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July 17, 2024 at 1:12 pm #183008
I have big plans for Cass
Y’all will NEVER see it coming
#MakeNahimTakeABreak
(the real ones will know)July 17, 2024 at 1:13 pm #183009@savannah_grace2009 ooooh that’s gonna be interesting……
also, I think the reason I like Cassian is solely because of his name…heheh. One of the main characters in a TV show my dad really likes was named that too, so……
that Cassian sacrifices himself so I’m glad yours will live lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 17, 2024 at 1:13 pm #183010i almost had a heart attack
Chrom: I come to end you, Grima!
Grima: ...ARROGANT MORTAL...I AM THE END!July 17, 2024 at 1:15 pm #183011YOUR SIGNATURE GIRLLLL
I started laughing
there will be plenty of other times for heart attacks, don’t worry 🙂
#MakeNahimTakeABreak
(the real ones will know)July 17, 2024 at 1:20 pm #183014CASSIAN’S BLOOD IS ON YOUR HANDS.
My hands are so bloody already that it won’t make much difference. It needs to be brutal though. Wrenching and heartbreaking.
Actually Cass will live
but he will wish he didn’t
Oh YES!!!!! THIS IS ALMOST AS GOOD AS KILLING HIM!!!!! You have to make me love him so much so that I can cry a river of tears when you BRAKE HIM!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
July 17, 2024 at 1:22 pm #183019I think we accidentally let a psychopath into KP…
*Ellette laughs maniacally in the distance*
#MakeNahimTakeABreak
(the real ones will know)July 17, 2024 at 1:22 pm #183020NO! Don’t encourage her! No! I wanted backup, not more people out to grind my heart to dust under a rock!
*waves arms around* *whooshing sound effects* *sticks arms above head*
DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?July 17, 2024 at 1:24 pm #183024Cass had better be OK at the end of the book.
*threatening glare*
*waves arms around* *whooshing sound effects* *sticks arms above head*
DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?July 17, 2024 at 1:25 pm #183027I didn’t realize that so many people loved Cass 😂😂😂😂
#MakeNahimTakeABreak
(the real ones will know)July 17, 2024 at 1:27 pm #183029He’ll be fine…
It’s the others I’m worried about…
#MakeNahimTakeABreak
(the real ones will know)July 17, 2024 at 1:27 pm #183030@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009
I think we accidentally let a psychopath into KP…
Ain’t we all? I mean, we’re authors……. you can’t get tagged with a much worse name then that.
Need any inspiration Sara? I have plenty of heart-wrenching ideas!!! Do something awful that it drives Cassian himself to tears. That’ll get us. Make him try not to cry as well, but it’s so bad that he can’t stop himself.
Ooooo you are giving me flashbacks from when I completely BROKE Rory, one of my favorite characters EVER! (Using the most EVIL of all villains I have ever created)
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
July 17, 2024 at 1:30 pm #183033You misunderstand me.
I’m not going to break Cass.
I’m going to break Sef. And Lilitu. And Marcurious. And Ottoline. And Eloy.
Because of Cass.
You’re welcome.
#MakeNahimTakeABreak
(the real ones will know)July 17, 2024 at 1:34 pm #183035@savannah_grace2009 don’t turn him into a Pythonos or something please…..
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 17, 2024 at 1:34 pm #183037My thoughts exactly.
*waves arms around* *whooshing sound effects* *sticks arms above head*
DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?July 17, 2024 at 1:35 pm #183038But she probably will.
*waves arms around* *whooshing sound effects* *sticks arms above head*
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