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  • #197065
    The Most Esteemed Feathered One
    @theducktator
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      LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????🤣🤣🤣

      I, for one, really like Roman numerals.

      #197066
      The Most Esteemed Feathered One
      @theducktator
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        The frog wedding is adorable.

        I, for one, really like Roman numerals.

        #197068
        The Most Esteemed Feathered One
        @theducktator
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          YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!😭😭😭

          I, for one, really like Roman numerals.

          #197117
          whaley
          @whalekeeper
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            Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

            #ProtectAdolinKholin

            #197128
            HighScribe
            @highscribeofaetherium
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              @savannah_grace2009

              Hey girl, sorry I haven’t really read more of your WIP yet.  I’ve been pretty busy (which is why I kind of vanished for a few days). I’ll try to read some more and get you some feedback sometime this week.

              If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.

              #197248
              SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
              @savannah_grace2009
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                @theducktator

                 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

                NOOOOOO
                IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

                😱😱😱😱

                *sobs hysterically*

                Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

                yesssss

                *coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

                This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.

                #197250
                SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                @savannah_grace2009
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                  LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

                  Yeah lol

                  you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

                  The frog wedding is adorable.

                  I KNOWWWW

                  YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

                  no comment….

                  This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.

                  #197252
                  SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                  @savannah_grace2009
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                    @whalekeeper

                    Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

                    Ummmm

                    Let me think lol

                    I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

                    And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

                    I also just want to know that people are reading it, because it’s hard to write when you don’t know if people even care or are interested, if that makes sense. When I know people are reading it, it gives me so much more motivation!!


                    @highscribeofaetherium

                    Hey girl, sorry I haven’t really read more of your WIP yet.  I’ve been pretty busy (which is why I kind of vanished for a few days). I’ll try to read some more and get you some feedback sometime this week.

                    That’s okay!!!

                    I’m about to be busy too, because I just got a job *cries* so I understand <3

                    thank you!

                    This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.

                    #197254
                    Keilah H.
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                      @savannah_grace2009

                      I also just want to know that people are reading it, because it’s hard to write when you don’t know if people even care or are interested, if that makes sense. When I know people are reading it, it gives me so much more motivation!!

                      yessss this happens to me too. The I worked on for over half of 2024 and was the first fanfic I wrote completely from start to finish was completed partially because I told my friends about it and they were like “keep writing it, we like this!”

                      "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                      #197257
                      SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                      @savannah_grace2009
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                        @keilah-h

                        I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…

                        It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3

                        This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.

                        #197260
                        Keilah H.
                        @keilah-h
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                          @savannah_grace2009 yeahh!! it’s always great to have that sense of community.

                          "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                          #197262
                          SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                          @savannah_grace2009
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                            @keilah-h

                            aw yesss

                            This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.

                            #197263
                            Keilah H.
                            @keilah-h
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                              @savannah_grace2009 yep!

                              Got any more of your story yet?

                              I haven’t been checking, sorry.

                              "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                              #197265
                              SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                              @savannah_grace2009
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                                @keilah-h

                                yes, actually!!!!!

                                I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!

                                This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.

                                #197266
                                Keilah H.
                                @keilah-h
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                                  @savannah_grace2009 yay!

                                  "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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