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April 9, 2023 at 3:49 pm #139692
You’re so welcome!! Thank you again for letting me read it. Seriously, this is gold. Your writing is great, especially for someone your age! You’ve got a lot of talent š
"To death or to victory"
April 9, 2023 at 3:50 pm #139693Also…THEIR. NAMES. I’m a sucker for perfect character names and I loved theirs!! So gloriously Annerian….
"To death or to victory"
April 9, 2023 at 6:19 pm #139699Girl, no kidding, Iām smiling so much right now. ?? Youāre so sweet!! ? Your feedback is super encouraging. āŗļø
Alsoā¦THEIR. NAMES. Iām a sucker for perfect character names and I loved theirs!! So gloriously Annerianā¦.
For real!! I was so happy when I found these names. Plus, they have meaning, which I always love. ? Amatus means ābeloved.ā Meira means āgiving lightā or āshining.ā I actually thought it meant steadfast or loyal but⦠just looked it up to confirm and I guess not. ??
Write what should not be forgotten. ā Isabel Allende
April 11, 2023 at 10:52 am #139814AHHH!!!! Iām so sorry!! ? But at the same time Iām so glad!! ??
Well… well…. *sniffs* it’s okay.
Lol, I get that. Because of tons of movies and books that have been made/written, I feel like true love is often misrepresented or made to look cheesy. I tried to represent it well, but I can understand where youāre coming from. I kinda felt the same way. XD
Anyway, thank you so much!!! ??
Agreed! I think you did a wonderful job representing it, I think I’m just biased to the phrase. ? But you are very welcome!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
April 13, 2023 at 2:23 pm #139957October 3, 2023 at 10:42 pm #157945Hi! I know I’m a little late to the party (REALLY late, actually), but I was browsing and I saw the title “My Love Has Gone Across the Sea” and I was like ‘I have to read this’. And… WOW. I almost cried. So simply yet beautifully written. I love how the theme of sacrificial love is woven into it. I absolutely love the Wingfeather Saga, and this is just amazing. Andrew Peterson would be proud. You did a wonderful job weaving the song/poem into it.
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āItās all brains and muscle.āOctober 4, 2023 at 3:01 pm #158036Oh my word, thank you so much!!! That means a lot!! ? I actually emailed in the story to him, but I havenāt gotten any reply yet. (Which doesnāt surprise me. Heās probably busy. š ) But I actually got to meet him at a conference I went to at the beginning of September. I was able to get a picture with him too! It was pretty awesome! ?
Write what should not be forgotten. ā Isabel Allende
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