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Oh wow, Chase’s powers are cool :0
Thank you *bows* one of the many things that drove me crazy trying to figure out XD
@loopy
Usually my problems become my charries’ problems, not the other way around lol
Yeah, that happens too. Idk, I cry with Alpha when he looses Emmie, reject Gloria with Glace when he was banished, I’m shocked with Nahim when he discovers he now has a metal arm, start growing shy and fearful with Chase…I feel like I live in their minds, but am still in my body…Now I know why writer’s are the weird ones…I’m honestly wondering if I’m not some kind of mental case waiting to happen XD
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#AnduthForever (hopefully đź’•)LukasÂ
“Oh… Oh, I-I’m so sorry.” His eyes clouded with sympathy. He wasn’t the one who needed someone’s pity; at least Asher was still alive. He couldn’t imagine actually losing a sibling. He was still holding onto a hope that Asher would change his mind someday and come back. But Liv’s sister… she would never come back. Impulsively, he gave Liv a gentle hug and pulled back with a soft smile. “It-it’ll be o-okay.” It was the only words of comfort he managed to scrape up.
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
Liv
She inhaled sharply as Lukas briefly pulled her into his arms.
“Thanks,” she sighed, smiling at him, “I needed that. When Aubrielle died…” she sighed. “Our family just fell apart. My brothers and parents were distant, and I’d just felt so alone…and then they sent me to school. All I had was Xandro. It’s been a long time since I had friends like you guys.”
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333LukasÂ
“Man… th-that must be, be tough. B-but I’m glad we’re able to be here for you.” He offered a smile. “Because if it was just you and Xandro, then Xandro might get you in trouble. You saw what he did to me.”
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
Liv
Liv laughed. “Yeah…Xandro is a bit impulsive at times.”
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333DanteÂ
Dante followed Seb’s instructions. At first he felt ridiculous, but then remembered Sebastian’s bucket shoes and felt better about himself. He tried it again, faster this time.
“Ey, did you see that?” He smiled, his dull mood finally dissipating. “I think I got it that time. This is actually easy.”  He tried once again, stumbled, and then regained his balance. “Or not. You make it look easy. Where’d you learn to dance, anyway? Your parents pay for fancy classes or something?”
“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
I love Rina XD She’s so energetic and funny. Her powers perfectly complement that.
You’re all good! Feeling emotions through your characters is certainly enjoyable. I don’t always feel it myself in the moment of writing, but it’s always cool when I do.
You’re not hogging the spotlight! If anyone is, it’s me, because my charrie is in trouble. Please, write as much as you want. I love reading it, okay?!?
“Everything is a mountain”
*Listens to Mr. Blue Sky while writing my dramatic scene*
*Questions why I do this at all*
Calvin
Cal immediately took hold of the doorknob, and gave this new girl a wary but thankful nod. “A missing friend might be in there. He was out of sorts this morning, and someone may have taken advantage of that.”
He opened the door.
Marcel
“…All you must do is give me your vessel.”
Magic pooled around them, like a drug, sweetening the air.
Marcel blinked sleepily, as whispered recitations whirled around his head like lullabies, tightening the gold band. “Why? Why would you want my… whaaa?”
The demon lurched forward angrily, and the magic intensified. “Your body, fool!”
The boy snorted. “You don’t want this here… I… I may look like I’m hiding some super edgy secret? Eh? But I’ve never been in a gym. So, uh, I don’t know what you’re expecting.”
“So what would you lose?”
“Not much.”
Marcel suddenly drooped, and the magic took the opportunity. It grew so strong, it took hold of his essence and suspended him above the floor.
Then his emotions took hold. Guilt and self-disgust washed over him in waves, tightening his throat and hanging his head.
Guilt. For every shallow joke, every insensitive thing he had ever done.
But mostly disgust.
He could be a god.
And yet he was stuck here, in this tiny mind and body, whining over homework and loneliness. Every day, he had a chance to change everything – make something beautiful and innovative – and he chose to sit around on his puffy clouds and goof off. And for what?
He hadn’t done anything good. His friends smiled and thanked him, but they probably thought he was a weak wannabe. They probably thought things would be better off without him. They thought…
And when he overthought like this, it was only more proof.
“Yes, you are a silly human. So ensure you will never stumble again. We will remove you from all these insecurities, in exchange for your body.”
