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  • April 3, 2025 at 1:37 pm #201127
    Keilah H.
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      @savannah_grace2009 whoa, the fact that Lilitu just killed the man partially responsible for his current situation is crazy!! Even if he doesn’t know that.

       

      It’s also a good message–revenge isn’t the best option. Killing Kratos just made Lilitu feel worse.

      "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

      April 21, 2025 at 8:35 pm #201944
      SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
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        oops

        I totally disappeared again lol

        sorry hahaha

        Omc that’s awesome! but sad because you won’t get as much free time :/

        Making money is AWESOME lolll

        This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.

        April 21, 2025 at 9:04 pm #201954
        The Ducktator
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          @savannah_grace2009

          No one’s hired me yet. 🙁  Today I sent in an actual application to Kroger instead of just the employment interest form, since it looks like they’re hiring again, and also an application to a Biggby coffee. Hopefully I’ll have a job soon.

          MARCIE! YOU MADE EGG SOUP!

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