my star wars Fanfic

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h

yeas!

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h Yes!!

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h sorry, i thought the first didn’t go through.

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins heyyyy I noticed your fanfic now says “Draft One.” Are you already working on a second draft? Can I see it yet or is it off limits?

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h
Hey!!!! Sorry I didn’t respond right away. I’m on a trip 😅 I can talk now tho. Not much is going on.

But yes, I am starting draft two. I’m not even a full two pages in 🥲.
I’ve mostly just been trying to evaluate  what needs to be tweaked and such. My biggest critique is that its too slow.
I am open to any of your constructive feedback 😁

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins personally, I didn’t think it was too slow! it was fine to me.

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h

Thanks ☺️

Never the less, there were also some holes that needed to be filled, and some things I wanted to change, so we’re trying for round two😁

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins cool, I look forward to seeing it!

(probably a good idea to at least finish draft one though lol, but hey, I’m also guilty of starting a second draft without finishing the first)

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h

yeah, I’ve been teetering between finishing the first or just diving into the second😅

Rn I’ve just been doing plot work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Unsuccessfully. …

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins lol plot work never works for me either

I’d love to see what you’ve got if you have a story structure or something! Seeing the whole plot laid out might help me give you feedback on where you could go next.

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins I see you’ve continued!

It’s getting good!! Not that it wasn’t already awesome lol

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h
thanks!!!

sorry I didn’t answer right away, it’s been a busy week 😅

I just got a new iPad for art, so obviously I HAD to do a scene from my story:

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins MAN that is an awesome drawing! Which scene was that?

(I can’t do good shading to save my life, so I’m super impressed with yours.)

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h

it’s  the scene in chapter one where she buys the sketchbook. I forgot about her mask when I was drawing it 😅.
And thanks!! I’ve been trying to improve my shading for FOREVER and procreate and YouTube have been really helpful.

I’ve been rewatching the bad batch (again, cuz why not?) and I did this one this morning:

but what have you been up to??

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins oh wow that one’s cool too!

 

not much. Been writing warrior cats fan fiction, some of which includes the Bad Batch as minor characters (turned into cats of course lol)

actually, I inserted an adult version of Markus (your version of Tech’s kid, if I remember right) into one of them recently as kind of an homage to your ideas. He hasn’t shown up yet, but I’m thinking of giving him a decent role.

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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