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May 16, 2023 at 11:05 am #143611
Ohhh, got it! xD
Oh lol, I actually think I might have asked you that already 🤣🤣
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
May 16, 2023 at 11:30 am #143613You might have lol. I’m planning on reading it eventually but first I have to read With Eyes of Blue and and a bunch of LOTR stuff XD
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
May 16, 2023 at 11:45 am #143619Oh awesome!!! I just read the hobbit a week or two ago 🙂 I’m planning to read the other ones, but they’re on hold lol. What book are you on?
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
May 16, 2023 at 11:52 am #143622It’s kinda weird, actually. I’ve read the lord of the rings before, a while back, but am going through it again… this time I’m going to read the hobbit first, though. So i know the events in most everything besides the hobbit lol.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
May 16, 2023 at 11:56 am #143627Ohhh gotcha!! Yeah, this is my first time 🙂
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
May 16, 2023 at 12:10 pm #143634Trust me, it’s sooooo good! The movies are good, too, but they have strayed really, really far from the books for sure… And as usual the books are better XD Aragorn is my favorite whenever you get to him.
It’s funny cause there’s a character in there that reminds me a lot of Sorren. I’ll just let you wonder who it is 😉
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
May 16, 2023 at 1:41 pm #143664@kyronthearcanin I like that romance tip!
Also, another one: Keep the number of kissing scenes or other exceptionally sappy moments to three or fewer per story. Trust me on this one.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 16, 2023 at 1:44 pm #143668Thanks! lol
Yeah I avoid most sappy/kissing moments when I can.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
May 16, 2023 at 1:47 pm #143673@kyronthearcanin Yep, I save that kind of thing for only really important times.
I can’t avoid it completely….especially when one of my favorite WIPs is something of a romance comedy….but I try to use it sparingly.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 16, 2023 at 2:13 pm #143679Oh awesome!!
Aw, now I want to know 😅
Oh, lol -yeah, me too 😅 I don’t actually think I’ve ever written that kind of stuff, lol
Also I have no experience in real life 🤣🤣
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
May 16, 2023 at 3:36 pm #143692Heheh *rubs hands together* (Actually you might be able to guess once you read it)
Yeah experience would help, and yet… I still don’t want any experience lol. It’s still weird as of now.
Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.
May 16, 2023 at 3:43 pm #143693Oh lol!! 🤣
And . . . Yeah me either 🤣🤣🤣
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
May 17, 2023 at 3:04 pm #143805@hybridlore No experience here either, lol. Not that I want any, mind you. I’m content with shipping fictional characters……
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 17, 2023 at 3:41 pm #143845Yess 😂😂
WE ARE REVIVING THE PROTECTION SQUAD! *steals Joseph, Julian, and Sabina from Ellette*
May 17, 2023 at 4:20 pm #143857@hybridlore lol yep!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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