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April 15, 2023 at 6:52 pm #140233
@freedomwriter76 u on or nah lol
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#ProtectSebApril 17, 2023 at 10:07 am #140273Oh nice! I like them both!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
April 17, 2023 at 10:10 am #140274@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @esther-c
Sooo… what’s currently going on in the school and with all the charries rn? Trying to figure out how to help @keilah-h and my characters transition. XD Also, who was my charrie Riya rooming with again?
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
April 17, 2023 at 12:10 pm #140287Okay so I have some late transfer students that I was gonna add earlier but forgot so here they are again! So they just kind of show up at the school?
Devian- Age 14 (Heâs normally 20). Description- Tall with dark hair and shiny blue eyes. Middle child of three siblings. Second prince of the Alyura Isles. Characterâ loves prankng people at this age, especially those who arenât nice. He is easygoing but level headed and responsible when he needs to be.
Vallaney- Age 13 (Normally 19) Description- Wavy brown hair and greenish blue eyes. Character- Daughter of an Alyuri nobleman. Devianâs partner in pranking crime whenever theyâre together. At this age she is less reserved and less refined than her mother would like. She will do anything she can to help others.
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:April 17, 2023 at 12:10 pm #140288Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision so basically it’s the first day of the boarding school part of it, so everyone is having a day off from school so they can get situated
everyone is in the dining hall eating lunch, currently, but most of them are about to leave đ
Everyone’s just basically exploring since they have a day off from school XD
April 17, 2023 at 12:20 pm #140296@princesachronicle22 ooh nice!! I think ur boy would get along with Nyx XD or theyâd fight. Depends XD. Maybe a bit of both
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#ProtectSebApril 17, 2023 at 12:28 pm #140297Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@princesachronicle22 love ’em!!! â¤ď¸â¤ď¸â¤ď¸ Do you want them to board with anyone? we might still have some people available XD
@godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @keilah-h (hey, what do you wanna do for Steve/Bucky and Wrecker, any ideas???) @euodia-vision @whalekeeper @sarafini @anyone-else-I-may-be-forgettingI’m finally back đ
Wolfgang
Paxton drifted off to sleep in Grimm’s arms.
Wolfgang let out a deep breath. “He…he’s okay…right?”
Grimm gave Wolfgang a soft, small smile. “Yeah…he’s okay.”
Wolfgang nodded. Turned to face Joshua, Jakob, and Reuben. “Sorry…I-I wasn’t being very nice to you guys…”
Joshua smiled softly. “It’s okay Wolf…we understand.”
Reuben smiled brightly. “Yeah, we all make mistakes, Wolfie, it’s alright!”
Footsteps sounded. Adolphus and Dietrich stepped out of the dining hall and into the school hallway.
Dietrich’s eyebrows furrowed together. “Is Paxton okay?”
Joshua turned to the two of them and smiled. “Yeah…he’ll be okay. He’s sleeping now.”
Reuben turned to Ara and Grimm. “It’s a good thing you two were around…”
Arabella nodded, concern still in her brown eyes. “It was.”
Rapid footsteps sounded and a small figure ran into Jakob’s legs, almost hitting the floor before Jakob grabbed her arm. She giggled, her black curls framing her chubby face. “I got you, Jakob!!! I got’s you! Up! Up!!!” She held her arms up.
Jakob sighed and lifted Steffi into his arms. Annalise skipped over, following her younger sister.
She grabbed Wolfgang’s hands. She looked up at him and giggled. “I got Wolfie, Steffi!”
Wolfgang smiled at his half-sister and then looked up. “Oh, hi daddy, hi mom.”
Frida didn’t even nod in reply, but Felix smiled faintly and gave Wolfgang a nod.
Frida looked over at Paxton and Grimm, disgust in her blue eyes. “Did something happen here?”
Felix saw as well. “What happened? Is that boy alright?”
There was even concern in his tone.
(this is everyone’s first time meeting The Boys’ Dad…I just now realized thatđ He’s most certainly not the best…but he’s better than Frida…although tbh…that’s not saying much…đ¤đ)
Leo
Leo took Riven’s outstretched hand and shook it firmly, bravely. “Leo Baumann. November’s been a great roommate, certainly no trouble.”
He let go of Riven’s hand.
