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    Keilah H.
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      @savannah_grace2009 whoa, the fact that Lilitu just killed the man partially responsible for his current situation is crazy!! Even if he doesn’t know that.

       

      It’s also a good message–revenge isn’t the best option. Killing Kratos just made Lilitu feel worse.

      "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

      #201944
      SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
      @savannah_grace2009
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        @theduckator

        oops

        I totally disappeared again lol

        sorry hahaha

        Omc that’s awesome! but sad because you won’t get as much free time :/

        Making money is AWESOME lolll

        #MakeNahimTakeABreak
        (the real ones will know)

        #201954
        Three Ducks in a Trench Coat
        @theducktator
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          @savannah_grace2009

          No one’s hired me yet. 🙁  Today I sent in an actual application to Kroger instead of just the employment interest form, since it looks like they’re hiring again, and also an application to a Biggby coffee. Hopefully I’ll have a job soon.

          MARCIE! YOU MADE EGG SOUP!

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          @savannah_grace2009
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            @keilah-h @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @grcr @theducktator @theshadow @esther-c

            Help meeee

            I’m stuck *cries* I want to write over the summer but I’m strugglingggg

            You know when you get an epic idea for a plot, but then forget where you were going with it and then you don’t know what to do?

            Yeah that’s me. I need some inspiration and it would be awesome if you guys would hold me accountable and force me to write again lol

            #MakeNahimTakeABreak
            (the real ones will know)

            #203475
            Keilah H.
            @keilah-h
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              @savannah_grace2009 bruhhh that happens though.

               

              I, for one, will be a fan for as long as you’re writing.

              "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

              #203476
              Cloaked Mystery
              @jonas
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                @savannah_grace2009

                I may have just the thing! Check out my most recently created topic.

                🏰 Fantasy Writer
                ✨ Magic System Creator
                🎭 Character RPer
                📚 Appreciator of Books

                #203484
                whaley
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                  @savannah_grace2009

                  Is there something you’re struggling with that requires some brainstorming? What was that epic plot idea and why did you like it? I don’t mind helping. I like brainstorm sessions, lol.

                  I will make you lose The Game with me.

                  #203492
                  HighScribe
                  @highscribeofaetherium
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                    @savannah_grace2009

                    I’ll help any way I can (:

                    History is a wheel that has outlasted many hamsters.

                    #203502
                    -GRCR-
                    @grcr
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                      @savannah_grace2009 Hii Saraaa!! it’s been a while.

                      Ahhh girlie I feel you. I’ve been at a loss for inspiration lately too.

                      I, too, will help however I can.

                       

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                      *sadly eats another scoop of ice cream*

                      #203525
                      Three Ducks in a Trench Coat
                      @theducktator
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                        @savannah_grace2009

                        I was just thinking about this story!

                        You know when you get an epic idea for a plot, but then forget where you were going with it and then you don’t know what to do?

                        Not really, given that I never know where I’m going with it when I start either. XD

                        Yeah that’s me. I need some inspiration and it would be awesome if you guys would hold me accountable and force me to write again lol

                        *smacks you with stuffed caterpillar* You *whap* must *whap* WRITE *whap*

                        Could you set a day of the week to be your chapter-releasing day? That might help. Also there is a King’s Daughter’s Writing Camp in July.

                         

                         

                         

                         

                         

                         

                         

                        Also, I really do have a stuffed caterpillar for whacking people with. His name is Wormy.

                        MARCIE! YOU MADE EGG SOUP!

                        #203568
                        SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                        @savannah_grace2009
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                          @theducktator

                          First of all, girl, I love you so much 😂😂💜😭

                          You’re the best and your personality is actually such a vibe hahaha

                          I appreciate you so much, you make me smile <3

                          The thing is, if I make myself write as a routine, it will seem like a chore. Plus life is very crazy and uncertain because of all the stuff with my mom and I don’t want to overstress myself XD

                          BUT I appreciate being smacked with the stuffed caterpillar…that may be what I need…Thanks Wormy lol

                           

                          #MakeNahimTakeABreak
                          (the real ones will know)

                          #203569
                          SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                          @savannah_grace2009
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                            @grcr

                            Thanks girl! IT HAS BEEN A WHILE!!!!! I’ve missed you *hugs*

                            #MakeNahimTakeABreak
                            (the real ones will know)

                            #203570
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                            @savannah_grace2009
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                              @whalekeeper

                              I need to think a little more, and I’ll be sure to tag you when I have something!

                              #MakeNahimTakeABreak
                              (the real ones will know)

                              #203571
                              SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                              @savannah_grace2009
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                                @highscribeofaetherium

                                THANK YOUUU (:

                                #MakeNahimTakeABreak
                                (the real ones will know)

                                #203577
                                SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                                @savannah_grace2009
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                                  @theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @grcr

                                  I just released a new chapter…(chapter 35) and I’d just like some thoughts on it lol

                                  so if you want to read it…

                                  https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

                                  #MakeNahimTakeABreak
                                  (the real ones will know)

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