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April 3, 2018 at 1:11 am #69942
@seekjustice Oh, good. πΒ But wait, that’s funny. For some reason I always thought Rain was a few months younger than Chessy! πΒ Haha.Β So I pictured her as a fifteen- or sixteen-year-old kid. π
I’m going to say goodnight now!Β See you tomorrow hopefully.
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
April 3, 2018 at 2:01 am #69944Oh, by the way, I have no idea where the sabre in Babylon came from. I was just talking with a former KP member once and I mentioned that I liked sabres (In my experience, you Americans spell a lot of things wrong :D) and then I said that I had a sabre from Persia, India or Babylon. I actually have a friend who does own a cavalry sabre from India. And the Babylon one just stuck. *shrugs*.Β Other than the fact that I brandish it at @alia when we argue occasionally, it doesn’t do much.
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
April 3, 2018 at 2:03 am #69945Well, she’s actually about a year and a half older than Chessy. π
Good night!
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
April 3, 2018 at 8:06 am #69952@seekjustice I finished it. AHHH I just LOVE how you tied Les Mis and AToTC together! That is So. Cool! But all the sadness. *cries* So soon. It’s too much o_o Until there’s more, of course!
Also *shakes finger* Poor @rochellaine *hands you some tissues*
XD Chessy and Justice, I didn’t really think they should get together at the end of Stars Fill Infinity, but I’m fair game for this book. Usually whatever the author does, I go with. Usually π Although I kind of like these two together, especially after we found more out about him π
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April 3, 2018 at 6:44 pm #70004@seekjustice I read it! I read it! It was really good! I was aware going in that it was a sequel, so I wasn’t too surprised about references to things I didn’t know. That being said, I was able to follow what was going on pretty well. So, for people who haven’t read the first one, it’s still a very enjoyable story and you don’t get lost. Thank you for letting me read it! π
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
April 3, 2018 at 9:17 pm #70015@jenwriter17 Ha! @sleepwalkingmk just said she also didn’t think Chessy and Justice should be a thing at the end of Stars! πΒ But she’s falling for them faster than I am, and I think we’ll both be shipping them pretty hard by the end of the sequel. πΒ So you’ll have your way after all, I guess. π
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April 3, 2018 at 9:38 pm #70022@rochellaine Haha, I guess that’s two for your opinion. But don’t worry, you’ll come around to my way of thinking π π π
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www.jennaterese.comApril 4, 2018 at 5:00 pm #70078Thanks so much for your kind words π It really, genuinely means so much to me!
And guess what! I updated the document, there’s three more chapters now π I’m just experimenting, but let me know if you have to request access again. I don’t think you should need to, but I’m still learning the Google Doc ropes.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kdetvZPqqTzfuapzrNpwnHcoPkUuFVLkPaVl_BM6K-w/edit?usp=sharing
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
April 4, 2018 at 6:59 pm #70083@seekjustice Yay! I think I should be able to start reading it tomorrow π
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www.jennaterese.comApril 4, 2018 at 7:42 pm #70085@seejustice Okay, so ya know how I said I’d start reading it tomorrow?
I finished it.
I literally put off studying for a test to read it π (you should be proud and concerned) π
It was awesome! π I can’t wait for more.
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www.jennaterese.comApril 4, 2018 at 8:05 pm #70086@jenwriter17 Oh, I’m so jealous!Β But last time I got to read it before you did, so this time I guess it’s your turn. π
@seekjustice Oh my goodness!Β I wish I had seen this before!Β Now my brother’s birthday party is in progress, so I absolutely have to join in downstairs.Β (I was going to put a sad emoji here, but I can’t really be sad for my brother’s birthday, can I? π ) Anyway, I guess I’ll get to read it in a couple of hours!Β Β See you tonight!"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
April 4, 2018 at 8:12 pm #70087@rochellaine π
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www.jennaterese.comApril 4, 2018 at 10:08 pm #70088@seekjustice Ah!Β It’s great!!Β Only I almost wish I hadn’t watched ATOTC 1958 since it’s more fun to read something when it’s all going to be a surprise. πΒ But poor Justice!Β Why didn’t he get rid of those papers when he had the chance?! π
I really don’t like his cousin at all.Β He’s annoying in the bad way instead of the good way. πΒ I like flirtation, but not sappy grandiose flirtation.Β I prefer the sharp quick banter or quiet teasing.Β So Zachary seems a bit too fresh for someone Chessy just got acquainted with.Β I guess her liking of him has partly to do with the fact that he looks like Justice, though, doesn’t it?
But since I know the general plot, I’m pretty sure I’ll fall in love with Zachary before the end of the book, and will be devastated when(if?) he dies!
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April 4, 2018 at 11:50 pm #70095@seekjustice Wow! This was an excellent few chapters!! Oh man, I am so curious as to what happens now.
I didnβt care for Zachary. Heβs too flirtatious and he seems really fake, like heβs hiding ulterior motives. Justice, poor Justice. I donβt even know him and that hurt.
Theresa! We met Theresa! The one I had the pleasure to draw! Now that I know a bit more about her, I kinda want to do her over.
Thank you for letting me read this! π
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
April 5, 2018 at 6:23 am #70109@seekjustice WOAH. I’m so scared. I’m so scared. My word, reading Manly with Chessy was so heartbreaking :'( And Zachary and Justice being cousins gives this a different dynamic. I’m so scared. AHHHHHHHH
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