Riker took Riven’s hand and shook it as well, but his movements were clumsy…nervous…shaking. “Riker S-Schind, sir. And Leo’s right…N-November is a wonderful roommate and a friend of ours.”
Leo nodded in agreement and smiled up at Riven.
“He sure is.”
April 17, 2023 at 1:55 pm #140303@freedomwriter76 agh FridaâŚ.
Grimm
Frida looked from the small child to the two adults who had appeared. One, the woman, didnât seem the least bit concerned to see a child, passed out in the hall.
Grimm stood, gently cradling Paxton. He nodded, smiling softly.
âHeâs alright, sir. He had a bit of an attitude episode. Iâm about to take him to rest now.â
âDo you need me to show you to the room, Grimm?â Wolfgang asked.
âThat would be-â
âIâm afraid not, Wolfgang,â the woman spoke, voice cold as ice. Ara turned, eyes wide. âYour father and I have come to see how you and your brothers are faring. We donât need you rushing off as soon as we arrive.â
Grimmâs eyes narrowed and he watched as Joshuaâs shoulders slumped a bit. Jakobâs fists clenched and Wolfgangâs eyes went wide. Reubenâs face went shades whiter.
âBut-!â Wolfgang started. The woman glared at him, sending a chill down Grimmâs spine.
âDo not sass your mother,â she hissed. Wolfgang went quiet, backing into Joshua.
Lukas stepped up, nervous, âI-I can show Grimm to the room, WolfieâŚI-itâs okay.â
Wolfgang just nodded.
Grimm was thankful Paxton was asleep.
âThank you Lukas,â Ara said softly, still eyeing the woman, and then looking to Wolfgang and his brothers. âAhâŚweâll see you later, alright?â
The boys smiled, waving as they set off. Grimm hoped everything would be alright for them.
(hey freedom, maybe after Riven leaves Frida will want the boys to take her to Leo so she can meet with all of her sons? Then November can also see not all mothers are very nice đ)
ALSO! @esther-c and @whalekeeper Iâm thinking when GRIMm brings pax to the room Lukas, Grimm and Pax can meet (is it Marcel?) the other boy staying in that room with Pax, wolfie and Lukas.
And since Nyx is now where rn, maybe he can meet Erich? Up to yâall.
November
November blushed slightly at his friendâs words, though they didnât help ease the anxiety in his chest.
He glanced at Riker, noticing the boyâs sudden jittery movements. Perhaps he wasnât good around strangersâŚ
November could relateâŚ
And thenâŚhe remembered.
Rikerâs fatherâŚhe wasnât very niceâŚ
November paled. DidâŚdid his father remind Riker ofâŚ
ButâŚbut his father wasnât like that!
âGlad to hear it,â Riven smiled, placing both hands behind his back. He cleared his throat, scanning the room. His eyes landed on Novemberâs side of the room. âI see youâve made yourself at home.â
The boy nodded, hoping the set up was up to par withâŚwhatever his father was thinking.
âYou have all of your books?â He nodded. âClothes?â Nodded again. âPhone?â Nodded once more.
âGood.â
Novemberâs heart trilled at the single word.
But the sudden feeling of accomplishment was dashed as his fatherâs expression turned sour, eyes darkening. November frowned, shoulders slumping.
âDo you remember what I asked you to do for me yesterday?â
Novemberâs heart thumped in his chest.
YesterdayâŚyesterday! What was yesterday?! He couldnât remember! AhâŚwaitâŚwait! Saturday, it was Saturday! W-What was he supposed to doâŚ.?
He swallowed, trying hard to resist the urge to pull at his scalp.
Riven frowned, eyes boring into his sonâs own. He sighed deeply. âYou donât. I figured as much, considering I had to run the errand myself today.â He pinched the bridge of his nose. âI shouldnât be surprised. Why I trust you with these things isâŚbeyond me.â
November deflated, his insides shriveling at the familiar words.
WorthlessâŚ
UselessâŚ
Good for nothingâŚ
Waste of spaceâŚ
FailureâŚ
MistakeâŚ
âI swearâŚâ His father sighed.
âIâŚIâm sorry dad IâŚâ He could feel the pressure building behind his eyes.
