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  • #183008
    SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
    @savannah_grace2009
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      I have big plans for Cass

      Y’all will NEVER see it coming

      "Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."

      #183009
      Keilah H.
      @keilah-h
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        @savannah_grace2009 ooooh that’s gonna be interesting……

         

        also, I think the reason I like Cassian is solely because of his name…heheh. One of the main characters in a TV show my dad really likes was named that too, so……

        that Cassian sacrifices himself so I’m glad yours will live lol

        "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

        #183010
        -GRCR-
        @grcr
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          @savannah_grace2009

          i almost had a heart attack

           

          🤍 Ira | Jara | Evelyn | Flaz | Blaine 🤍

          #183011
          SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
          @savannah_grace2009
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            @HIGHSCRIBEOFAETHERIUM

            YOUR SIGNATURE GIRLLLL

            I started laughing


            @grcr

            there will be plenty of other times for heart attacks, don’t worry 🙂

            "Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."

            #183014
            Ellette Giselle
            @ellette-giselle
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              @highscribeofaetherium

              CASSIAN’S BLOOD IS ON YOUR HANDS.

              My hands are so bloody already that it won’t make much difference. It needs to be brutal though. Wrenching and heartbreaking.


              @savannah_grace2009

              Actually Cass will live

              but he will wish he didn’t

              Oh YES!!!!! THIS IS ALMOST AS GOOD AS KILLING HIM!!!!! You have to make me love him so much so that I can cry a river of tears when you BRAKE HIM!!!!!

               

               

              Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

              #183019
              SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
              @savannah_grace2009
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                I think we accidentally let a psychopath into KP…

                *Ellette laughs maniacally in the distance*

                "Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."

                #183020
                HighScribe
                @highscribeofaetherium
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  NO! Don’t encourage her! No! I wanted backup, not more people out to grind my heart to dust under a rock!

                  A disturbingly short time ago, in a land uncomfortably close by...

                  #183024
                  HighScribe
                  @highscribeofaetherium
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                    Cass had better be OK at the end of the book.

                    *threatening glare*

                    A disturbingly short time ago, in a land uncomfortably close by...

                    #183027
                    SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                    @savannah_grace2009
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                      I didn’t realize that so many people loved Cass 😂😂😂😂

                      "Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."

                      #183029
                      SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                      @savannah_grace2009
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                        He’ll be fine…

                        It’s the others I’m worried about…

                        "Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."

                        #183030
                        Ellette Giselle
                        @ellette-giselle
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                          @highscribeofaetherium  @savannah_grace2009

                           

                          I think we accidentally let a psychopath into KP…

                          Ain’t we all? I mean, we’re authors……. you can’t get tagged with a much worse name then that.

                           

                          Need any inspiration Sara? I have plenty of heart-wrenching ideas!!! Do something awful that it drives Cassian himself to tears. That’ll get us. Make him try not to cry as well, but it’s so bad that he can’t stop himself.

                           

                          Ooooo you are giving me flashbacks from when I completely BROKE Rory, one of my favorite characters EVER! (Using the most EVIL of all villains I have ever created)

                          Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                          #183033
                          SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                          @savannah_grace2009
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                            You misunderstand me.

                            I’m not going to break Cass.

                            I’m going to break Sef. And Lilitu. And Marcurious. And Ottoline. And Eloy.

                            Because of Cass.

                            You’re welcome.

                             

                            "Hair. Mouth. Cheese of yak. Come, Sintar, bRiNg a MeLoN."

                            #183035
                            Keilah H.
                            @keilah-h
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                              @savannah_grace2009 don’t turn him into a Pythonos or something please…..

                              "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                              #183037
                              HighScribe
                              @highscribeofaetherium
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                                @keilah-h

                                My thoughts exactly.

                                A disturbingly short time ago, in a land uncomfortably close by...

                                #183038
                                HighScribe
                                @highscribeofaetherium
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                                  But she probably will.

                                  A disturbingly short time ago, in a land uncomfortably close by...

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