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April 9, 2023 at 3:49 pm #139692
You’re so welcome!! Thank you again for letting me read it. Seriously, this is gold. Your writing is great, especially for someone your age! You’ve got a lot of talent 😉
"To death or to victory"
April 9, 2023 at 3:50 pm #139693Also…THEIR. NAMES. I’m a sucker for perfect character names and I loved theirs!! So gloriously Annerian….
"To death or to victory"
April 9, 2023 at 6:19 pm #139699Girl, no kidding, I’m smiling so much right now. 😄😊 You’re so sweet!! 🥰 Your feedback is super encouraging. ☺️
Also…THEIR. NAMES. I’m a sucker for perfect character names and I loved theirs!! So gloriously Annerian….
For real!! I was so happy when I found these names. Plus, they have meaning, which I always love. 😏 Amatus means “beloved.” Meira means “giving light” or “shining.” I actually thought it meant steadfast or loyal but… just looked it up to confirm and I guess not. 😑😂
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
April 11, 2023 at 10:52 am #139814AHHH!!!! I’m so sorry!! 😭 But at the same time I’m so glad!! 😆😆
Well… well…. *sniffs* it’s okay.
Lol, I get that. Because of tons of movies and books that have been made/written, I feel like true love is often misrepresented or made to look cheesy. I tried to represent it well, but I can understand where you’re coming from. I kinda felt the same way. XD
Anyway, thank you so much!!! 😊😄
Agreed! I think you did a wonderful job representing it, I think I’m just biased to the phrase. 😂 But you are very welcome!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
April 13, 2023 at 2:23 pm #139957October 3, 2023 at 10:42 pm #157945Hi! I know I’m a little late to the party (REALLY late, actually), but I was browsing and I saw the title “My Love Has Gone Across the Sea” and I was like ‘I have to read this’. And… WOW. I almost cried. So simply yet beautifully written. I love how the theme of sacrificial love is woven into it. I absolutely love the Wingfeather Saga, and this is just amazing. Andrew Peterson would be proud. You did a wonderful job weaving the song/poem into it.
“You’re heavier than you look.”
“It’s all brains and muscle.”October 4, 2023 at 3:01 pm #158036Oh my word, thank you so much!!! That means a lot!! 🥰 I actually emailed in the story to him, but I haven’t gotten any reply yet. (Which doesn’t surprise me. He’s probably busy. 😉 ) But I actually got to meet him at a conference I went to at the beginning of September. I was able to get a picture with him too! It was pretty awesome! 😁
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
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