Home Page › Forums › Fiction Writing › General Writing Discussions › Fantasy/Modern School AU RP
- This topic has 7,103 replies, 33 voices, and was last updated 2 hours, 14 minutes ago by Keilah H..
-
AuthorPosts
-
February 4, 2025 at 3:15 pm #197017
Yup, even if the relationship is kind of distant.
He’s kinda the same.
I thought about killing off the parents, but Barnes has enough sadness already, and I felt it would be appropriate to give her a family to support.
Lucky Barnes, your author lets you have good things. Sniper’s parents will be dead halfway through the storyline and he’s still a bit messed up from it afterward. And it’s not even my fault.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
February 4, 2025 at 3:49 pm #197021The Twins
Eddie carefully contemplated two different dog collars, one blue and one red. This was a big decision.
“What do you think, Blackjack?”
The aussie puppy leaned forward in Ellie’s arms, sniffing them both excitedly. Then he shook his head and sneezed.
“You’re right,” Ed said solemnly. “You deserve better than these plain solid colors. You’re much too fabulous.”
Eddie put the collars back on their respective hooks. She scanned the rest of the shelf, and gasped when she spotted a glittery silver collar. She snatched it and held it up to her sister.
“That looks like a disco ball,” Ellie said, unimpressed.
“It’s perfect!” Eddie shook it a little so each individual sparkle would catch the light.
Ellie pushed past her and looked at a red collar with a black paw print design.
“How about this one?”
A few minutes later, the girls walked out of the pet store, loaded up with supplies. Blackjack proudly wore his new collar and leash.
“Do you think we’ll get in trouble for having a dog in our dorm?”
“Maybe. Sebastian didn’t.”
“As far as we know.”
“Speaking of school, we should get going.”
They walked as quickly as they could back to the school. Classes were almost starting and the halls were crowded. They had to carry the puppy and tuck in their tails to keep from being tripping hazards.
Soon, they made it to their lockers. Ellie’s bag of new pet supplies made an upset squeaking sound as she stuffed it inside. She pulled out her backpack.
“What are you doing?” Ed asked. “We need to put Blackjack in the dorm.”
“No time.” Ellie said. She took all her books and papers out of her own backpack and stuffed them into Eddie’s. Then she put Blackjack in her now empty bag, along with her hoodie as a cushion, and a chew toy.
“There.”
Both girls smiled and gave the puppy an affectionate pat on the head. Then they picked up their bags and headed to class.
@anyone what classes do you want to do?
February 4, 2025 at 3:54 pm #197022“You don’t do anything. You’re a recluse, dear.”
Hehehe best line. And reading it in an old woman’s voice makes it 10x better 😆
February 4, 2025 at 4:27 pm #197030Lucky Barnes, your author lets you have good things. Sniper’s parents will be dead halfway through the storyline and he’s still a bit messed up from it afterward. And it’s not even my fault.
Lucky in some ways, unlucky in others. XD I decided over the past year or so that I don’t like writing characters with just trauma+healing as their main thing, so my rule of thumb is to make them interesting before saying anything about sad backstory stuff. So like, Marcel is fun enough, and people on here still don’t know what his backstory is.
Blackjack babyyy. It’s hilarious that they’ve already got all the supplies and are committing to this thing.
Hehehe best line. And reading it in an old woman’s voice makes it 10x better 😆
I’ve gotten to the point where I don’t notice how funny something is until after I’ve written it. Barnes’ mum speaks facts. 💅
#ProtectAdolinKholin
February 4, 2025 at 5:41 pm #197040Lucky in some ways, unlucky in others. XD
Ehh, that’s all characters though…..lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
-
AuthorPosts
- You must be logged in to reply to this topic.