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March 20, 2018 at 7:32 pm #67739
@alia @ariell-ashira @bekreations *thunder crashes* *lightning flashes* *lights turn off* *flys in silloetted through window* *wings sweep behind me like a black cape* *sits regally on the table* *lights flicker on* *speaks in ominous voice* I have come to collect the peace offering for messing up my character’s name. *grabs basket* Thank you. *Flaps wings and exits out window* *clouds clear and sun comes out* *pokes head back in, mouth covered in choclate* @dekreel Was that evil overlord-ish enough? (I was being more nice evil overlord though…)
*whispers* I wasn’t really mad. It’s fine, really… Just wondering if you noticed yet. It happened on the other topic too. X3 lol. they still haven’t noticed. Poor Graenw. *clears throat* *throws back head* Muh, ha, ha!IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
March 20, 2018 at 7:47 pm #67743@catwing, this is a regular occurrence for your characters??? we must start a protest for them. Here it is, Character’s Names and Lives March.
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Kapeefer til we're old and greyMarch 20, 2018 at 8:43 pm #67765@Alia it only happened one other time… It’s kinda funny though.
I try and make a helpless creature that needs constant care, but can transform you into anything. Then they make him want to destroy humans. Lol. Sentences can be interpreted many different ways. That’s the fun of it. XD
I will admit that Graenw is a hard name to remember.IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
March 20, 2018 at 9:09 pm #67785@catwing Hah! Great evil overlord entrance!
What did Graenw’s name turn into?
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March 20, 2018 at 9:19 pm #67792@bekreations Greenw, Greenwich, maybe due to autocorrect cause it varied with the correct.
Then just plain, Gaenw, after that. o.o *sigh*IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
March 20, 2018 at 9:23 pm #67794@catwing I see.
I have a question. What is the difference between a Keeper and a Kapeefer? I thought they were the same thing but I am reading What Stan and I did on Christmas and Sam implies there is a difference.
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March 20, 2018 at 9:39 pm #67798@bekreations Keeper is the original. KeePer of the Realm of the Pen.
But in one of the videos, Daniel made up KaPeeFer (which stands for Kingdom Pen Fan)IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
March 20, 2018 at 9:42 pm #67800@catwing Thanks, that makes sense
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March 20, 2018 at 9:47 pm #67802@bekreations found it. It’s the Worst allegory video. https://kingdompen.org/how-to-write-the-worst-allegory-ever/
IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
March 21, 2018 at 12:01 pm #67921Thank you for accepting our peace offering basket, catwing. 🙂
Now back to our story.
…It wasn’t a direct route, but at least this way we wouldn’t be seen. Several times I thought I heard footsteps crackling on the leaves behind us.
“Are we being followed?” I asked Akila.
She shrugged, but several times I saw her glance behind us. We made our way as quietly as we could to a place where The Ravine narrowed, and there were ledges and footholds that we could climb down on. I could nearly see the stone’s hiding place from where we stood.
"In a mask, was he?"
March 21, 2018 at 12:38 pm #67926@ariel-ashira Hope you don’t mind, I just made your last portion into present tense to match the rest of the story. 🙂
It isn’t a direct route, but at least this way we won’t be seen. Several times I think I hear footsteps crackling on the leaves behind us.
“Are we being followed?” I ask Akira.
She shrugs, but several times I see her glance behind us. We make our way as quietly as we can to a place where The Ravine narrows, and there are ledges and footholds that we can climb down on. I can nearly see the stone’s hiding place from where we stand.
“Edric, be just a little quieter.” Akira’s eyes dart nervously around. She fingers the knife in her belt. I raise my eyebrows at her.
“It’s probably nothing.” She’s not a very good liar. “Just be careful.”
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
March 21, 2018 at 12:38 pm #67927And hopefully you all were imagining the MC as a guy… 🙂 🙂 😉
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March 21, 2018 at 12:59 pm #67930@ingridrd I did right away. I don’t know how you did it, but I think you made him sound like a guy right off the bat very well 🙂
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March 21, 2018 at 1:12 pm #67934@bekreations Ah, good. 😝
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