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February 4, 2025 at 6:36 pm #197065
LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????🤣🤣🤣
I, for one, really like Roman numerals.
February 4, 2025 at 6:49 pm #197066The frog wedding is adorable.
I, for one, really like Roman numerals.
February 4, 2025 at 7:02 pm #197068YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
I, for one, really like Roman numerals.
February 5, 2025 at 6:54 am #197117Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?
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February 5, 2025 at 9:14 am #197128Hey girl, sorry I haven’t really read more of your WIP yet.  I’ve been pretty busy (which is why I kind of vanished for a few days). I’ll try to read some more and get you some feedback sometime this week.
If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.
February 5, 2025 at 2:11 pm #197248 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.
NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS😱😱😱😱
*sobs hysterically*
Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!
yesssss
*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂
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February 5, 2025 at 2:13 pm #197250LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????
Yeah lol
you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD
The frog wedding is adorable.
I KNOWWWW
YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!
no comment….
This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.
February 5, 2025 at 2:16 pm #197252Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?
Ummmm
Let me think lol
I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol
And character development ideas would be helpful too!!
I also just want to know that people are reading it, because it’s hard to write when you don’t know if people even care or are interested, if that makes sense. When I know people are reading it, it gives me so much more motivation!!
Hey girl, sorry I haven’t really read more of your WIP yet.  I’ve been pretty busy (which is why I kind of vanished for a few days). I’ll try to read some more and get you some feedback sometime this week.
That’s okay!!!
I’m about to be busy too, because I just got a job *cries* so I understand <3
thank you!
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February 5, 2025 at 2:21 pm #197254I also just want to know that people are reading it, because it’s hard to write when you don’t know if people even care or are interested, if that makes sense. When I know people are reading it, it gives me so much more motivation!!
yessss this happens to me too. The I worked on for over half of 2024 and was the first fanfic I wrote completely from start to finish was completed partially because I told my friends about it and they were like “keep writing it, we like this!”
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
February 5, 2025 at 2:24 pm #197257I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…
It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3
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February 5, 2025 at 2:26 pm #197260@savannah_grace2009 yeahh!! it’s always great to have that sense of community.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
February 5, 2025 at 2:28 pm #197262February 5, 2025 at 2:30 pm #197263@savannah_grace2009 yep!
Got any more of your story yet?
I haven’t been checking, sorry.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
February 5, 2025 at 2:31 pm #197265yes, actually!!!!!
I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!
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February 5, 2025 at 2:37 pm #197266@savannah_grace2009 yay!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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