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    Rochellaine
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      @seekjustice Oh, good. πŸ™‚Β  But wait, that’s funny. For some reason I always thought Rain was a few months younger than Chessy! πŸ˜€Β  Haha.Β  So I pictured her as a fifteen- or sixteen-year-old kid. πŸ˜›

      I’m going to say goodnight now!Β  See you tomorrow hopefully.

      "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

      #69944
      SeekJustice
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        @rochellaine

        Oh, by the way, I have no idea where the sabre in Babylon came from. I was just talking with a former KP member once and I mentioned that I liked sabres (In my experience, you Americans spell a lot of things wrong :D) and then I said that I had a sabre from Persia, India or Babylon. I actually have a friend who does own a cavalry sabre from India. And the Babylon one just stuck. *shrugs*.Β  Other than the fact that I brandish it at @alia when we argue occasionally, it doesn’t do much.

        INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

        #69945
        SeekJustice
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          @rochellaine

          Well, she’s actually about a year and a half older than Chessy. πŸ˜€

          Good night!

          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

          #69952
          SleepwalkingMK
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            @seekjustice I finished it. AHHH I just LOVE how you tied Les Mis and AToTC together! That is So. Cool! But all the sadness. *cries* So soon. It’s too much o_o Until there’s more, of course!

            Also *shakes finger* Poor @rochellaine *hands you some tissues*

            XD Chessy and Justice, I didn’t really think they should get together at the end of Stars Fill Infinity, but I’m fair game for this book. Usually whatever the author does, I go with. Usually πŸ˜‰ Although I kind of like these two together, especially after we found more out about him πŸ˜€

            Read to explore worlds, write to create them.

            #70004
            Skredder
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              @seekjustice I read it! I read it! It was really good! I was aware going in that it was a sequel, so I wasn’t too surprised about references to things I didn’t know. That being said, I was able to follow what was going on pretty well. So, for people who haven’t read the first one, it’s still a very enjoyable story and you don’t get lost. Thank you for letting me read it! πŸ˜€

              "For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."

              #70015
              Rochellaine
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                @jenwriter17 Ha! @sleepwalkingmk just said she also didn’t think Chessy and Justice should be a thing at the end of Stars! πŸ˜€Β  But she’s falling for them faster than I am, and I think we’ll both be shipping them pretty hard by the end of the sequel. πŸ˜‰Β  So you’ll have your way after all, I guess. πŸ˜›

                "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                #70022
                Jenna Terese
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                  @rochellaine Haha, I guess that’s two for your opinion. But don’t worry, you’ll come around to my way of thinking πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

                  I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                  #70078
                  SeekJustice
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                    @skredder @sleepwalkingmk

                    Thanks so much for your kind words πŸ˜€ It really, genuinely means so much to me!

                    And guess what! I updated the document, there’s three more chapters now πŸ˜€ I’m just experimenting, but let me know if you have to request access again. I don’t think you should need to, but I’m still learning the Google Doc ropes.

                    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kdetvZPqqTzfuapzrNpwnHcoPkUuFVLkPaVl_BM6K-w/edit?usp=sharing


                    @rochellaine
                    @jenwriter17

                    INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                    #70083
                    Jenna Terese
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                      @seekjustice Yay! I think I should be able to start reading it tomorrow πŸ™‚

                      I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                      www.jennaterese.com

                      #70085
                      Jenna Terese
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                        @seejustice Okay, so ya know how I said I’d start reading it tomorrow?

                        I finished it.

                        I literally put off studying for a test to read it πŸ˜› (you should be proud and concerned) πŸ˜‰

                        It was awesome! πŸ™‚ I can’t wait for more.

                        I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                        #70086
                        Rochellaine
                        @rochellaine
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                          @jenwriter17 Oh, I’m so jealous!Β  But last time I got to read it before you did, so this time I guess it’s your turn. πŸ˜‰


                          @seekjustice
                          Oh my goodness!Β  I wish I had seen this before!Β  Now my brother’s birthday party is in progress, so I absolutely have to join in downstairs.Β  (I was going to put a sad emoji here, but I can’t really be sad for my brother’s birthday, can I? πŸ˜€ ) Anyway, I guess I’ll get to read it in a couple of hours!Β  Β See you tonight!

                          "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                          #70087
                          Jenna Terese
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                            @rochellaine πŸ˜›

                            I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                            #70088
                            Rochellaine
                            @rochellaine
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                              @seekjustice Ah!Β  It’s great!!Β  Only I almost wish I hadn’t watched ATOTC 1958 since it’s more fun to read something when it’s all going to be a surprise. πŸ˜€Β  But poor Justice!Β  Why didn’t he get rid of those papers when he had the chance?! πŸ™

                              I really don’t like his cousin at all.Β  He’s annoying in the bad way instead of the good way. πŸ˜‰Β  I like flirtation, but not sappy grandiose flirtation.Β  I prefer the sharp quick banter or quiet teasing.Β  So Zachary seems a bit too fresh for someone Chessy just got acquainted with.Β  I guess her liking of him has partly to do with the fact that he looks like Justice, though, doesn’t it?

                              But since I know the general plot, I’m pretty sure I’ll fall in love with Zachary before the end of the book, and will be devastated when(if?) he dies!

                              "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                              #70095
                              Skredder
                              @skredder
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                                @seekjustice Wow! This was an excellent few chapters!! Oh man, I am so curious as to what happens now.

                                I didn’t care for Zachary. He’s too flirtatious and he seems really fake, like he’s hiding ulterior motives. Justice, poor Justice. I don’t even know him and that hurt.

                                Theresa! We met Theresa! The one I had the pleasure to draw! Now that I know a bit more about her, I kinda want to do her over.

                                Thank you for letting me read this! πŸ™‚

                                "For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."

                                #70109
                                SleepwalkingMK
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                                  @seekjustice WOAH. I’m so scared. I’m so scared. My word, reading Manly with Chessy was so heartbreaking :'( And Zachary and Justice being cousins gives this a different dynamic. I’m so scared. AHHHHHHHH

                                  Read to explore worlds, write to create them.

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