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  • April 3, 2025 at 1:37 pm #201127
    Keilah H.
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      @savannah_grace2009 whoa, the fact that Lilitu just killed the man partially responsible for his current situation is crazy!! Even if he doesn’t know that.

       

      It’s also a good message–revenge isn’t the best option. Killing Kratos just made Lilitu feel worse.

      "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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