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June 8, 2023 at 8:32 am #146888
YUUUS THEY SHALL CONQUER ALL hehe
Weeeell soooooo you’re right with the first guess (although they do spend a majority of the time as brothers, even if the relationship is more distant and cousin-ish at first).
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Okay. So. He’s basically his universe’s equivalent of a cherubim, except these beings are specifically geared towards war (so yes, an army), and they are far from perfect. The highest generals guard their own designated planets. After Marcel’s backstory (which is spoilers lol, but he basically made a huge mistake), he is banished to the world of Baztet.
He is in a human body, and basically doesn’t have the mental or physical capabilities to understand why he was banished, what happened to him, or the implications of his powers. In fact, it’s less a story of a cosmic being trapped inside a boy, and more of one about a boy, trapped in the history of a war captain, that he himself does not identify with.
I love writing a dorky middle-grader (no offense to real ones, I was one XD), trying to fit in, while also entirely overwhelmed by his own potential. The whole idea is he has a super big, cosmic backstory, but lives the life of a middle child with an obsession for superhero comics, and low self-esteem. An ‘itty-bitty living space,’ as a genie would put it XD
As for Calvin, he protects Marcel when they’re just normal kids, but when he’s an older, official Baztet Lordling (around 17 or 18), Marcel is his most trustworthy guardian. After all, that’s what he exists to do.
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Rant OVER, if you read through that, congrats, here’s a heart ❤
“Everything is a mountain”
June 8, 2023 at 8:34 am #146889ACK I always feel like I’ve said too much
“Everything is a mountain”
June 8, 2023 at 11:42 am #146903Heard that you are seeking to enlist some bullies…
I’ve thought about it a little bit and maybe I could add Erebus? He’s more of the troubled-villain-who-eventually-gets-redeemed type, but I think it would be helpful for me to write him before he takes a turn for the better. I have a tendency to write him in a way where he doesn’t seem that bad and you end up just feeling sorry for him, instead of despising him for his villainy.
Anywho, just wanted to throw that our there.
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 8, 2023 at 11:54 am #146904@freedomwriter76
Awesome! Hmm… am I sensing something in Angelina here? 😏😂
Tirion
“Of course! Always nice to meet a new friend! Hi, I’m Angelina, I’m Riker’s younger sister!!!” The girl said with an enthusiastic timbre.
Tirion smiled at her. “Thanks, Angelina.” He then turned to Iris and Erich. “Thank you as well, and don’t worry Erich, I’m not currently looking to steal someone’s best friend, maybe another time.”
Erich chuckled. “Good to know.”
Riker and Tirion found open seats next to the other three young people and settled down.
“So, um… what electives are you guys taking?” Tirion asked.
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 8, 2023 at 12:00 pm #146907Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@whalekeeper *claps* Bravo, Marcel!!! 👏👏👏 Great job getting rid of Wing 1 and Wing 2!!! ❤️ (don’t judge my nicknames for them 😂)
@godlyfantasy12 Poor Pax, good thing Luna and Marcel were there for him 🥰And I’m good with Hitchens’ gang being allied with the bullies…it’d make sense for him XD
And I meannnn…Hilda will prob be a bully, kinda already is one 😂
And I could add in Alec Pierce from my fanfic…🤔 ooh, or his sister Alice…or both XD
June 8, 2023 at 12:06 pm #146912Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision Ahh, she’s just very energetic XD She has a crush on my charrie Jakob tho 😂
(they get married in my books 🥰 of course, almost all these charries are older, of course, in my books XD)
Angelina
“Ooh, I have dance and culinary arts!!! I think it’ll be a lot of fun!” Angelina bounced in her seat, kicking her legs, unable to sit still.
She just didn’t like sitting still for long periods of time!!
Iris smiled gently. “I have creative writing and Psychology.” She tucked a strand of her light brown hair behind her ear. “I think they’ll both be enjoyable classes.”
Erich grinned. “I have PE and Geography.”
“Creative writing and Band,” Riker put in, “but what about you, Tirion?”
June 8, 2023 at 12:40 pm #146922@freedomwriter76
Thank yooouuu! *takes a bow for my charrie* I hope he and Wolfie can make up as well in the future.
“Everything is a mountain”
June 8, 2023 at 1:11 pm #146930@freedomwriter76
Ooooh gotcha *pushes away previous senses* 😆
This is shortest rp ever, I couldn’t think of anything else. XD
Tirion
“Um, creative writing and woodworking,” Tirion replied with a smile, “I’m pretty excited about both.”