âDoesnât matter, I did it myself. Thankfully the post office wasnât closed today, otherwise things wouldâve been considerably more difficult.â
Shame and guilt made Novemberâs stomach twist.
Heâd messed upâŚheâd failedâŚagain.
Why couldnât he just remember things sometimes! Or get good grades? OrâŚor not trip over his own two feet? Or say the wrong things? OrâŚ
Be such a bad son�
Riven sighed, adjusting his suit. He glanced at his watch, âI have to go.â He turned to his son, âMake sure you keep to your studies, alright? Stay focused.â He turned back to the other boys, whoâd been watching the scene in silence.
November had forgotten they were there. His face flushed with embarrassment and he turned red, looking away.
âIt was good to meet you boys. Iâm sure my son is in good hands. I hope he can learn a thing or two while here.â He gave another glance at November.
âAnd November?â
âY-Yes dad?â
âPlease, donât make a fool of yourself while youâre here.â
âY-yes dadâŚâ He said as his father walked out, leaving him And his friends in awkward silence.
November slumped in on himself, wishing the floor would open up and swallow him up, embarrassment and allâŚ
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#ProtectSebApril 17, 2023 at 2:10 pm #140304I need one more person to room with Corvina sooo
I have at freedom writers uhh not so nice Charrie Hilda rooming with her rn lol but I want a nice Charrie too so my poor Corvina isnât alone with meanies.
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#ProtectSebApril 17, 2023 at 2:42 pm #140305Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 lol, yea, we need someone other than Hilda…poor Corvina đ
I’m gonna have Erich meet Nyx in the dorm, btw đ
And NOVEMBER!!! đđđ Yes, you sweet, beautiful baby, your dad is like Franz…although maybe not as bad…but close enough!!! đđđ
alsooooo….I may not be on a whole bunch today, trying to get some much-needed writing done…hoping to get to/over 185 pages in my draft today đ¤(currently at 173 đĽł)
Erich
He strode down the hall, adjusting his backpack strap.
It had all of his needed things in it. He’d brought a few things in just the other day.
And there was nothing wrong with being a little late.
He needed to look good, after all. Besides…when school started back up, both Aramis and Edrich, the jerks, would have little…presents…in their lockers.
Erich smirked.
Oh, what fun to mess with bullies.
He arrived at his dorm room door. He hadn’t looked at the list to see who his roommates were…thought it’d be more fun to leave it a surprise.
He opened the door.
“Is anyone in here!? I’m Erich…your roommate!”
Riker
Riker watched Riven leave, and only then could he breathe evenly.
Leo raised an eyebrow at the door. “Well, that was…something. November, you good?”
November looked up at Leo. Nodded. Rubbed the back of his neck. “Y-yea! Uhm…yeah, I’m great!”
Leo shrugged. “…If you say so…”
A quick knock sounded on the door and then it opened.
Revealing a large group of people.
Frida smiled. “Oh, there you are, Leo dear…this is your dorm?”
Leo blinked a few times. “Uhm…uh…y-yes…M-mother, what are you doing here?”
“We came to visit, darling. May we come in?”
“S-sure.” Leo replied, opening the door further, letting his family inside.
Riker sat on one of the beds to give the family room…because there was so many of them.
So, so many.
April 17, 2023 at 2:55 pm #140309@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @anyone-else
So, I may not get to writing a RP today. I have to get some actual writing done. đ But I may be able to hop on later and write on real quick. Weâll see. đ
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
April 17, 2023 at 2:56 pm #140310Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@esther-c đđť
Have fun!!!! I’m trying to do the same đ
April 17, 2023 at 3:06 pm #140313@freedomwriter76
understandable, I also need to get in some writing. Maybe I can finish chapter/scene one!! Maybe XD
November
November watched as Leoâs large family filed in, his eyes widening at the sight.
Heâd seen large families before butâŚ
WowâŚ
It was still a bit strangeâŚ
Heâd often wondered what it would be like to have a large familyâŚseeing as it had always just been him and his father. Or that was all he could remember anyway.
His nerves still shot from before, he merely waved at everyone, face still red from embarrassment.
Frida looked at him, giving him a small sneer. âWellâŚarenât you the boy who hurt Joshua a few months back? Tripping down the stairs?â
November flinched violently, the memories of being dropped from the second story of the school relaying in his mind.
