my star wars Fanfic

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins nope, still glitched, try another way of putting it into the window

hit the insert/edit image and then get it from your computer or phone’s files?

 

you’re welcome for the idea! I love having a fellow Star Wars fanfic writer to talk to lol. I can’t wait to see it if you end up writing it!

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

it legit will NOT let me send it any other way! I tried and it just blanked as if I did nothing!!! maybe my laptop’s just glitchy or something. I’ll try again later.

I’m glad to talk with another fanfic writer!!! tho I am totally stuck rn!!

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins weird. Sometimes pictures glitch though. This must be one of those days…..

Hey, if you can tell me exactly what you’re stuck on, I might be able to help, although I’ll have to get back to you on it in a day or two because I have to get off in a sec.

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

Just moving forward with the immediate story.

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Evelyn collins]

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"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins

Wow!

Just read what you recently wrote.

I’m assuming they’re taking her to the Tantiss facility or something? (That’s the name of the base btw, not the planet. I believe the planet itself is called Weyland?)

She’ll probably come into contact with her father a lot now….Not that she’ll like it.

OR, maybe Crosshair gets sent to that cold planet after this because of some reason or other, things go for him basically the same way they go in that episode, but the whole time Leo is in the facility, and they’re “training” her (more likely studying her mostly, but she doesn’t know that). When he gets brought in and imprisoned, she’s a little confused as to why (although maybe he explains to her what happened at some point in time?).

 

Here’s the question. WHY would Hemlock tell Leo that Cross is her father? The guy doesn’t take things lightly. He’d do that for a reason.

Perhaps a “Your dad here messed up so you’re the thing that’ll save your cool mutant bloodline (that I’m TOTALLY not trying to steal from so I can replicate it or something)”

Or maybe he threatens Crosshair with “I know she’s your daughter, and I’ll hurt her if you don’t comply. Or better–I’ll teach her to hate you, and by the end of it I can tell her to kill you with her own hands and she’ll do it.” and Leo overhears or something? (She doesn’t even have to overhear, that’d just be cool to put in anyway, even if you’re planning the reveal to be somewhere else.)

 

I had a few more, but I don’t remember them lol

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

yes, she is being taken to Tantiss base.

still working on why Hemlock would tell her Crosshair is her father.

lots of things are still in the works….

if you have any more questions or suggestions, I’m open!!

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Evelyn collins]

Have you seen all the new episodes yet?!!

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins you bet! All four!!

It was kinda simultaneously sad and funny, when Omega reunited with Hunter and Wrecker and they’re all hugging her, then Crosshair comes and they’re just like “You’re very sus…..” and just stare at him for the remaining 30 seconds of the episode.

I was like “What? No hug for him? Not even from you, Wrecker?”  but yeah, I can see why they’d be like “Okay, what’s your motive here?”

I can’t wait for the next ones!

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

Yeas!! i was sooooo happy!

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

I know!!!!

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h my dear friend!!! I am in rather desperate need of help brainstorming as usual!!:)

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins what do you need help with?

oh also I probably can’t post links here right now (they’re affected in the same way as pictures probably) but I found this hilarious short video of the actor for the clones messing around with with Hunter, Wrecker and Crosshair action figures and doing all their voices. It was so funny.

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

Noice!!!was there a message before that? bc if so, it didn’t cone through

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins I don’t think so. I was just asking what you needed help with. Sorry about being so blunt lol

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

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