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@keilah-h Yes!!
"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
@keilah-h sorry, i thought the first didn’t go through.
"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
@evelyn-collins heyyyy I noticed your fanfic now says “Draft One.” Are you already working on a second draft? Can I see it yet or is it off limits?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
@keilah-h
Hey!!!! Sorry I didn’t respond right away. I’m on a trip 😅 I can talk now tho. Not much is going on.But yes, I am starting draft two. I’m not even a full two pages in 🥲.
I’ve mostly just been trying to evaluate what needs to be tweaked and such. My biggest critique is that its too slow.
I am open to any of your constructive feedback 😁"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
@evelyn-collins personally, I didn’t think it was too slow! it was fine to me.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
Thanks ☺️
Never the less, there were also some holes that needed to be filled, and some things I wanted to change, so we’re trying for round two😁
"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
@evelyn-collins cool, I look forward to seeing it!
(probably a good idea to at least finish draft one though lol, but hey, I’m also guilty of starting a second draft without finishing the first)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
yeah, I’ve been teetering between finishing the first or just diving into the second😅
Rn I’ve just been doing plot work.
Unsuccessfully. …
"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
@evelyn-collins lol plot work never works for me either
I’d love to see what you’ve got if you have a story structure or something! Seeing the whole plot laid out might help me give you feedback on where you could go next.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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