Of course that wasnât the story that had been givenâŚthe story that had been told was one blaming him for Joshuaâs injuries after the boy had helped him.
Saved him, reallyâŚ
He looked away, the tears already pounding behind his eyes from earlier with his father threatening to spill over now. All he could do was nod.
Frida let out a small huff, shaking her head. âWell, Iâve heard of your father. Letâs hope you take after him, and that incident before was just a once off.â
November didnât look up, heart dropping.
NoâŚheâd mess up again.
He always did.
Nyx
Nyx covered his ears, letting out an indignant squeak as the door of his dorm burst open.
After the incident the dining hall, heâd left Grimm, though his sister would e had a heart attack had she found out he did, and headed back to the room, feeling uncomfortable about the whole thingâŚ
It was just tooâŚ
Familiar.
And now, some stranger was coming into his dormâŚ
Nyx glared at the person, and then narrowed his eyes, staring at the boyâs hair.
He was used to vibrant colors, but his hair rivaled even LynâsâŚeccentric tendencies.
âHush it, would you! You bout blew my eardrums!â
The young man looked at him, raising a brow. He grinned. âWhy, you must be one of my roommates! Nameâs Erich.â He threw his bag on a bed. Nyx growled low, already not liking him.
He felt cornered. Trapped.
Territorial.
This was HIS space.
OkayâŚ
His and GrimmâsâŚ
But Wolfboy didnât count!
Nyx crossed his arms, just glaring at the older student. He was scanning the room, smiling.
âHeeey, these places are nice! Kinda quiet though.â
âYea, letâs keep it that way, huh?â Nyx huffed.
Erich looked at the kit, placing a hand in his hip. âMan, youâre a ray of sunshine. Donât think I got your name.â
âCuz I didnât give it.â Nyx stuck his tongue out, rolling over where his back was facing Erich.
âAh, seeing as weâre gonna be rooming together, I think I might need to know your name. Could be useful,â he said sarcastically.
Nyx growled under his breath, annoyed.
First, he got stuck with Grimm, the baby sitterâŚ
Now he had to deal with thisâŚwhoever he was.
âNyx. My nameâs Nyx. Now shut up, and let me sleep.â
Erich whistled, âMan, this oughta be a fun year.â
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#ProtectSebApril 17, 2023 at 3:51 pm #140322Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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haha, yesterday I found out/decided that Freedom’s Fire is going to have to be split into 2 novels đ
The first still called Freedom’s Fire, the second something along the lines of Broken Shackles or something like that! đ
And I will be leaving the first one at a cliffhanger đ
Erich
Erich began putting some of his things up, brushing his blue and orange tipped blonde hair out of his eyes every time it got into his face.
“So, Nyx, was it? You know who our other roommate is?”
Jakob
Jakob’s fists clenched as Frida spoke.
She knew nothing about what had happened.
Absolutely NOTHING.
She just listened to whatever she heard.
She was ignorant like that. Jakob knew she was.
“This room is okay, it’s not very pretty though!” 6-year-old Annalise mused, looking around the dorm room. “It needs more color!”
Leo faced Frida and Felix. “Uhm…why exactly are you here?”
“To check in on all of you, of course. Are you doing well, staying out of trouble?”
Leo nodded. “Yes, Father…I’m doing my best.”
“You better stay out of trouble.” Frida reminded, warned, even, eyes piercing.
Leo nodded. “Yes Mother.”
“MAMA, do we have to stay here much longer!? This place boring!” Steffi complained, pursing her lips, her eyebrows furrowing together, pouting.
“We’ll leave a little later, darling. For now, you can see your brothers.”
Steffi huffed, plopping down onto the floor. “They no fun!”
Frida sighed. “Steffi, dear…are you hungry?”
Steffi jumped to her feet. “Yes, Mama! I’m hungry!”
“Me too!” Annalise chimed in.
“Adolphus, take the girls to the car, would you? I have a few snacks in there.”
Felix tossed the keys to Adolphus. Adolphus picked Steffi up with one arm and held Annalise’s hand and the keys with the other, quickly making his leave of the room.
Frida’s gaze landed on November and Riker. “I trust Leo hasn’t gotten into any trouble, hmm?”
April 17, 2023 at 4:00 pm #140324Did you say you needed another roommate for some charries?
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
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