wall of space and time XD Idc)
Bruh I’m curious about the reaction with Nyx’s description they’ll be like “A fox…? Okie…” XD
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#ProtectSebAugust 1, 2023 at 3:28 pm #152617Bruh I can only imagine the poor baby being in that doctor-like room…considering he hasn’t ever been in a place like that before 😅
the doctors he’s been to before were in A’Grend and whatever else they’ve been able to find on their journey, and were obviously not that high tech so it’s probably pretty scary…
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#ProtectSebAugust 1, 2023 at 3:31 pm #152618AHHHH IS MY PAXTON ALONE?!?!?!
ahem, sorry sorry, my brain just had that though pop up and I was like 😱 XD
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#ProtectSebAugust 1, 2023 at 3:32 pm #152619Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 AHH, I’M SO HAPPY YOU LIKE IT!!!! 💖💖💖💖
Lol…yeah…they’ll have to try to get that one out of November 😂😂
It’s probably during their adventure, yeah! (they have everyone except for Corvina…who will be with the villains but will probably end up joining the heroes or just not being involved bc she’s like…”I’m done with these freaks” 🤣)
and yeah, lol!
So, like, the reactions to the descriptions will be later…so, like, since November said something about Lyn and Nyx…now the 2nd chapter (or at least part of it) is from Lyn’s POV…so it’ll kinda be like that.
What’ll be fun is that all of them run into different Marvel character(s). XXD
This is what I’m thinking, so let me know your thoughts. 😀 (they all reunite pretty soon after everyone is found, btw 😉)
Lyn/Nyx – Thor/Loki
Ara – Natasha
Luna – Clint
Grimm – Steve
Paxton – Bucky
and then Corvina will be with the villains, heh
August 1, 2023 at 3:34 pm #152620Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 Yeahhhh…November is really confused and scared, heh…poor baby 😭
and yes…little Pax is alone for now 😭😭💖💖
August 1, 2023 at 3:37 pm #152621Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Lyn is so much fun to write…her energy is just so much fun 😂😂
August 1, 2023 at 3:58 pm #152622Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 I have Chapter 2!!!
ahhh…I love Nyx 😂😂
C H A P T E R 2
“I hate this place already.”
“Oh, come now, Nyx, we’ve barely even begun our adventure here! I do wish we knew where the others were though…but we’ll find them soon! This place is so colorful!”
There were very tall buildings…with colorful lights!
Jocelyn twirled. “Oh, Nyxie, isn’t it beautiful!?”
“No!” Nyx hissed.
“Oh, come on,” Jocelyn picked Nyx off her head and carried him in her arms, “we’ll have plenty of fun! Now, let’s see if we can get somewhere high so we can find the others.”
Nyx grumbled, but Jocelyn paid no mind.
He was pretty grumpy…but she’d show him that they could have fun, even in a strange new place.
Jocelyn walked on what looked like a place to walk…it’s where other people were walking, at least.
Several people gave her odd looks she didn’t understand…but oh well.
She didn’t really mind.
She had her Nyx, and soon she’d find her other friends…so everything was good.
Everything would work out fine…she was sure of it.
“Can we go home now?”
“We have to find the others, Nyx! Besides…I don’t know how to get home from here…I’m not even sure where we are!” Jocelyn chuckled. “I’m sure we’ll find the others soon.”
“How do you know that?” Nyx grumbled, still laying in her arms.
“I just know. Now, would you like to walk beside me instead?”
“Yeah. I don’t want to look like some kind of baby.”
Jocelyn chuckled and set Nyx on the ground beside her. “Well, come on Nyxie, let’s go.”
“Stop calling me that…someone will hear you.”
“Aw, is someone embarrassed?”
“Are you talking to a fox?”
Jocelyn stopped in her tracks and turned to face the man that had spoken. The man wore odd green, black, and golden armor…but he looked fairly stylish in it.
“He’s a nyx!”
“Is that a type of fox?”
Jocelyn shook her head. “…He’s just a nyx.”
The man raised an eyebrow but didn’t say more. He smiled and bowed. “Good to meet you. I am Loki, Loki Laufeyson.”
“Jocelyn…and this is Nyx, my love.”
“Lyn!” Nyx hissed.