He looked over at Riker and Iris, “What do you guys like to write about?”
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 8, 2023 at 2:56 pm #146932@freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision fine with me! More villain charries the better XD
@whalekeeper SO COOL!!! Love it!!!#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 8, 2023 at 4:14 pm #146937Thx!!
@everyone
Okay, I’m going to initiate English class if that’s okay 😅 But if your charries still want to talk, I’m guessing the teacher won’t care\notice
I realize I’ve kind of been on a lot recently, but that’s because the summer really kicked me this last week. I’ve just been a whirlwind of energy – but I’m not sure why. 😂 D’ya know what I mean?
Calvin
Calvin slid into a seat next to Fynn. He put his arms on the desk and hid his face with a soft moan.
I need Mom.
She was a genuine lifeline at this point.
He would have to send a message or something, with his scratched-up flip phone. But his parents only checked Noc’s computer once every night before bed, and he needed advice right away.
Calvin wasn’t usually a worrier. His entire family were cool and relaxed. But Marcel was a different problem altogether, and had almost no similarities with the triplets. He wasn’t passive; he was active and demanding, while stoically denying it at the same time.
Never mind that. English was about to start, and as the teacher entered the room, it crossed Calvin’s mind that a whole world of teens brewed around him, ready to be explored.
“Everything is a mountain”
June 8, 2023 at 4:45 pm #146940Callista
“They don’t know when to stop, huh?” Lukas said with a roll of his eyes.
“Or how,” Calvin quipped.
Callie felt her cheeks flush and directed her gaze downward, staring at her shoes.
Fynn didn’t seem thrown off or embarrassed by the comment, but that was just how he was. Always confident in himself… Maybe a little too confident.
“What are you taking for electives?” Callie asked, trying to change the subject.
(I’m not sure when English class is going to start, so I don’t know how long this conversation is going to last. 😛 )
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
June 8, 2023 at 4:45 pm #146941Whoops, sorry, I missed your most recent RP. Just ignore mine. XD
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
June 8, 2023 at 4:51 pm #146942@whalekeeper I understand! I’ve been pretty active recently too. I got like a sudden burst of writer energy after a quick spout of writer depression sooo XD
@freedomwriter76 @whoever-else (btw Paxton and Luna have returned to class but no point in RPing just to say that XD)
November
November stared at the mess of papers on his desk, frowning. He could hardly read his handwriting…his essay was probably illegible…
Not that it mattered much anyway…it probably sucked…
Ara had told him it was good, but…November had his doubts.
Ara always tended to give the benefit of the doubt to people, and was optimistic by nature, like Lyn…
Especially when it came to him it seemed, which he couldn’t understand in the slightest.
He let out a small groan as he read through, or tried at least, a paragraph of his essay, and, deeming it trash, gave himself up to the fact that he’d get yet another bad mark.
“You alright, N?”
November shot up, cheeks flushing pink. “Y-Yea…fine,” he lied, tugging at a few curls as Ara sat beside him.
“Still worrying about your assignment? He didn’t answer, but the silence must have been enough.
“It’s going to be fine. It’s an extra credit essay, it doesn’t have to be perfect,” She smiled.
“I’ll be lucky if it’s even decent.”
“Don’t talk like that,” Ara sighed, gently taking the ginger’s hand in her own. His eyes glanced at their intertwined fingers, heat turning his ears red.
For as long as he could remember, he and Ara had always held hands…so why was it so awkward now?
Then again…it has always made him a bit blushy…even as a little tyke.
Anything she did usually ended up with him becoming a pile of blushing goo…
But it wasn’t until recently that Ara seemed to sense the awkwardness the herself…
She blinked, straightening a bit before slowly untangling their fingers, looking away for a moment.
“I…ah…” She started, folding her hands into her lap, “Listen…it’s going to be wonderful. I just know it.”
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 8, 2023 at 4:52 pm #146944Oh my gosh…
I just thought about if this is one of those schools that makes the student read their stuff out loud…
November would DIE XD
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJune 8, 2023 at 4:54 pm #146945But…it would also be HILARIOUS….
and give the class something to do while it is actually going 🤣 cuz I can tell u right now there will be some troublemakers…
COUGH COUGH CALLAN COUGH
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