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You’re just going to leave us on that?? ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
well i’ll try to add more later. i’m busy at the moment.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
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FIRST CHAPTER TODAY
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
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SECOND CHAPTER TODAY
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
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THIRD CHAPTER TODAY
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
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FORTH CHAPTER TODAY
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
Wow! That was so tense! I can’t wait for Cassion to tell them!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
Book feedback for you!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
Yay! Thanks!
Let me take a look.
Wow, that was some great feedback, even though we don’t agree on the rebellion thing. So thank you for taking the time to reply, even though you don’t like the book as much as some others.
I can mix up a few of those scenes like you suggested, and I can reword a couple things, because I find some people are getting something from the lines that I was not intending. (Odd how it’s so clear in your mind and then someone tells you what they though you said and it’s not at all what you meant. I find this in writing and in speaking.)
Anyhow, thanks so much!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
You’re welcome!
(Odd how it’s so clear in your mind and then someone tells you what they though you said and it’s not at all what you meant. I find this in writing and in speaking.)
Yup. Another reason for proofreading.
If you have another book later on that doesn’t have Christian rebellion as a major component, I will be happy to help, so feel free to tag me then!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
If you have another book later on that doesn’t have Christian rebellion as a major component, I will be happy to help, so feel free to tag me then!
Will do! ?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
new chapter!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
Second chapter!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
Third chapter!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty
New chapter!
Also, I posted chapter 37 last night, but KP has been acting up so I don’t know if anyone saw the message.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
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