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December 19, 2024 at 4:34 pm #192411
WHAT
GIRL
Your writing is so good!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!
"Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."
December 19, 2024 at 4:37 pm #192412To everyone who threw snow at me:
I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….
I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!
I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a trigger warning would really be appropriate I guess XD
I promise it’s not really a lot darker than what I’ve written before, I just want to be careful since I’m not sure how young of people will see it so yeah…
If you want to see what I’ve been working on I can for sure send you a link!!!!
"Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."
December 19, 2024 at 4:40 pm #192413*saves snowballs*
Throws two at @esther-c and @whaley
"Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."
December 19, 2024 at 6:21 pm #192423@hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium
Ok, thanks.
Shattered… fragments.
Thoughts… broken.
What? Why?
Memories whirl.
Voices, who?
Flashes, noise, tears.
Why?
Louder, louder! So many, too many. Never… end.
Could it… end?
Fragments. Pieces. Shattered. Tiny, big, scathing.
Guilt. Much guilt.
Never end. Only noise.
Too many. Sleep. Dream. Peace.
Ends.
New day, fragments and cycle through again. Broken.
"No! Monkeys should have pets, all monkeys should have pets!"
December 19, 2024 at 9:42 pm #192432Oh my goodness. 🤯
Oh, I never read the prologue you posted…sorry. I’ll get to it this weekend.
If you want to find all the cops, they're hanging out in the donut shop.
December 19, 2024 at 9:45 pm #192433oh my goodness
girl
that was literally amazing
I’m like speechless
"Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."
December 19, 2024 at 9:46 pm #192434Oh I forgot I posted that lol
you’re fine!
"Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."
December 19, 2024 at 10:02 pm #192435I finished my 350 words. They’re on paper, but here’s a snippet:
Being chained to a wall and forced to learn history was possibly the most miserable start to a morning ever. Burnt toast did not help either. Jorin sighed. Malzor was a terrible cook, or maybe he just didn’t care whether Jorin was well fed or not. He could almost taste his fathers’s fried laka.
“Moron!” Jorin shrank back as Malzor loomed over him. “What was I saying?”
It would be easier to pay attention if you didn’t make such disgusting food, Jorin thought, but he kept his mouth shut. He had learned the hard way that Malzor did not appreciate insolence. Malzor flung the Book of Prophecy, hitting Jorin square in the head.
“You are worthless. Whatever possessed me to get an apprentice?” He unlocked the chains and shoved Jorin out of the temple. “Go buy me a paper. My usual source of information is…indisposed.”
*screeches* I just finished my previous 7 snowballs! Revenge is in order…
@linus x8 @grcr x2 @highscribeofaetherium x3 @whalekeeper x1
- This reply was modified 1 month, 1 week ago by The Most Esteemed Feathered One.
If you want to find all the cops, they're hanging out in the donut shop.
December 20, 2024 at 7:58 am #192441Wow. That is an amazing character background! I don’t know him (Hans), but I’m assuming he hates Jews? Because what you just wrote is an powerful reason why he does.
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
December 20, 2024 at 9:30 am #192442*doubles over in agony*
Gahh! I’ve been struck! I’m dying! HELP ME SOMEONE!
I now have 650 words to write, and after that, you can bet you’ll be receiving a portion of my 26 snowballs (:<
A disturbingly short time ago, in a land uncomfortably close by...
December 20, 2024 at 11:02 am #192453*deep sigh as I head off to my lair to write*
🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍
December 20, 2024 at 11:13 am #192457Get to work, or I’ll pile you with snow until you’re snowmen!! @koshka 💨⚪ +4 @elishavet-pidyon 💨⚪ +4 @power 💨⚪ +4
#ProtectAdolinKholin
December 20, 2024 at 11:16 am #192458YES MA’AM. *squeak of terror*
Actually, I’m making Christmas cookies today, just like I have the past two-to-three days this week. Getting ready for a cookie exchange. So it’ll be a bit. XD
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
December 20, 2024 at 11:24 am #192462*begins building Frozen style ice palace*
If you want to find all the cops, they're hanging out in the donut shop.
December 20, 2024 at 11:34 am #192463 -
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