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    Sara
    @savannah_grace2009
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      I have big plans for Cass

      Y’all will NEVER see it coming

      Lukas&Livia
      #Lalbert
      Sef&Chase
      #HOTTOLINE
      LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

      #183009
      Keilah H.
      @keilah-h
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        @savannah_grace2009 ooooh that’s gonna be interesting……

         

        also, I think the reason I like Cassian is solely because of his name…heheh. One of the main characters in a TV show my dad really likes was named that too, so……

        that Cassian sacrifices himself so I’m glad yours will live lol

        Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

        #183010
        -GRCR-
        @grcr
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          @savannah_grace2009

          i almost had a heart attack

           

          Fin knew. Riker knew.
          Fin wasn’t afraid. Riker was terrified.

          #183011
          Sara
          @savannah_grace2009
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            @HIGHSCRIBEOFAETHERIUM

            YOUR SIGNATURE GIRLLLL

            I started laughing


            @grcr

            there will be plenty of other times for heart attacks, don’t worry 🙂

            Lukas&Livia
            #Lalbert
            Sef&Chase
            #HOTTOLINE
            LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

            #183014
            Ellette Giselle
            @ellette-giselle
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              @highscribeofaetherium

              CASSIAN’S BLOOD IS ON YOUR HANDS.

              My hands are so bloody already that it won’t make much difference. It needs to be brutal though. Wrenching and heartbreaking.


              @savannah_grace2009

              Actually Cass will live

              but he will wish he didn’t

              Oh YES!!!!! THIS IS ALMOST AS GOOD AS KILLING HIM!!!!! You have to make me love him so much so that I can cry a river of tears when you BRAKE HIM!!!!!

               

               

              Riker dropped his voice to a soft whisper. “…I’m home.”

              #183019
              Sara
              @savannah_grace2009
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                I think we accidentally let a psychopath into KP…

                *Ellette laughs maniacally in the distance*

                Lukas&Livia
                #Lalbert
                Sef&Chase
                #HOTTOLINE
                LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                #183020
                HighScribe
                @highscribeofaetherium
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  NO! Don’t encourage her! No! I wanted backup, not more people out to grind my heart to dust under a rock!

                  Home is where your massive, overflowing collection of LEGO bricks is.

                  #183024
                  HighScribe
                  @highscribeofaetherium
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                    Cass had better be OK at the end of the book.

                    *threatening glare*

                    Home is where your massive, overflowing collection of LEGO bricks is.

                    #183027
                    Sara
                    @savannah_grace2009
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                      I didn’t realize that so many people loved Cass 😂😂😂😂

                      Lukas&Livia
                      #Lalbert
                      Sef&Chase
                      #HOTTOLINE
                      LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                      #183029
                      Sara
                      @savannah_grace2009
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                        He’ll be fine…

                        It’s the others I’m worried about…

                        Lukas&Livia
                        #Lalbert
                        Sef&Chase
                        #HOTTOLINE
                        LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                        #183030
                        Ellette Giselle
                        @ellette-giselle
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                          @highscribeofaetherium  @savannah_grace2009

                           

                          I think we accidentally let a psychopath into KP…

                          Ain’t we all? I mean, we’re authors……. you can’t get tagged with a much worse name then that.

                           

                          Need any inspiration Sara? I have plenty of heart-wrenching ideas!!! Do something awful that it drives Cassian himself to tears. That’ll get us. Make him try not to cry as well, but it’s so bad that he can’t stop himself.

                           

                          Ooooo you are giving me flashbacks from when I completely BROKE Rory, one of my favorite characters EVER! (Using the most EVIL of all villains I have ever created)

                          Riker dropped his voice to a soft whisper. “…I’m home.”

                          #183033
                          Sara
                          @savannah_grace2009
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                            You misunderstand me.

                            I’m not going to break Cass.

                            I’m going to break Sef. And Lilitu. And Marcurious. And Ottoline. And Eloy.

                            Because of Cass.

                            You’re welcome.

                             

                            Lukas&Livia
                            #Lalbert
                            Sef&Chase
                            #HOTTOLINE
                            LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                            #183035
                            Keilah H.
                            @keilah-h
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                              @savannah_grace2009 don’t turn him into a Pythonos or something please…..

                              Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

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                              HighScribe
                              @highscribeofaetherium
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                                @keilah-h

                                My thoughts exactly.

                                Home is where your massive, overflowing collection of LEGO bricks is.

                                #183038
                                HighScribe
                                @highscribeofaetherium
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                                  But she probably will.

                                  Home is where your massive, overflowing collection of LEGO bricks is.

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