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October 22, 2024 at 11:58 am #188093
Also Barnes doesn’t have to be there all the time, and she can’t be in two places at once so she won’t eliminate all the fighting opportunities in the story. I just felt like there could be some adult character to balance out all the chaos whenever we need her.
“Everything is a mountain”
October 22, 2024 at 12:00 pm #188094Oh.
Great.
Crazy teacher comes in and wipes out my badguys.
Perfect.
I think I’ll extract the Agents then. Apparently Marcel is tired of fighting and would rather go to the school prom?
lol. Just joking. But if you are tired of the bad guys I can take them off somewhere else and finish this quietly.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
October 22, 2024 at 12:12 pm #188096Barnes isn’t overpowered… She literally doesn’t have any powers and she gets hurt all the time in fights.
Apparently Marcel is tired of fighting and would rather go to the school prom?
He’s not tired of fighting, he was just badly hurt and needs a minute. I must admit I wasn’t expecting him to be healed right away, that was Rax’s doing.
Also he has been a part of almost every fight on this roleplay, so he’s not here for prom at all XD
You can do whatever you want. My characters are not invincible and I didn’t mean them to come off like it, if either of them bothered you, I apologize.
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October 22, 2024 at 12:26 pm #188099Oh I don’t think Marcel is invincible. He was actually quiet fun to RP with because he isn’t. It’s all the characters belonging to @raxforge who seem invincible. lol.
I get him needing a minute. I just don’t know what I think of Barns. In fact, Rory will be steering clear of her from now on. Lol. I don’t think they would get along.
At all.
She seems quite stiff and….. maybe harsh, in a weird kind of way…… and then super lax……. I don’t know what to make of her.
We can do whatever.
I don’t Rory is even in the school tho. Maybe he still is.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
October 22, 2024 at 12:28 pm #188101Now I’m having second thoughts.
Barnes could be a really interesting ally and maybe the person Rory needs.
idk.
Maybe not.
*shrug*
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
October 22, 2024 at 12:38 pm #188102Alpha
Alpha still looked confused but nodded to Rax. He then stopped leaning on the wall, walking towards Ms. Barnes. “I can’t help you find them, but I’m more than willing to fight them again. And before you say anything, I am not a student of this school so you have no responsibility for me nor authority over me. Besides, my occupation is fighting.”
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October 22, 2024 at 12:45 pm #188103Oh I don’t think Marcel is invincible. He was actually quiet fun to RP with because he isn’t.
Phew, okay good! The idea when attacking Marcel is to tire him physically/emotionally. After a certain point his reflexes stop working and he just swings blindly at stuff XD
She seems quite stiff and….. maybe harsh, in a weird kind of way…… and then super lax……. I don’t know what to make of her.
Yep that’s Barnes! *Gives her a friendly hug* *She growls* She appears very standoffish and blunt to other people. You’re supposed to dislike her. But inside her head, she’s awkward, because she doesn’t know how to talk with people about everyday stuff. So I don’t mind if people clash with her.
“Everything is a mountain”
October 22, 2024 at 12:49 pm #188104You can do whatever you want. My characters are not invincible and I didn’t mean them to come off like it, if either of them bothered you, I apologize.
Same here. I don’t mean for my character’s to be invincible; you guys just haven’t found a way to actually hurt him enough to stop fighting. Rax can’t heal in the middle of a battle, he has to be still and not be attacked at the same time. If want to know how to hurt him to the point of almost death, I am happy to tell you. Just not that the agents might not know how to stop him yet.
Rax and Ben
Rax and Ben start walk with Alpha towards Barns. “We are not students either, and we will help fight the agents as well. I might even know where they are.”
I go by many names, Andrew, Andy, Mandrew, but you may call me... BATMAN!!!
October 22, 2024 at 1:10 pm #188105In fights, it might help to give some hints at Rax’s weaknesses? I think of a fight like a dialogue, and the characters take turns knocking stamina off each other until something tips the scales.
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October 22, 2024 at 2:36 pm #188107Yeah, but I haven’t had a chance to do that.
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October 23, 2024 at 11:20 am #188142Maverick
Maverick grinned. “That’s really funny cause I kind of do the same thing. The only reason I have my classes memorized is because of Navin, but I’m sure even he skips a few because, as you can very obviously see, he can barely handle one person at a time.”
He then took a quick glance behind him and laughed, “And I’m not sure where he went…”
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I’m sorry, I’m not exactly sure how to continue the conversation.
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October 23, 2024 at 11:34 am #188147Oh no! Lol. I’m sorry, I did have a lot of school yesterday so it’s taken me a while to reply.
Navin
Navin nodded, then frowned when Astro turned around again.
“D- do we have to check- check in? I don’t even kn- know where- where the entrance is.”
He opened the notebook again to his drawn map, walked over to Astro and pointed to their location. “We’re… there. I- I didn’t draw-… the entrance, or an- any exits. So, I… I don’t even know how t- to get out.”
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
October 23, 2024 at 11:47 am #188150Its ok!
Astro
Astro studied the map and looked around. “Oh no! OH NO NO NO!!!” He looked around terrified as if he would lose his life. “Shoot shoot shoot! We are going to miss class!!! Then I’ll get reported!!! And then ill be uh… *gulp* removed…”
Astro looked around again, he finally turned again and looked at Navin “We NEED to find the enetnrace!”
"The more you practice the art of thankfulness, the more you have to be thankful for.”
October 23, 2024 at 12:04 pm #188153Navin
Navin shook his head vigorously.
“No no no- y- you won’t. I’ve missed… a class. Don- don’t worry about it. It- it can’t be far.”
He then looked down at the paper and began taking quick strides in the direction he imagined would be best, assuming Astro followed.
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
October 23, 2024 at 1:32 pm #188161Astro
He saw Navin walking away and ran up to catch him. “How are you not panicking, if you knew what happened to my sis-” Astro suddenly stopped. “Never mind.” he said in a hushed voice. They walked until they found the doors and went through. The halls were empty of life, “Oh no, I have to go! ill meet you after school… I guess.” Astros tone turned from the friendly nervous type into a grimmer version. “bye.”
"The more you practice the art of thankfulness, the more you have to be thankful for.”
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