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December 18, 2024 at 12:14 pm #192305
Thank you.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
December 18, 2024 at 12:50 pm #192309*comes back from getting buckets to use for a snow castle*
Hmmm… choices, choices….
TNPT đ
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
December 18, 2024 at 12:54 pm #192311Okay. I’ll be working on that right away. I did get called into work unexpectedly today, so it will take longer than I was hoping, but I hopefully will post the next chapter soon.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
December 18, 2024 at 2:41 pm #192319@freed_and_redeemed BRUH I KNOW RIGHT???
lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
December 18, 2024 at 4:03 pm #192323I have FINALLY caught up with all my snowballs!!!!!!!!!!
and I wrote a Lotr paper while doing it. I thought I would post it here and see what you all think. (My father gave me this assignment in preparation for a Lotr New Year’s night out my siblings and I are having with two friends.
Why do you enjoy the film?
I enjoy watching The Fellowship of the Ring because of its virtuous theme of good overcoming evil.
Although God is not mentioned in the film, it portrays so much of the real world and, therefore, includes many attributes of Jesus. Courage, hope, faithfulness, love.
As a writer myself, I always enjoy viewing and studying other peopleâs characters. Their characterâs arcâŠtheir personality typeâŠtheir strengths and weaknesses. This is sometimes more evident in a book format, but observing the film as well is a skill Iâm trying to grow at.
What is the core message?
Throughout the filmâs journey, you see a picture of fighting the good fight. You see people are weak and easily tempted by evil, but loveâtrue, long-suffering loveâempowers them to continue on and enables them to resist temptation and destroy evil.
How is it benefiting your life?
The Fellowship of the Ring is a magnanimous work of story, film, and Truth. Stories impact people, and people impact the world. This can be good or bad. It comes down to the kind of stories the people read. We want stories that are true, noble, right, pure, lovely, admirable, praiseworthy, and virtuous.
From what Iâve mentioned above, and from my own experience of reading and watching it, The Fellowship of the Ring, is one of those stories.
For me, the biggest impact is the inspiration to create stories like The Fellowship of the Ring. Stories that are masterfully written, crafted with creativity, and shine great Truth. Though, I would probably write stories that are more like the Chronicles of Narnia than the Lord of the Rings.
However, the story is also a reminder to guard our hearts and fight for goodness against the darkness. Itâs not an easy thing to doâŠIâm talking to myself here. But it is the right thing, and He will help us.
I now have 22 snowballs to hit people!!!!!!!!!
@ellette-giselle 1 snowball @grcr 2 snowballs @elishavet-pidyon 3 snowballs *hit you back* @rae 4 snowballs @the_lost-journal 2 snowballs @power 10 snowballs!!!! Yes, that was 10. Have fun writing!Everyone! Write or die!
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
December 19, 2024 at 10:46 am #192367@elishavet-pidyon I love itđđđ
Is there no one else you can throw snowballs at???đ« đ€Ł
December 19, 2024 at 10:50 am #192368*Happily stacks my 24 snowballs and enjoys a temporary retirement*
#ProtectAdolinKholin
December 19, 2024 at 11:45 am #192373I’m nearing the end of my required words, and was planning on hitting you, but now I’m scared.
If you want to find all the cops, they're hanging out in the donut shop.
December 19, 2024 at 12:12 pm #192376400 more words.
I honestly can’t believe I’m sharing this…HUGE, MASSIVE, PLOT TWISTY SPOILERS
@rae you might wanna read thisđ«ŁHans is taking over his own story
âSo, you figured it out.â
Hans stepped forward, fists clenched, eyes burning. âThatâs why you never loved meâŠwhy you neverâŠneverââ
âWhy would I love you?â Heinrich scowled, settled behind his desk, pulled out a cigarette. âYouâre not my son.â
âYou still-!â
âI raised you because I had no choice. Did you think I would turn you out onto the streets? Did you think your mother would want to be disgraced? Did you think your actual father would want anyone to know that he had a child with my wife?â
Hans stepped forward, body trembling. âIf you knew-!?â
âWas I just supposed to tell you? Then what? Would you go to your father that did nothing for you? I gave you a home, a place to sleep, food to eat, brothers to spend time withââ
âYou beat me, treated me as if I was worth less than dirt under your feet.â
Heinrich slammed his hand down on the desk, making Hans jump. He stood and glowered at Hans. âYou may not be my son by blood, but you are still my son by law, and I may do with you as I please. Youâre lucky you inherited your motherâs fair hair and complexion, else I would have never been able to convince anyone you were mine after I found out your mother betrayed meâŠdidnât even know until after she perished, though your dark eyes left questions open all along.â
âLucky I looked enough like you so I could be lied to?â
âLucky you donât look like a Jew.â
A Jew? A Jew like the man that killed his mother and Frau Bakst? A Jew like the man he hated and the people he heard others often despised?
âYouâve already learned that you will get none of my inheritanceâŠbecause youâre not mine.â
Hans stiffened, holding back stinging tears. âBecause Mama had me with another man.â
Himmler scowled. âBecause you should have never been born.â
A mistake.
Nothing but a mistake.
Because his mother made the choice to have a child with a man other than her husband.
A mistake because his mother had him with a Jewish man she was not married to.
âFelix is only your half brotherâŠyou and Himmler are step-brothers, not even related by blood. You donât truly belong in this family, Hans,â Heinrich settled back down in his chair, âyou never have, and you never will.â
This man needs to stop getting more and more complexđ« đ”âđ«
*saves snowballs, stacking at least 40+ of them in a corner*
December 19, 2024 at 12:51 pm #192379*finished my 100… saving my four little half-ice snowballs in a bucket*
*building a snowman*
INTP.
Have a carrot.December 19, 2024 at 2:13 pm #192394Forgot to return here.
The last chapter I wrote was 2,546 words long, so I think I got through all those snowballs.
Now I have 20. What to do with them?
Throws 4 at each of the following:
@theducktator
@grcr
@highscribeofaetherium
@savannah_grace2009
@theshadowSometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
December 19, 2024 at 2:29 pm #192397Very nice! Although I have not watched the movies (I saw part of the first one?) I can definitely apply all you said to the books. Including writing stories more like Narnia instead.
*chokes on snow*
Yay! Onnendel is becoming my favorite of the cast. XD
Oh. Ick.
I should have seen that coming. That’s ugly. Wow. *awed applause* Well done. *hands you The Accolade of Plot Twists*
You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan
December 19, 2024 at 2:41 pm #192398*adds you to my revenge list*
A disturbingly short time ago, in a land uncomfortably close by...
December 19, 2024 at 3:56 pm #192402Wait wait wait.
Hans is half-Jewish?
ok that is GENUINELY CRAZY.
First off, that makes anything he did in Freedom’s Fire THAT much worse. Like seriously dude.
Second off, now I feel a bit sorry for him. He literally just got told his entire life is a lie.
Kinda like some of my own charries……
poor things
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
December 19, 2024 at 4:06 pm #192407AND YOU ASK WHY I THROW SNOW AT YOU!!!??
This was AWESOME!!!!
I love this!!! I love it so much!! Ahhhhh!!! SO GOOOODDDDD!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
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