“That sounds nice.”
The demon breathed in Marcel’s words, and unleashed a new wave of dark magic. The magic of exchange.
The godling’s spirit essence screamed, but Marcel barely cared to feel it. After all, it would find a new vessel, within the next few thousand years.
No biggie.
Suddenly there was a sweeping bang, a door opening. Babs yelled from somewhere behind him, distraught.
His brain fog lifted. In front of him, an enormous, fleshy creature with a hundred eyes peered at him curiously. The light reflected in those eyes, hot and scorching, flashed him into blindness again.
Marcel managed to call over his shoulder. “Don’t come in! Don’t worry! I’ve got it under… I’m fine… I’m…”
“Everything is a mountain”
Oh, sorry, tags @loopylin @rae @savannah_grace2009 @jonas do with this scene what you wish XD
“Everything is a mountain”
You’re not hogging the spotlight! If anyone is, it’s me, because my charrie is in trouble. Please, write as much as you want. I love reading it, okay?!?
Aww, thanks!
And you’re not hogging the spotlight either, you’re just giving us more options for what we do with our characters. (Writing romance and people dancing is hardd)
Yeah, that happens too. Idk, I cry with Alpha when he looses Emmie, reject Gloria with Glace when he was banished, I’m shocked with Nahim when he discovers he now has a metal arm, start growing shy and fearful with Chase…I feel like I live in their minds, but am still in my body…Now I know why writer’s are the weird ones…I’m honestly wondering if I’m not some kind of mental case waiting to happen XD
I actually think that’s pretty cool. It probably helps you to write emotions realistically, which I definitely struggle with. I think my emotions might be a bit broken.
And I doubt you’re any crazier than everyone else on here :]“Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle
Alright, sounds good XD
I think my emotions might be a bit broken.
Hey, no shame enjoying the whimsical nature of a story rather than the emotions. Absolutely no shame.
Sebastian
At Dante’s approving comment, the other boy’s chest puffed out like a peacock’s feathers.
“Where’d you learn to dance, anyway? Your parents pay for fancy classes or something?”
Seb waved it off. “Nah. In my younger years, I, um, was practically self-taught. I saw dance floors and shows, and there was always music available.”
Always.
“But hey, you look spiffy, sir! Give it a bit more twist, and then -“ Seb scrambled over to Dante’s side, linked arms, and tried in vain to synchronize. “Have you never danced before? You have a natural swing.”
“Everything is a mountain”
@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @savannah_grace2009
Behold the shyiad!
Chase Duke
“No,” Chase whispered. He knew what it was like on his own world to be deceived with Black Sorcery, but that was weak Chase, not godling Marcel. “Marcel, no! Resist!” Frantic, with eyes yellow, Chase stepped forward, taking off his hoodie and whispering for Sef to stay back. He walked into the doorway, and halted. Anger boiled up in his veins, his heart quickened.
Now or never. He took in one deep breath and held it in his chest. Every muscle on his body stiffened, bristling. His hands fisted, his arms coming up. His face turned red, his features began to almost twist. His body shook. He gave a cry, whether in pain or anger, it could not be told. Thrn his arms slapped to his sides like a soldier at attention, and black scales burst through his skin in a few places. Suddenly, where once was Chase, there was a snake. Writhing and large, it opened it’s mouth, showing long fangs dripping venom, a voice like and yet unlike Chase’s suddenly sounded.
“Let him go…or die.”
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Sef
She gasped as the door swung open and shrank back.
Chase strode forward and in a terrifying moment he became a terrible writhing snake.
She watched in awe as he demanded the release of his friend, unsure whether to be afraid or proud of her new friend.
Sorry guys…that RP was really cringe haha! But I hadn’t done a Sef POV in a while…
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333@whalekeeper @loopylin @rae @savannah_grace2009
Rina
“Hmm… this is getting interesting,” said Rina as a boy turned into a giant snake and slithered towards the creepy black thing inside.
Rina dropped through a portal and landed in the room behind it. Another portal opened and her sword leapt into her hand. She pointed it at the demon’s back and generated crystals along its edge.
“It’s over, creepy black thing,” she said. “We don’t like kidnappings.”
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Thanks! She’s one of my favorites too, which is surprising considering that I invented her on a complete whim.
Her powers perfectly complement that.
People who use that power are called Jumpers, which definitely suits her!
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