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April 6, 2024 at 2:46 pm #178673
@evelyn-collins Really?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 6, 2024 at 2:47 pm #178674Well, you could have her ask him how everyone knows her. He doesn’t have to provide a truthful answer….
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 6, 2024 at 2:48 pm #178675Yeah, I had that much, but it’s what happens after, and what leads up to her plan and escape
"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
April 6, 2024 at 2:58 pm #178676Hmmmm…..
Well, she’s gotta meet her dad somehow. How about here?
After realizing what they’re doing to the clones (maybe thinking “oh, I’m next!”), she decides she has to escape. He might try to help her, or talk her out of it.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 26, 2024 at 12:21 pm #179211@evelyn-collins heyy! Been working on the story any, or are still a bit stuck on it?
also WE’VE GOT ONE MORE EPISODE TO GO!!! I can’t imagine how it’s gonna end, but I’m terrified for the boys cause I know someone is gonna die.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
April 27, 2024 at 7:37 pm #179255Yeah, I’m still stuck 😭
I just don’t know how to practically move forward.
and I’m still on no screens, so I haven’t seen past the 6th episode
"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
April 28, 2024 at 3:25 pm #179258@evelyn-collins ohhh ok!!
I won’t give you any spoilers 😉
hmmmm……IDK. I’ve run out of suggestions lol, I guess just look back at my old ones…..
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 6, 2024 at 2:36 pm #180589@evelyn-collins pictures are back up so you can post fan art for your characters now!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 6, 2024 at 2:37 pm #180590also your latest chapters are amazing.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 7, 2024 at 10:19 am #180629That’s great!! I could send some of my recent “illustrations” if you’d like!
also, thx! but I hit a plot hole. idk how Leo is going to find the prison block.
"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
June 7, 2024 at 12:43 pm #180638@evelyn-collins yes please!!!
hmm……Well, she could steal one of those datapads. No doubt they have maps. Or maybe she could threaten a droid into telling her……”Don’t alert anyone or I’ll dismantle you!! I’ve had practice! Now tell me where the prisons are!” That kinda thing.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 9, 2024 at 1:40 pm #180750"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
June 9, 2024 at 1:41 pm #180751"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
June 9, 2024 at 1:42 pm #180752sorry, i have to send them one at a time.
"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"
June 9, 2024 at 4:16 pm #180757@evelyn-collins wow so cool!! Markus and Buck belong to Tech and Hunter, respectively?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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