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April 3, 2025 at 1:37 pm #201127
@savannah_grace2009 whoa, the fact that Lilitu just killed the man partially responsible for his current situation is crazy!! Even if he doesn’t know that.
It’s also a good message–revenge isn’t the best option. Killing Kratos just made Lilitu feel worse.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 21, 2025 at 8:35 pm #201944@theduckator
oops
I totally disappeared again lol
sorry hahaha
Omc that’s awesome! but sad because you won’t get as much free time :/
Making money is AWESOME lolll
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(the real ones will know)April 21, 2025 at 9:04 pm #201954No one’s hired me yet. 🙁 Today I sent in an actual application to Kroger instead of just the employment interest form, since it looks like they’re hiring again, and also an application to a Biggby coffee. Hopefully I’ll have a job soon.
MARCIE! YOU MADE EGG SOUP!
May 26, 2025 at 3:59 pm #203470@keilah-h @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @grcr @theducktator @theshadow @esther-c
Help meeee
I’m stuck *cries* I want to write over the summer but I’m strugglingggg
You know when you get an epic idea for a plot, but then forget where you were going with it and then you don’t know what to do?
Yeah that’s me. I need some inspiration and it would be awesome if you guys would hold me accountable and force me to write again lol
#MakeNahimTakeABreak
(the real ones will know)May 26, 2025 at 4:16 pm #203475@savannah_grace2009 bruhhh that happens though.
I, for one, will be a fan for as long as you’re writing.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
May 26, 2025 at 4:36 pm #203476I may have just the thing! Check out my most recently created topic.
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📚 Appreciator of BooksMay 26, 2025 at 10:20 pm #203484Is there something you’re struggling with that requires some brainstorming? What was that epic plot idea and why did you like it? I don’t mind helping. I like brainstorm sessions, lol.
I will make you lose The Game with me.
May 27, 2025 at 8:05 am #203492May 27, 2025 at 9:36 am #203502@savannah_grace2009 Hii Saraaa!! it’s been a while.
Ahhh girlie I feel you. I’ve been at a loss for inspiration lately too.
I, too, will help however I can.
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*sadly eats another scoop of ice cream*
May 27, 2025 at 1:34 pm #203525I was just thinking about this story!
You know when you get an epic idea for a plot, but then forget where you were going with it and then you don’t know what to do?
Not really, given that I never know where I’m going with it when I start either. XD
Yeah that’s me. I need some inspiration and it would be awesome if you guys would hold me accountable and force me to write again lol
*smacks you with stuffed caterpillar* You *whap* must *whap* WRITE *whap*
Could you set a day of the week to be your chapter-releasing day? That might help. Also there is a King’s Daughter’s Writing Camp in July.
Also, I really do have a stuffed caterpillar for whacking people with. His name is Wormy.
MARCIE! YOU MADE EGG SOUP!
May 28, 2025 at 12:29 am #203568First of all, girl, I love you so much 😂😂💜😭
You’re the best and your personality is actually such a vibe hahaha
I appreciate you so much, you make me smile <3
The thing is, if I make myself write as a routine, it will seem like a chore. Plus life is very crazy and uncertain because of all the stuff with my mom and I don’t want to overstress myself XD
BUT I appreciate being smacked with the stuffed caterpillar…that may be what I need…Thanks Wormy lol
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(the real ones will know)May 28, 2025 at 12:29 am #203569Thanks girl! IT HAS BEEN A WHILE!!!!! I’ve missed you *hugs*
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(the real ones will know)May 28, 2025 at 12:37 am #203570I need to think a little more, and I’ll be sure to tag you when I have something!
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(the real ones will know)May 28, 2025 at 12:38 am #203571May 28, 2025 at 1:25 pm #203577@theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @grcr
I just released a new chapter…(chapter 35) and I’d just like some thoughts on it lol
so if you want to read it…
https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ
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