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April 14, 2016 at 8:42 pm #11169
*hands bandages to @Daeus and comforts @kate-flournoy*
@writefury that was really good. I love Cobalt’s humor.
*Breathe @rolena-hatfield. Breathe.*April 14, 2016 at 9:16 pm #11175Hey @bluejay, you should be the official Cobalt fan club physician.
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April 14, 2016 at 9:33 pm #11177Haha! I’m reading through everything and you guys are cracking me up! This is so great.
Theater kid. Currently depressed because I can't stop listening to sad musicals.
April 14, 2016 at 10:08 pm #11182Hmmm ok @daeus. Although I’m not always very good around real blood. Written blood will be ok. Anyone else need me? *Raises eyebrows*
April 14, 2016 at 10:12 pm #11183Thanks for all the tips, guys! 🙂
Wow, Cobalt has a fan club now? *bursting with happiness*
I shall most certainly consent to this. 😀April 14, 2016 at 10:15 pm #11185@kate-flournoy, I elect you president. *slams down gavel in a carefully chosen empty spot*
April 14, 2016 at 10:18 pm #11186official Cobalt fan club physician
@writefury, @daeus has made me a doctor *see above* can I go and treat Cobalt now? It goes against my physician nature to see him injured and just lying there. Please let me heal him. Please….!!!! *begs with hands clasped and eyes pleading* Does he survive? Will he be alright? He’s just come back from the dead, he can’t die now. Save him, @writefury. Save him.
In other words I am really loving Cobalt and his story. Well done. 😀April 14, 2016 at 10:19 pm #11187*slams down gavel in a carefully chosen empty spot*
Phew, no hands to fix. *grins happily*
April 14, 2016 at 10:34 pm #11190Don’t worry, @bluejay. He’s up and about *cough* much sooner than he should be.
You have my permission to go about doctoring him. 😛April 14, 2016 at 10:35 pm #11191Wow, I better be keeping my hands far away from these virtual gavels, *looks over to bookshelf where the real-life gavel is sitting*
Theater kid. Currently depressed because I can't stop listening to sad musicals.
April 14, 2016 at 10:37 pm #11192*gasp* everyone back! she’s armed. XD
Just kidding. But really, watch the gavels around here.April 14, 2016 at 10:43 pm #11194Hears gasp and runs in. Sees gravel and grabs it. Chucks it out the window. Phew. No more gravels. Too dangerous. I have to much to do, without tending to injured hands. *hears a moan through the open window* Oh no! Who did the gravel land on? I told you they were deadly.
Ah, let me go and see my suffering patient Cobalt. *looks around surprised* He’s healed fast. I like it when my patients are like that.
@writefury ;P- This reply was modified 8 years, 7 months ago by BlueJay.
April 15, 2016 at 9:24 am #11227I elect you president. *slams down gavel in a carefully chosen empty spot*
@writefury Awesome!…
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What exactly does a president do? 😛 😉
April 15, 2016 at 10:26 am #11229*comes in rubbing bump on head, gavel in hand* Does this belong to someone? I was out taking a breather as instructed by the official Cobalt fan club physician @bluejay when this thing came flying through the window! *tucks gavel safely away on @christi-eaton shelf*
@kate-flournoy *clears throat* the president should 1) organize meetings where we can exclaim over how much we love Cobalt! (while serving lemonade of course) 2) convince the authoress @writefury to give us more Cobalt! 3) … ummm… etc.
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April 15, 2016 at 3:51 pm #11270*Runs to you @rolena-hatfield. Grabs ice pack and places it on bump on head. Commands you to lie down and rest. Grabs gravel and locks it in a cupboard. Dust hands off. *sigh* Life is so busy as a doctor.*
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