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    Elishavet Elroi
    @elishavet-pidyon
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      @godlyfantasy12

      thank you! This’ll be a welcome challenge.


      @anatra23
      I’ve read a few of the Redwall books, namely Redwall, Mossflower, The Bellmaker, and that one about the baggers where that lord fellow falls off a cliff 😉 . I haven’t read any in a while though.

      Have you read Mistmantle? My brother liked them but didn’t get hooked, while we did.

      You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

      #106682
      Anatra
      @anatra23
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        @godlyfantasy12

        I agree. Beautiful design by a beautiful designer.
        Your plans for owning a fennec are wonderfully complicated lol.


        @elishavet-pidyon

        I haven’t read too many Redwall either, I just really enjoyed the books I did. (read, that is.)
        I’ve never heard of Mistmantle. I will look it up tho!

        #106713
        Keilah H.
        @keilah-h
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          Here’s the premise for my book!

          Torrent Starcatcher has had a hard life.

          She was born into a universe in turmoil; the violent dictator Indy has been in control since before her parents were born. Her mother, Liberty, died when Torrent was young, and her father, Hunter, was drafted into Indy’s army six years ago, and presumed killed n battle.

          Now, it’s just Torrent, her guardian Marek, and her half-blind cat Beaumont.

          Until one day, Beaumont leads Torrent into the cave on her family’s property. She discovers a thriving resistance against Indy, which her family was once a part of.

          When she learns her father might still be alive, she begs her new friends to help her rescue him.

          I’m not finished with it yet, but if you want to know more, head over to the “Worldbuilding in a dystopian novel” topic!

          Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

          #106714
          Keilah H.
          @keilah-h
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            @elishavet-pidyon I used that sort of thing in my novel–my MC’s dad uses a few self-tailored expressions. “Crosshairs and cutlery, you just won’t give up, will you?”


            @godlyfantasy12
            I have a character named Nyx too! She is a good deal more annoying, though. She’s also female, and she’s a Deinonychus (a certain species of dinosaur).

            Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

            #106716
            Elishavet Elroi
            @elishavet-pidyon
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              All these premisses are thrilling!

              So… Here’s Nyx’s portrait. It was fun to make and I learned quite a bit about drawing fur in the process. I’m so excited with how it turned out!Oct. 28, 2021, E

              You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

              #106717
              Elishavet Elroi
              @elishavet-pidyon
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                Oops! I didn’t tag


                @godlyfantasy12


                @koshka

                You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                #106718
                Koshka
                @koshka
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                  @elishavet-pidyon

                  Awww… That’s beautiful. He looks so real!

                  First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
                  Fork the Gork

                  #106725
                  GodlyFantasy12
                  @godlyfantasy12
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                    @elishavet-pidyon oh my word!!! Gorgeous!!!! You’re so talented my gosh!!!

                    #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
                    #ProtectMarcel
                    #ProtectSeb

                    #106726
                    Elishavet Elroi
                    @elishavet-pidyon
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                      @godlyfantasy12 @koshka

                      Thank you so much! That’s one of my best so far.

                      You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                      #106800
                      Trahia the Minstrel
                      @trahia-the-minstrel
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                        @everyone

                        Sorry for the late reply, I’ve had a busy couple of days.


                        @elishavet-pidyon

                        That picture is gorgeous! So cute! You’re a really good artist.😊 And I love Trumpkin.


                        @keilah-h

                        I love your main character’s name. I feel like the cat is an interesting character …😁 And I love that you have a character called Nyx too!


                        @godlyfantasy12

                        I really do love the name Nyx. And your first draft is really good!


                        @anatra23

                        Your books sound so cool! I’m interested in that big event that spoils everything😂😉.


                        @e-k-seaver

                        Interesting concepts! Your first book is published, right? That’s so cool!

                        The end of a story, a beautiful picture; a feeling of longing yet hope~
                        That’s my wish to create.

                        #106810
                        E. K. Seaver
                        @e-k-seaver
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                          @trahia-the-Minstrel It is! And the second is coming out in April.

                          The pen is mightier than the sword, but in a duel, I'm taking the sword.
                          ekseaver.wordpress.com

                          #106823
                          Anatra
                          @anatra23
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                            @elishavet-pidyon

                            That’s so cool! Whenever I try to draw anything like that, the eyes look so dead ;-; but that’s beautiful!


                            @trahia-the-minstrel

                            😉 *satisfied*


                            @keilah-h

                            Beaumont!! Cats are such good selling points for me xD

                            #106834
                            Trahia the Minstrel
                            @trahia-the-minstrel
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                              @e-k-seaver

                              How did you publish your book? Was it traditional, hybrid, self-published? I don’t suppose you could explain your process? I’m really interested cause my first book is nearly ready for publication😁.

                              The end of a story, a beautiful picture; a feeling of longing yet hope~
                              That’s my wish to create.

                              #106900
                              Elfwing
                              @elfwing
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                                wow lol i just realized i need to work on a blurb for my book XDDDD

                                i love all of you guys’s

                                I'm 'a homeschooler' because cookie-making writing artistic animal-whisperer isn't a job title

                                #106926
                                Keilah H.
                                @keilah-h
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                                  @elishavet-pidyon I love it! He’s cute!

                                  Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

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