my star wars Fanfic

[Keilah H.]

awesome.

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h
Have you seen the new Bad Batch episodes?!?!?

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins I haven’t yet, but I should soon!

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

You should!!! Also! Just started drawing Tech and Phee’s child, bc I refuse Techs death. His name is Markus and he is lookin’ fine.

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins cool beans, is he in the story? probably not because the timeline wouldn’t match up no matter how you tweaked it. He’d always end up like 15 years younger than Leo lol

But you can always make a different AU for him to inhabit. Maybe one where tech never died? Maybe he was just hurt or something? (My profile pic depicts him as a cyborg for that reason, this Tech is from an AU where he survived but the Empire took him and fixed him up)

 

Oh, and I watched the new episodes yesterday!! They were AWESOME. Somehow I didn’t notice that Hunter ditched his red scarf he had in the second season until someone pointed it out to me. Why??? I should know the characters well enough by now!! He also has a different bandanna I think, it’s darker red (maybe just dirty? although you’d think he’d keep that fairly clean, so…..) and without the skull icon. Oh well, at least I noticed that.

And the imprisoned pair escaped!! Yes!! Crosshair being totally awesome as he used to be–that’s my brave sharpshooter boy! His poor shaky hand though. My dad said that’s a PTSD thing, and I think it probably has something to do with all the poisons they shot him up with too. And of course Omega would bring the dog with them (and she named her “Batcher,” ha)

(speaking of which, how are u planning to incorporate that in your story?)

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Keilah H.]

OUR brave sharpshooter boy lol.

Since you’re writing so much about him, he’s yours also.

 

 

 

ok off topic, but when you finish that picture of Markus, can you show me? He sounds like a really cool character, and I love his name!

As a dragon-person like the ones in my fanfics, he’d be awesome. Phee is a color changing, venom-spitter dragon and Tech is a uniquely colored ice-breather, so I’d assume their dragonet (that’s what young dragons are called) would have some combination of those powers?

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

in answer to your question, my story is currently soooo far from cannon that it is unlikely that any of the events of season 3.

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Evelyn collins]

also, the dragon thing, InTeReStInG!!!!!

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins ah ok makes sense

so what canon events did happen? Like obviously Crosshair joined the Empire, the rest of the Batch are probably doing mercenary missions right now, etc….

So would you say this story happens in roughly season 1’s, 2’s, or 3’s place on the actual timeline? I’d go for 2 maybe if we absolutely had to quantify it, since that’s a good time to place it in any case (especially since Rampart called the clones “a dying breed” and there are already stormtroopers around), and it’s when Crosshair has started to question the empire, which I’m assuming plays at least a little bit in his character arc here. In other words, the events of season 1 played out more or less the same, and early in season 2 is where it starts to diverge.

Like, maybe instead of going to Desix in that third or so episode with Cody, Cross is sent here to Thurra? (I think that was the name of the planet?)

Of course, since this is an alternate canon it could be whatever you want, but judging from the story clues, I’d put it at season 2’s time period, or between a few months to a year after the Empire’s inception.

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Keilah H.]

oh, and thanks! I have a lot of really cool dragon ideas.

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

So yes, I think the idea of switching it with the Cody thing is good, and works for the story!

as for the Markus drawing… you be the judge:

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"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

Umm…the drawing’s severely glitched. I can only see loads of text lol

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins ooh, one thing you could do is write a short prequel from Crosshair’s POV, starting off much the same way that episode starts off, but instead of Rampart sending him off with Cody, he’s like “You’re coming with me to investigate this planet.”

It could also give a little detail as to why Cross is tracking Leo, but makes no effort to talk to her or anything. Since I think you said he knows he has a daughter (and maybe even knows it’s her specifically), is he looking for her? Or does he just see the moody teen on the planet he’s stationed at, realizes she’s the right age and looks close to how she should, and is like “Wait a minute, is that my kid?”

Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

[Evelyn collins]

I like that idea!!, also, I think it’s more of “Wait, is that my kid?” because he has had no reason to doubt the fact that she is still with her mom up until this point.

 

here is Markus:

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tell me if it worked

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Evelyn collins]

ok, for some reason it will not send the image

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