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September 5, 2025 at 7:38 pm #205793
Yeah…..
Idk. However many it takes.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 5, 2025 at 8:27 pm #205794@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
chapter!
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September 5, 2025 at 8:33 pm #205795@ellette-giselle
oh no… ???
Is he really dead?"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
September 5, 2025 at 9:15 pm #205796@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
another chapter!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 5, 2025 at 10:35 pm #205798@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
chapter!!!!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 5, 2025 at 11:29 pm #205799@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
next chapter!!!!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 6, 2025 at 10:39 am #205854@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
first chapter for today!!!!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 6, 2025 at 11:52 am #205856@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
EPILOGUE!!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 6, 2025 at 11:53 am #205857@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
AND THAT IS A WRAP!!!
BOTH BOOKS ARE DONE!!!!!!! *screams and dumps a bucket of confetti on my head*
Now for editing and formatting the second one and giving the first one a read through! (I have the proof copy) YIPPY!!!!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 6, 2025 at 1:30 pm #205861WHOOOHOO!!! Congrats!!
The ending was so sweet!! ? I wasn’t expecting that time jump, but it was fun to see afterward. And the drawing scene… so cute ?☺️. I love that he’s teaching it now, even if he can’t do it.
And oh my goodness. Jason and Evan were hilarious in the epilogue. ???
I did notice that the very last scene you kind of switched back and forth in POV. But other than that, great job!! ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
September 6, 2025 at 3:43 pm #205863AND THAT IS A WRAP!!!
BOTH BOOKS ARE DONE!!!!!!! *screams and dumps a bucket of confetti on my head*
*pours more confetti on top and adds a bucket of water…heehee…*
Hooray!
“Do what is right, let the consequences follow.” -Truth and Treason
September 9, 2025 at 11:37 am #206033Oh. That’s just cruel.
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September 13, 2025 at 9:17 am #206284@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
I have a request for my most excellent MI team!
Would some/all of you consider writing a short review (between a couple sentences and a paragraph) Sector 5: The Hidden and The Numbered and the Nameless. I’ll be sticking these on the backs of the covers and on the inside, so if you would be willing to do that and if you would sign them for me however you would want it to appear in print, (pen name, initials, first name, last name, middle name, a mix of all of the above, etc) that would be super helpful. And, short notice, but I would need them by today. Thank you so much!!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 13, 2025 at 11:18 am #206314ugh it gave me an error message
I would love to, but I doubt I could do anything good by today. Sorry…..I love the series but I’m kinda gonna be busy today.
Maybe if I have time later I could though. We’ll see.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
September 13, 2025 at 12:21 pm #206319Update: I may be able to do something , but it’ll have to be later in the day. That ok?
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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