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May 25, 2024 at 12:19 pm #180002
Hey yall I’m back or at least on for a second, I’ve been off for a while which has honestly been really good for me and has taught me some stuff, especially about the Lord
Truthfully I hadn’t really been writing and it was only about a week or two ago I got back into it, when my 19 people friend group decided to write a book together and the Google doc became crazy with Brian Storming lol and it just reminded me why I loved to write
Right now I’m not going to be showing any original stuff because I’m still working on it and figuring out what to do, but I do have a fanfic that came to me all of two days ago and I really want to share it with someone lol
Also, I really haven’t been keeping up or anything so if there’s anything really important I need to know please tell me
(Also me totally just realizing I spelled “our fanfics”, “are fanfics” lol)
Also, freedom I read that dystopian chapter, and Steve!!! *cries for a good eight hours*
Another thing, I do have another fanfic idea that has been in my mind for like a month now, but the only problem is I don’t know if you guys have read the Lunar Chronicles, but it’s this really amazing sci-fi, fairytale mash-up book series and i LOVE IT SO MUCH LIKE AS MUCH AS MARVEL
So I’ve been working on a marvel-lunar crossover and it’s gotten complex lol but I can’t share it without spoiling the whole book series so you guys can decide if you want that or not
Also, I will only be on Mondays, Tuesdays, and Fridays and on and off on the weekends
Also, this fanfic that I’m sharing now is like what if Polaris (Pietro and Wanda’s half-sister from the comic was in the MCU) I changed a lot about her story but kept her personality, and also she’s bipolar which is very new to me and so I’m really trying it write well but you don’t see it in this chapter but oh my word this book only makes me think of what a good brother Pietro is
But also I missed y’all and it good to be back for at least a little bit, but I wont be on as much as I was and I won’t be in any of the RPs
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Chapter 1
After leaving Strucker, Steve made his way down the stairs, keeping himself alert. He was yet to see the girl again and part of him had no want to, but yet the question ached in his mind.
Did Strucker really experiment on human beings?
He didn’t really have anything to say since he himself was an experiment, but that was different, that was by his trusted country. Were they sign-ups like him or were they forced?
“Help!” The scream echoed through the walls and raised Steve’s alarm as he ran down the hallway. He was in a full-pace sprint when he reached the reason for the loud cries that had continued since the first one.
There was a young girl with long green… hair that was twisted into braids and pale white skin. Her eyes were the color of emeralds and panic was written all over her face. “Please help me! My parents! I don’t- I’m scared!” Her sentences were full of slurs and hesitations and Steve felt pity for the girl who Hydra had clearly scarred in some way.
“I need you to remain calm, we’re here to help.” He kept his voice reassuring and calm, hoping to contrast the girl’s anxiety and nerves.
Steve took another step forward, the girl flinched but didn’t do anything, so he took another. After one more he looked up to see something different on the girl’s face, happiness and bitterness both combined.
“Wow, you’re even more moral than they said you’d be.” The girl brought up her hand which was now encased with a green glow and sent some sort of energy blast at him and before he knew it everything went black.
~*~
“Are you alright?” The man’s voice was thick with a Sokovian accent. Steve barely opened his eyes to see a tall man with silver hair next to the younger girl who had… who had knocked him out, the realization struck him and he wondered how long he was out for.
“I’m fine.” She said it with confidence and Steve couldn’t help but be confused by this, did they know each other? Were they friends? And just how old was this girl?
“We should go and find Wanda, she’s probably off intimidating people with her stand-in-the-corner creepily approach.” The guy said it with a smirk and the girl let out a small laugh as she followed behind him, and before he knew it they were both gone in a flash.
“Steve, are you there?” Nat’s voice asked over the comm, an edge of worry was in her voice and he couldn’t help but take a little notice of that.
“Yeah I’m here, but there’s another Enhanced out here, don’t engage,” Steve grunted as he got up, feeling like there was a giant bruise on his rib cage.
“Wow Steve, leave us some to find,” Natasha said with an amused tone.
“Believe me, I’d like to.”
~*~
Steve made his way off the ship and followed Maria. She pulled up some images on her tablet that she probably thought he could read but he couldn’t.
