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September 3, 2025 at 5:50 pm #205731
@ellette-giselle
Oh my goodness. I feel so bad for Cassion and Rory… ? I feel like it’s inevitable that he’s going to die.Evan’s decision to fly anyway makes sense. I’m glad you did that.
Jonathan and Amber… ? xD
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
September 3, 2025 at 5:51 pm #205732@ellette-giselle
I’m guessing this will be the climax of the book?"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
September 4, 2025 at 11:08 am #205747@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
CHAPTER!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 4, 2025 at 11:37 am #205748@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
another CHAPTER!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 4, 2025 at 1:56 pm #205749@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
third CHAPTER!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 4, 2025 at 2:18 pm #205750@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
CHAPTER!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 4, 2025 at 3:33 pm #205751Good chapters! I did notice there was a sentence in the second to last chapter where you started in Rory’s POV, then swapped to Cassion’s for a brief section. It was like, “Cassion wanted to make sure Rory really understood” or something along those lines.
I really hope the rebels will rescue them. This is getting close.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
September 4, 2025 at 3:38 pm #205752@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
Last CHAPTER for today!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 4, 2025 at 3:41 pm #205753Another cliffhanger?! ??
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
September 4, 2025 at 3:41 pm #205754Okay, i’ll have to look for that.
Hmm, well, everyone has written them off as dead so maybe they will die to vindicate my poor hurt feelings. *sniff*
lolololol
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September 4, 2025 at 3:42 pm #205755Oh yeah another cliff hanger. And you must wait for tomorrow.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
September 4, 2025 at 3:43 pm #205756No, we didn’t!! (Ok, I thought Cassion might die, but now I think he has a chance!! Jonathan and Michael can get there just in time!)
Augh. ??
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
September 5, 2025 at 2:18 pm #205774*sulks*
we’ll see.
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September 5, 2025 at 7:23 pm #205791@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
Two chapters! (KP ate the other post)
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September 5, 2025 at 7:31 pm #205792@ellette-giselle
Oh…. My… goodness.
Rory!!!!
I can’t believe you left us on another cliffhanger! (Well, I can, but still.) ?
How many more chapters in the book?"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
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