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July 17, 2023 at 6:37 pm #151262
Ohh yesss
I’ve thought about doing that, but I’m still a novice in animation. I need to find a more versitile program than krita, besides learning is a bit of a grind. it’s summer though… I suppose I don’t have an excuse other than I’m not feeling grindy lol. I’ve wanted to do one to royal tailor’s start over (Have you heard it? It’s so good! I’ve always considered it like the theme song of my wip) and Tauren wells used to be the lead singer of the band! I do one day want to do a wip tailor featuring that song XD The line “I’ll be right besides you when the world is getting colder” like really, that is Taurne and Lesli’s friendship in a nutshell.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
July 17, 2023 at 10:55 pm #151295@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @hybridlore @euodia-vision
Guys!!! I have the third chapter of my Wanda and Bucky AU
*takes a deep breath* I just want to say sorry in advance, a lot of this chapter is a flashback, and it’s based on some scenes in WandaVision
Also thanks to Freedom’s fic, I’m in debate whether Steve and Wanda are better than Bucky and Wanda XD
*cries* Sword (or at least the head director) is a terrible organization, and they will be mentioned quite a bit in this book
Also am I the only one who feels like they don’t do sad scenes justice, I tried really hard, but I feel like I don’t show the pain enough
Chapter 3
A few tears ran down Wanda’s face. Every now and then the pain she had once felt, would come back, like a storm that had never truly set. The grief would haunt her, and hold her with a tight grip. Like everything she had now, wasn’t what she could have had. She hated this, she didn’t want another fight. She didn’t… she couldn’t lose someone, not again.
Wanda looked out at the night sky through her bedroom window. The stars painted the sky, as a full moon shined lightly through her window. Her tears glimmering on her face, making the grief almost seem beautiful. Hiding the pain, the deep, overwhelming pain.
A soft hand touched her shoulder, as she turned to see James. A half smile spread across her face.
“You’re up early,” Jame said with a smirk.
Wanda gave a light laugh. It was 3 am in the morning. “What can I say, I’m an early bird,”
“Only when you want time to yourself,”
“Guess you didn’t take the hint,” Wanda turned to look at him, her face red from tears, and her stomach twisted from grief.
“What is it?” James gave a gentle smile.
Wanda froze, what wasn’t it? Everything felt wrong, grief was just overwhelming. “I don’t think I can do this,”
James sighed, he knew what she was talking about. “Wanda, our job is to save the universe,”
“That’s easy for you to say,” Wanda’s tone went cold and bitter.
James was about to argue, but the truth is she was right. He hadn’t really lost anyone, not like Wanda.
“They keep saying we won, but I still remember what we lost,” Wanda said in a shaky voice.
“I can’t imagine what this must be like for you,”
Wanda looked out the window, she couldn’t explain her hurt to James, not truly.
She could only remember…
~*~
Wanda closed her eyes, nothing was right. Nothing was good, just pain, absolute pain. And an emptiness, she had nowhere to go, no one to talk to, she was just behind the driver’s seat of her car.
She slowly opened her eyes, to see a notification on her phone. It was from an unknown person, but it stated something of interest to Wanda.
She gripped the steering wheel, if the email was right then Vision’s body was at S.W.O.R.D headquarters. Maybe she could give him a proper funeral and give herself some closer.
~*~
“Mam, you can’t just go in there.” The lady at the counter stated.
But Wanda ignored her, she continued to walk through the doors. A few security guards chased after her, but she just quickened her pace. She didn’t want to hurt anybody, not with her powers.
“Wanda,” A man stated as she entered the next room. “We weren’t expecting you.” Yet the man didn’t even seem surprised.
“Who are you?”
“Tyler Hayward, I’m the director of S.W.O.R.D., what can I do for a noble lady like yourself?”
“I came to see Vision’s body, I want to give him a proper funeral,” Wanda stated, holding back tears.
“Come with me,”
Hayward led Wanda into a laboratory, where Vision’s body lay dismantled.
Wanda stepped forward to look closely at his faded body.
A few of the scientists tried to stop her but Hayward stopped them with a smug smile on his face. He then motioned for them to all leave, and like that, Wanda was left alone in the room. But Hayward stated something before he left.
“Sadly I can’t give you the body, for reasons,” He said, and then left the room.
A few tears spilled down Wanda’s face. She hovered her hand above Vision’s head. Her powers slowly feeling Vision’s lifeless body. The way she had done several times when he was alive.
Memories started to come back, and she remembered the harsh pain.
“I just feel you,” Wanda stated to a worried Vision, as she read the stone in his head.
