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    Keilah H.
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      @evelyn-collins Really?

      "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

      #178674
      Keilah H.
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        Well, you could have her ask him how everyone knows her. He doesn’t have to provide a truthful answer….

        "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

        #178675
        Evelyn collins
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          Yeah, I had that much, but it’s what happens after, and what leads up to her plan and escape

          "Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

          #178676
          Keilah H.
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            Hmmmm…..

            Well, she’s gotta meet her dad somehow. How about here?

            After realizing what they’re doing to the clones (maybe thinking “oh, I’m next!”), she decides she has to escape. He might try to help her, or talk her out of it.

            "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

            #179211
            Keilah H.
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              @evelyn-collins heyy! Been working on the story any, or are still a bit stuck on it?

               

               

              also WE’VE GOT ONE MORE EPISODE TO GO!!! I can’t imagine how it’s gonna end, but I’m terrified for the boys cause I know someone is gonna die.

              "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

              #179255
              Evelyn collins
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                Yeah, I’m still stuck 😭

                I just don’t know how to practically move forward.

                 

                and I’m still on no screens, so I haven’t seen past the 6th episode

                "Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

                #179258
                Keilah H.
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                  @evelyn-collins ohhh ok!!

                  I won’t give you any spoilers 😉

                   

                  hmmmm……IDK. I’ve run out of suggestions lol, I guess just look back at my old ones…..

                  "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                  #180589
                  Keilah H.
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                    @evelyn-collins pictures are back up so you can post fan art for your characters now!

                    "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                    #180590
                    Keilah H.
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                      also your latest chapters are amazing.

                      "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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                      Evelyn collins
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                        @keilah-h

                        That’s great!! I could send some of my recent “illustrations” if you’d like!

                        also, thx! but I hit a plot hole. idk how Leo is going to find the prison block.

                        "Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

                        #180638
                        Keilah H.
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                          @evelyn-collins yes please!!!

                           

                          hmm……Well, she could steal one of those datapads. No doubt they have maps. Or maybe she could threaten a droid into telling her……”Don’t alert anyone or I’ll dismantle you!! I’ve had practice! Now tell me where the prisons are!” That kinda thing.

                          "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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                          Evelyn collins
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                            "Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

                            #180751
                            Evelyn collins
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                              "Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

                              #180752
                              Evelyn collins
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                                sorry, i have to send them one at a time.

                                "Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

                                #180757
                                Keilah H.
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                                  @evelyn-collins wow so cool!! Markus and Buck belong to Tech and Hunter, respectively?

                                  "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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