“Any news on the Enhanced?”
“Three of them, all siblings, the first girl you meant and the guy are twins and both twenty Wanda and Pietro Maximoff, the other one is fourteen…” Maria’s voice trailed off, looking at Steve with a certain sympathy she didn’t usually show. “A Lorna Dane, she was adopted for a short time after the siblings were orphaned at ten and four when a shell collapsed their apartment.”
She pulled up a clip of three teens protesting for Sokovian rights, a wave of anger was spread on all three of their faces, they all had brown hair instead of the green and silver hair the two had had when he saw them today, this must have been before the experiments.
“And their powers?”
“The man has an increased metabolism and muscle gain, his twin has telepathy and telepathic powers and the youngest one has metal manipulation that also allows her to send blasts of metallic energy…” Maria gestured to his stomach where he had taken the blast.
Steve just gave her a confused look.
“He’s fast they’re weird.”
Maria pulled up soem articles about Sokovia and handed the tablet to him, he skimmed it, distraught by what he read.
Apartment building bombed, with over a hundred casualties.
Streets wiped out by tear gas.
More than a hundred stores were raided.
And they simply continued…
“They’re from Sokovia, a country that has become a sort of war ground. It’s nothing special but is also everything special.”
He nodded and stepped onto the elevator.
“This says they all signed up for the experiments, it’s nuts.”
“Yes, ’cause who would let a doctor experiment on them to help in the fighting efforts,” Steve said it with a smirk.
“We’re not at war captain,” Maria stated, her serious look back on.
“They are.” The elevator closed and Steve was at least a little proud of that exit. Yet a thousand questions filled his mind and a certain empathy he felt for the three.
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneMay 25, 2024 at 2:20 pm #180017@smiley hello there!!
how’ve you been?
I’m busy
being a simp for a lunatic characterwatching videos relating to characters I use in fanfics. also playing some Minecraft.Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 28, 2024 at 6:14 pm #180138@smiley So happy to hear you’re doing well, girlie <3
And also….
I AM LOVING THE NEW FANFIC!!!!
😍😍😍😍😍
(and I’m so happy to see you <3)
#BeardedSteveRogersIsSuperior
May 31, 2024 at 1:54 pm #180306I’ve been mostly good, thanks for asking
What about you?
Also aren’t we all lunatics about certain characters lol
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneMay 31, 2024 at 1:59 pm #180309It good to be back again
And thanks!! Honestly though I took a marvel break a little while ago and since then it’s been harder to get back into my fanfictions cause while I still love Marvel none of my fanfics are really interesting Mr
I think I’m actually enjoying taking characters from the comics that we haven’t seen yet cause there some interesting ones
And then my Lunar/marvel crossover, that one I have a lot of work in lol I texted my friend about it and she was like wow this got really complicated and I’m like yup that’s just how my brain operates XD
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJune 1, 2024 at 6:37 pm #180390@smiley lol I guess
also I’ve been making great progress on a fanfic!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 4, 2024 at 4:31 pm #180487And thanks!! Honestly though I took a marvel break a little while ago and since then it’s been harder to get back into my fanfictions cause while I still love Marvel none of my fanfics are really interesting
Yw! 💖 and I get that. I haven’t taken a break from Marvel (in fact I just rewatched Age of Ultron😂), but I’m still not really into writing fanfics rn. But Leon and Riker are running around in my brain, so at least I have them to work with😛
I think I’m actually enjoying taking characters from the comics that we haven’t seen yet cause there some interesting ones
For sure! I was actually thinking about your fanfic when that first scene of AoU happened when I rewatched it a couple days ago lollll
And then my Lunar/marvel crossover, that one I have a lot of work in lol I texted my friend about it and she was like wow this got really complicated and I’m like yup that’s just how my brain operates XD
Lolllll, yep, that’s how every writer’s brain operates😂
#BeardedSteveRogersIsSuperior
June 4, 2024 at 4:37 pm #180489@smiley I also text my friends about my fanfics lol.
That was what actually motivated me to put the words on the paper–the fact that I had fans who’d want to see it through–and now I have like a sixth of the notebook filled. Good times.
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