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January 2, 2016 at 2:00 pm #8258
Yes, post it, @bluejay! There’s a for short stories here. 🙂
January 2, 2016 at 2:01 pm #8259Hm, for some reason my link didn’t work. I’ll try it again. short story forum
Let’s see if that works. :/
January 2, 2016 at 4:57 pm #8265@kate-flournoy – your link worked and the story is posted for all who wish to read it. Please feel free to critique it too. (I looooove criticism) 😛
January 2, 2016 at 9:07 pm #8271@writefury Isn’t it amazing the temp difference in one state? We have some friends that live near Seattle and they tell us that it is quite pleasant there…40 degrees or so. It didn’t get any warmer than 10 degrees here today, but the sun was shining very bright and making the snow look like glitter. It was beautiful, despite the bitter cold that pierced through even the warmest clothes! 🙂
January 2, 2016 at 10:03 pm #8272@ivyrose – You have snow!?! You are so lucky. We didn’t get any snow last year and I looooooove playing n snow. Can I come an visit you??? 😛
January 2, 2016 at 10:04 pm #8273Oops. That n should have been ‘in’. Grrrrrrr
January 2, 2016 at 10:49 pm #8275@bluejay YES!!! We have snow. A lot of snow. Of course you can visit me…why don’t we just trade places for awhile? You get snow and I get warm weather. Deal? 😉
Hey, I do that to my ‘in’s’ all the time! My fingers can’t keep up with my brain! 🙂
January 2, 2016 at 11:58 pm #8276Yeah! Not sure what my family would say but why not? 😉 Oh wait, I have a theatrical production coming up next week and as I’m the lead role, I’d better stay put. *Sad sigh* (Can you post photos on the forum, if yes, you should post some of lovely white fluffy snow.) 😀
I do hope, though, to travel to America one day. My brother went to Texas and spent a year at Gospel for Asia (he loved it), but I’d like to go to America and act in a Sight and Sound show. *Dreamy sigh* 🙂January 3, 2016 at 1:07 pm #8277Aww. 🙁 Well, I’m probably not much of an actress (though I’ve never tried acting before), so I’d better just stay here in the freezing cold, looking out at the pretty snow, (I don’t know how to post photos on here) and reading a good book. 🙂
January 3, 2016 at 1:29 pm #8279@ivy-rose Oh, snow?! Lucky… we pretty much either get clear and cold, or warm and wet. There is no in between. It’s like snow is impossible for this weather. 😛
February 29, 2016 at 11:26 pm #9493Hey! I just moved this to Novel Ideas because “Start Here” is for new members to introduce themselves. 🙂
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Btw: How did you get a profile pic like yours? Did you use Photoshop?March 1, 2016 at 9:32 am #9511No problem! 🙂
And I used PicMonkey for my profile pic. It’s really handy.
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