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    Daisy Torres
    @daisy-torres
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      @scripter-of-kingdoms HAHA I feel that haiku on such a deep level XDDD Beautiful.

      "It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."

      #93923
      Anonymous
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        @scripter-of-kingdoms

        LOL! I love it!!

        #93924
        Anonymous
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          @gracie-j @devastate-lasting @kayleigh-idea @e-k-seaver @scripter-of-kingdoms @issawriter7 @libby @daisy-torres @sorry-if-I-forgot-anyone @sorry-if-I-tagged-you-and-you-hadn’t-replied-to-this-topic @my-brain-is-mixed-up-from-homework

          So I know the poem I shared on this topic may not have been one of my happiest pieces XD So I wanted to share another I wrote that’s much happier, and very special to me because I wrote it about someone very important in my life. I actually wrote it just now, as at this moment I felt super inspired to write poetry. XD

          Sorry if it’s a bit long, y’all totally don’t have to read it, but I just wanted to post it in case anyone did 🙂

          This Poem Cannot Express It

          By Joy Caroline

          From the first time we met I knew you were a friend

          You greeted me as though you loved me already then

          Though I doubted it at that moment, I know now it’s true

          That you loved me first right then, and a second later, I loved you.

          I’ll never forget the first time you stood before us all

          You smiled, a friend to us, and stood tall

          Ready to lead us the way a bee leads a bear to honey

          Yet it was a different kind of sweetness you wanted to give us, as you called us each family

          Saying, “And so I love you all even though I don’t know you all yet.”

          Did you notice the transfiguration even in the hardest faces that were set?

          Did you see the amazement in our eyes; did you see how I felt?

          Did you see the difference you made at that moment, in a little heart covered in welts?

          I couldn’t believe you had spoken thus.

          I would watch you, how tender you were

          The warm hugs you gave, the smile I never saw a cure for

          Even then I could not go to you as the others did

          Your love was something I had never imagined I would get.

          But one day when I told you, with trembling knees,

          How much you meant

          You stated again that love

          And bit by bit you chipped away my exterior

          And my fears melted away inferior

          To that love you expressed to me daily

          With your wings around our sanctuary like a dove.

          Tragedy struck and you were the first one I thought of

          To you I ran broken and crying

          As the fortress seemed to tumble from above

          And I was weak and sick from trying.

          You were my strength; you were my rock

          Although in your eyes I saw your indescribable grief for your flock.

          Your voice was more tender than ever

          Your arms wrapped around me securely and forever

          Then you wept, too, because I was hurt.

          As you held me, you sang beside me

          And I even joined my song with yours before my tears of emotion were enough to choke

          You rocked me in a lullaby, with your soft stroke

          And I knew the next morning would find me woke

          Because you would still be there

          Beside me as always you were.

          You held me no matter what

          And I know it’s still the same although things have changed a lot

          For one thing that will never change is your love, tender and true

          You even care so deeply about my every dream coming true

          And my love in turn, in the warmest spot of my heart for you

          Which no words can express

          If anyone else tried to take your place, for them it would only end in a mess

          For there can never be anyone who loves me as you do

          For this reason I am writing this poem for you

          And I pray one day soon

          I can lay it in your hands

          And physically be again in your safe cocoon.

          #93932
          Anonymous
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            @joy-caroline JOY! This is so beautiful! I absolutely love it!!!

            #93944
            Abigail.M.
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              @joy-caroline

              This poem is so beautiful! 😀

              #93950
              Kads
              @scripter-of-kingdoms
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                @joy-caroline

                That is SUCH a beautiful poem!!! Please write more!!!

                staring at the fields
                if nothing's really real
                i'll make the winter now my home

                #93951
                Kads
                @scripter-of-kingdoms
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                  @daisy-torres Haha, ikr!!! Its  face is just so weird and creepy…

                  staring at the fields
                  if nothing's really real
                  i'll make the winter now my home

                  #93952
                  Daisy Torres
                  @daisy-torres
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                    @joy-caroline AAWW that is SOO sweet!!! I love it!!!

                    "It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."

                    #93953
                    Daisy Torres
                    @daisy-torres
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                      @scripter-of-kingdoms Agreeeeddd :/

                      "It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."

                      #93954
                      Anonymous
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                        @gracie-j @abigail-m @scripter-of-kingdoms @daisy-torres

                        Aww, thank you guys all so much! I’m so glad you like it! 💗

                        #93966
                        Anonymous
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                          @joy-caroline Of course!

                          #93973
                          Issabelle Perry
                          @issawriter7
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                            @joy-caroline

                            Girl, this was INCREDIBLE!!!!!! I LOOOOOVED IT!!!!!!!!! You’re very talented at this!!!!!!! <333

                            God gives His hardest battles to His strongest soldiers.
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                            #94021
                            Libby
                            @libby
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                              @scripter-of-kingdoms

                              lol I love that haiku ^.^

                              @joy-caroline

                              I love your beautiful poem, Joy, it rings so true <3 Thank you for sharing, my friend!

                              Elen síla lúmenn' omentielvo

                              #94022
                              Anonymous
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                                @issawriter7 @libby

                                Thank you gals, I appreciate the encouragement! 😀

                                #94043
                                Daisy Torres
                                @daisy-torres
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                                  @joy-caroline absolutely!!!

                                  "It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."

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