Another man walked over, wearing a different, but similar, armor to the first man. He glanced at the first man and raised an eyebrow. “Loki, what are you doing?”
The man, Loki, stood and faced the other man with a smile. “Greeting this wonderful lady right here, Thor…you could be more polite.”
The second man rolled his eyes and faced Jocelyn and Nyx. “Ignore him…my brother is crazy. I am Thor, Thor Odinson.”
“Nice to meet you both. I’m Jocelyn, my friends call me Lyn, and this is Nyx!” She lifted Nyx into the air.
“Jocelyn!” Nyx hissed, before climbing up her arm and jumping onto her shoulder.
Loki chuckled. “A feisty fellow, is he?”
“Oh…this isn’t the feistiest. Have you seen any of my friends?”
“We’ve seen a lot of people,” Thor chuckled, “this is New York after all.”
Jocelyn raised an eyebrow.
She’d never heard of that place.
“Well…if you don’t know my friends…do you know the way back to the land near A’Grend?”
Thor and Loki shared a glance. Loki faced her again, eyebrows furrowed together. “And where is that?”
“That’s what I was hoping you’d tell me…do you know the way back?”
Thor slowly shook his head. “Many apologies, but we do not…Tony might be able to help you though…he’s a friend of ours.”
“Could me and Nyx come with you to find this Tony?”
Loki smiled and nodded. “Anything for you. Thor, what do you say?”
Thor smiled. “I wouldn’t oppose…not at all.”
Jocelyn grinned. “Thank you very much! Hear that, Nyxie? We may be able to find a way back!”
“I said stop calling me that!”
Jocelyn laughed and pulled Nyx into her arms. She gave him a hug. “Oh, Nyx…I love you.”
August 1, 2023 at 4:07 pm #152623@freedomwriter76 I also love Nyxie!!! *Nyx glares at me. I stick my tongue out at him XD*
YES THIR AND LOKI ARE PERFECT FOR THE TWO OF THEM TO MEET XD what’s hilarious is Thor and Loki’s relationship is a lot like Lyn and Nyx’s 😂
also Steve and Grimm I’m super excited about too!!
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#ProtectSebAugust 1, 2023 at 4:08 pm #152624That was so great!!
“Are you talking to a fox?”
XD XD
Bruh that’s one of the things in the book Lyn is introduced in that’s hilarious actually, because (unless something changes) it actually doesn’t come out that Nyx can speak until towards the middle/end of the book XD so the whole book it looks like she’s talking to herself like some psychopath 🤣
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#ProtectSebAugust 1, 2023 at 4:10 pm #152625Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 Yes, Nyx is just amazing 💖💖😂
IKR!? 🤣🤣🤣 yesssss, they are so fitting to all be together in a group!!!! XXD
Yesssss…I already have an idea for a later convo between Steve/Grimm.
I’M SO HAPPY YOU LIKE IT!!!!
August 1, 2023 at 4:11 pm #152626Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 That’s hilarious 😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣
August 1, 2023 at 4:12 pm #152627GASP!!! @freedomwriter76 Grimm and Bucky need to have a convo about sisters 😭 😭
ugh…Grimm can really break ur heart honestly with the trauma he’s been through…
He really is a boy soldier in a way….forced to grow up too fast. He also has PTSD from war and battle, he just may not show it because he feels the need to be strong for others
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#ProtectSebAugust 1, 2023 at 4:15 pm #152628Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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🤯😱🫢
GIRLLLLLL…I JUST REALIZED SOMETHING ABOUT GRIMM/STEVE!!!!!
Grimm carries the Golden Locket because of Mirella…and Steve carries the compass because of Peggy
😭😭😭😭
August 1, 2023 at 4:16 pm #152629Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 *GASPS* they do need a convo!!!! AHHHH!!!!
poor Grimm…THE BABYYYYYYYYYYYYY 😭😭😭😭😭
(srsly tho…i love them all…but Grimm may still be my fav🤣🥰)
August 1, 2023 at 4:18 pm #152630@freedomwriter76 GAAAAAAHHHH *goes in corner and sobs over our two boys*
This makes me want to write 😂
seriously tho…I feel like there is so much about Grimm that I have yet to really display to y’all yet…
Like y’all know how awesome he is but at the same time you don’t know exactly how awesome, if that makes sense 😂
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