my star wars Fanfic

[Evelyn collins]

Cool!!

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

yep, so…….

if you need any more ideas for anything in specific, I’ll be here, for the next 20 or so minutes lol

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Evelyn collins]

@keilah-h I am in need of your assistance once again!!!

I am finally at the part where she meets Hemlock, but I have no IDEA what to do!!

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins

well, I had some ideas if you flip back a page or two

Want me to repost them or are you ok with looking for them?

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Keilah H.]

But timeline wise, one thing that’d make sense is that Leo will have been there for a good while before Cross arrives there. Probably a few weeks at least.

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Evelyn collins]

Yeah, that makes sense! And I’ll go check it out 😁

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins ooh, this is gettin’ good!

one little edit though–Emerie introduced herself twice??? maybe rework that scene so she doesn’t say her full name until Leo asks for it.

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Evelyn collins]

to be honest, I didn’t even notice I did that. Recently I’ve been writing in a half-dazed state :p.

I shall fix this error! also, tbh, I’m seriously stalling. I’m so scared to write Hemlock.

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins lol don’t blame ya. He’s terrifying.

If it’s a “how do I write him” thing, just rewatch the show and get an idea of his mannerisms, how he acts around other characters, etc. Dig deeper in to his personality besides the creepy psychopath part (but do pay attention to that lol)

 

If it’s just “eeeeh I don’t like him, so I’m gonna stave off writing him”, I can’t help with that lol, and I definitely understand the reasoning behind it.

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins was just reading the latest bit of your story!

tbh I love how you wrote Leo being annoyed at the bird flying outside her window lol

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Keilah H.]

she most definitely got that from her dad, ha

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Evelyn collins]

for real. idk why, but I just needed to write that. the hate of the avian creatures is hereditary.

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins it’s in the same genes that control the gray hair and sniper eyes XD

 

seriously though, I do a lot of things like my dad, and my mom says it really is in our blood since he and I have the same blood type

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Keilah H.]

@evelyn-collins oooh I just read what you wrote recently! The plot is thickening lol

"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

[Evelyn collins]

Thx!!! I’m actually super stuck rn 😅

"Fives, no!" "Fives, YeS!"

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