Looking For Critique Of Realistic Middle-Grade Book

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October 5, 2017 at 8:19 am #47058
raevynstar
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-it’s called Green Gardens
-I don’t have much written so far.
-it’s a Christian novel for early teens
-it involves a small town and an unlikable (at first) main character
-it’s lowkey a retelling of The Secret Garden
October 5, 2017 at 5:33 pm #47209
Catwing
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@raevynstar Hi! I am busy so I can’t right now… But a shall tag some people… Perhaps they can help you? …

@emma-flournoy @jessi-Rae @daughteroftheking @epicaddie2 @that_writer_girl_99

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October 5, 2017 at 5:52 pm #47218
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I’d be happy to help @raevynstar!
October 5, 2017 at 5:53 pm #47219
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@catwing, thanks for tagging me, I probably wouldn’t have noticed it otherwise…now you have a reason to purr in satisfaction 😉.
October 5, 2017 at 5:58 pm #47220
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@raevynstar Unfortunately, I can’t help. Sorry! Life is really busy right now, and I’m going to beta read @seekjustice’s book, so I don’t have enough time. *sadness*
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October 5, 2017 at 6:04 pm #47226
Catwing
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@shannon *purrs* You’re welcome.

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October 5, 2017 at 6:12 pm #47233
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@raevynstar Unfortunately, I don’t have time right now. It sounds like a super interesting book, though.
October 5, 2017 at 6:20 pm #47241
raevynstar
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That’s okay! 🙂
@shannon, I’ll have to figure out how to PM you. Is a google doc okay?
October 5, 2017 at 6:40 pm #47256
Hannah
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@raevynstar what’s the word count??

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October 5, 2017 at 6:52 pm #47261
raevynstar
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2828 words so far.
October 5, 2017 at 7:18 pm #47267
Emma Flournoy
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@raevynstar I must decline (way too much going on 😉 ), but I hope you get the help you need.
October 6, 2017 at 10:07 am #47295
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@raevynstar, google docs is great…I will try to take care of it quickly, but I am preparing for a concert so I don’t have a lot of time this month. Maybe I will have more time in November. Can we plan for me to start then?
October 6, 2017 at 12:23 pm #47323
raevynstar
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Yes, that’s fine. 🙂
October 6, 2017 at 12:29 pm #47326
Hannah
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@raeyvnstar when do you want feed back by?

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October 6, 2017 at 12:41 pm #47327
Joseph Darkgrate
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I might have time tomorrow or after then. Where’s what you’ve written so far? I’ll help if I can.

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