“You could never hurt me, I just feel you,” Vision assured Wanda, telling her to destroy the stone.
“I can’t feel you…”
Her heart shattered into sharp broken pieces, and she wanted to scream, but she couldn’t. Like her quivering lips and the tears rolling down her face, was her being strong. And it was compared to what was happening inside her.
She rushed out of the room, quickening her pace. She couldn’t it bare it anymore. And she hated that he would never get a proper funeral.
Hayward let out a sigh as Wanda ran out. He hadn’t expected that, but he wouldn’t give up.
~*~
Wanda scrambled to the car, she hardly knew what she was doing. She was moving in a grief-filled chaos.
She opened the car door and then started to frantically look for something. She knocked a few things over, not being able to process anything. Finally, she found an envelope and got in a clearer mind.
She started her car, still not being able to process her full emotions.
~*~
Wanda stepped out onto the edge of the property. Her hands clasping the envelope, she slowly opened it. Her heart broke once more.
To grow old in -V
The words were written inside a red heart. It circled the property in front of her. It was the deed to the piece of property they had bought, to have a life together. To leave all the heartbreak, and tragedy behind and just to be together.
But now, now it seemed to only bring more heartbreak and tragedy.
Wanda tightened her grip on the deed holding it close to her chest. Finally, she let it all out, she let out all the sobs she had once kept in.
A sob for never seeing him again.
A sob for never hearing his voice again.
A sob for not having her brother here for her.
A sob for just everything, and everything that wasn’t.
Wanda fell to her knees, the deed dropping from her shaking hands. She continued to sob, and the worst part, there was no one there. No one to tell her everything was okay, no one to understand her pain.
She was just left, empty.
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 18, 2023 at 9:42 am #151311😭😭😭😭😭
Also am I the only one who feels like they don’t do sad scenes justice, I tried really hard, but I feel like I don’t show the pain enough
Tbh it’s really, really hard to show this kind of grief in writing, so I wouldn’t worry about it 😅 I don’t know if I could do it accurately, either.
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph and Eric from Ellette*
July 18, 2023 at 9:48 am #151312I do think that WandaVision showed it well, but it’s different when you’re watching someone sob, and reading someone sob
I keep acting like I’ve seen WandaVision, I haven’t, i just had my friend explain every detail to me XD
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 18, 2023 at 10:40 am #151316…..THAT WAS HORRIBLE!!!! 😭😭😭 If that’s what WandaVision is like I don’t want to watch it. 😭😭
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
July 18, 2023 at 10:44 am #151317Well the show is described as the dance between Death and Love
It’s sort of sweet and sort of not, because Wanda becomes a villain
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 18, 2023 at 10:45 am #151318@smiley Oh gotcha xD Well, good job anyway!! 😭😭
It’s kind of funny, one of my friends has an aunt who worked with the props for Wandavision, so all the decorations and stuff I think was her 😅
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph and Eric from Ellette*
July 18, 2023 at 10:46 am #151319oh gosh, whyyyyy 😭
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
July 18, 2023 at 10:46 am #151320sort of not, because Wanda becomes a villain
Wait WHAT?!?! 😭😱
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph and Eric from Ellette*
July 18, 2023 at 10:50 am #151322Yeah… she holds a bunch of people captive so she can live happily with her husband
And she has people playing a role. Basically forcing people to act in her TV show
And then when the show is over she loses her children, that she had while she was on the TV show
So in multiverse of madness she’s willing to do what ever is necessary to get her kids back
Yeah… it gets really dark and it makes me mad because she’s not suppose to be the villain
In my opinion
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 18, 2023 at 10:52 am #151323Wait that’s so cool!!!! That would be a really fun job
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 18, 2023 at 11:03 am #151325Yeah ikr!!
Auughghhh Marvel WHY????? 😭
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph and Eric from Ellette*
July 18, 2023 at 3:54 pm #151413@mineralizedwritings Oh, you don’t need to animate it straight off! You can just have a lyric video, and every time the lyrics change it shows a new picture or something.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
July 18, 2023 at 4:32 pm #151418Yeah I could do it like that! I’m an all or nothing kind of person… so generally if I don’t plan on doing it the best I could I don’t do it 🤦🏻♀️ it’s not the healthiest mentality but it’s how I am 😂
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
July 18, 2023 at 4:39 pm #151419@smiley whoa, that was sad!!
also, tbh I don’t agree with Marvel ruining the character either, but I feel like I’d go crazy too if I were her. They just took it a bit too far.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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