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December 8, 2022 at 10:31 am #123663
He does not I’m afraid. He was born without them, but he has a line of bone that (because obviously the wings have bone in them) that have grown fluffy white downy feathers where his wings would have grown at, down his spine (which i think is adorable) (u can see the bone obviously because it’s just like if something had a limb removed, the bone would be covered over)
but his father was not a Fae, thus he wasn’t born with wings like the Fae, only the feathers on his spine.
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#ProtectSebDecember 8, 2022 at 10:32 am #123664I consider him my wingless angel, and it’s very interesting concept because the other Fae have wings and are atrocious (except Soren who is redeemed)
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#ProtectSebDecember 8, 2022 at 11:46 am #123668@freedomwriter76
I like that board for Arwin!
And forgiveness/hatred is a good theme.
So… right now Brann is a bit heartless and cruel. I don’t know why he is yet, but since he is one of the top members of a guild for criminals, it makes sense that he keeps things close to his chest. But he is definitely a villain.
Hesh has had a little more development (though Brann is older) he grew up in the criminal guild, but something happened to make him realize that not everything is about money. Now he is trying to solve a certain mystery… and is being a lone Robin-Hood type of thief. I hope he finds happiness some day.
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good on, eh?
-The DoctorDecember 8, 2022 at 11:53 am #123669Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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I like that board for Arwin!
Thank you!!! 🙂
And forgiveness/hatred is a good theme.
It is…one of my favorites…maybe that’s why I write it so much. XD
So… right now Brann is a bit heartless and cruel. I don’t know why he is yet, but since he is one of the top members of a guild for criminals, it makes sense that he keeps things close to his chest. But he is definitely a villain.
Hesh has had a little more development (though Brann is older) he grew up in the criminal guild, but something happened to make him realize that not everything is about money. Now he is trying to solve a certain mystery… and is being a lone Robin-Hood type of thief. I hope he finds happiness some day.
Ooh, interesting! (especially Hesh… 😉 )
Hmm…why do I sense a tragic backstory for Brann….?
You can talk about the others, too! I just saw highwayman and thief and was intrigued. XD
But I’d love to hear about all of them! 😀 Or, at least the ones you have figured out and want to talk about. 😉
December 8, 2022 at 1:17 pm #123684@godlyfantasy12 Aww, that’ a cute drawing! Hey, I mean someone could make him prosthetic wings or something someday (don’t think your world’s technology is that advanced yet but just an idea)
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December 8, 2022 at 1:18 pm #123685@e-m-trepke I remember Hesh…… He, Feather and Rinzler worked together that one time in the character castle….
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December 8, 2022 at 1:19 pm #123686@freedomwriter76
I don’t know everything about my characters yet, but I am slowly and surely learning more about them. 🙂
Hmm…why do I sense a tragic backstory for Brann….?
Yeah… I can tell there is great bitterness and hatred in his heart. He might have a few moments where he does what is right, but his arc is ultimately negative.
Vesper is an interesting character to talk about arc-wise. His arc starts out a little negative, but then he learns and begins a slow positive arc. In the end he even—! No. I shouldn’t mention that.
Hesh is a bit of an enigma sometimes… I think I came up with him after reading A Face Like Glass by Frances Hardinge. The Kleptomancer made me interested in adding a thief character to my WIP.
Alfrodard is… interesting. I made up his name using different roots. It means all-wise-brave. He’s a hermit… and very, very old. 😉
I talked about Alva earlier in Charrie Chat.
Darcy’s arc doesn’t really begin until partway through the story when the event-that-shall-not-be-named happens. It includes (coincidence?) forgiveness and hatred.
Crispin… sorry kid, I don’t want to talk about you right now.
Tariel Adelram. Now I made him a while back. King searching relentlessly for a way to cure his wife’s growing madness, slowly descending into darkness as he pursues his single-minded purpose. Unknowingly worsening the poison in his wife by the actions he takes during his search… he is my favourite antagonist so far.
The Desperate King doesn’t have a name yet, but political threat causes him to take desperate measures. Like sending a young miner to retrieve the Sword. (I have a legend about the forging of the sword. It is closely connected to the legend of creation and the beginning of evil. Ah, Phil.)
The characters of the others are still foggy in my mind.
What do you think? 😉
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good on, eh?
-The DoctorDecember 8, 2022 at 1:54 pm #123691Yeah, they did. 🙂 That was fun. At the moment, Darcy’s in the castle.
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-The DoctorDecember 8, 2022 at 2:31 pm #123695@e-m-trepke Cool! My characters are currently kinda wandering in the castle. I’m waiting for someone to just randomly discover them.
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December 8, 2022 at 3:14 pm #123707@freedomwriter76
Those characters are soo cool!! And Lilith’s moodboard is so cute! ❤️
Your characters are really interesting!!
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December 8, 2022 at 3:15 pm #123708December 8, 2022 at 6:12 pm #123762@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
totally random but I just thought of this hilarious conversation that would probably happen between Arthur and Corvina in my series OR in the AU.
Arthur: I wore your color. *Suggestively raises brows*
Corvina: *😑* It’s a black tie event Arthur. Literally everyone is wearing black.
XD XD XD!!!
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#ProtectSebDecember 8, 2022 at 6:14 pm #123764Legit their dynamic is one of the most fun things to write, and he makes me look forward to the second series soooo much lol, if it ever happens, and if not then he will forever live rent free in my (and now y’all’s I’m sure lol) brain.
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#ProtectSebDecember 8, 2022 at 6:50 pm #123767He does not I’m afraid. He was born without them, but he has a line of bone that (because obviously the wings have bone in them) that have grown fluffy white downy feathers where his wings would have grown at, down his spine (which i think is adorable) (u can see the bone obviously because it’s just like if something had a limb removed, the bone would be covered over) but his father was not a Fae, thus he wasn’t born with wings like the Fae, only the feathers on his spine.
Oh, okay. Aww yeah, I bet that is cute😊❤️. Paxton is so CUTE❤️❤️!!!
I consider him my wingless angel, and it’s very interesting concept because the other Fae have wings and are atrocious (except Soren who is redeemed)
Awww. I’m so glad Soren is redeemed. I like him.
Which makes me despise Aramis even more for what he eventually does😡😤.totally random but I just thought of this hilarious conversation that would probably happen between Arthur and Corvina in my series OR in the AU.
Arthur: I wore your color. *Suggestively raises brows*
Corvina: *😑* It’s a black tie event Arthur. Literally everyone is wearing black.
XD XD XD!!!
Lol, omg that sounds so much like them 😂🤣. I luv Arthur😂. And Corvina is so funny 😆.
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December 8, 2022 at 7:36 pm #123772@lightoverdarkness6 ahh thank you!! Yes Paxton is ADORABLE!!! He is my BABY!!! (Along with November 🥰🥰🥰)
And Aramis is just…sigh…not a good dude.
YESSSS ARTHUR IS SO GREAT! And Corvina is ma sarcasm QUEEN!
but I seriously love their dynamic because Corvina is what’s called a Tsundere (u can look that up if u like) but it basically means:
a person or character who swings between emotionally hot and cold, in particular when dealing with a love interest. Especially used to describe someone who is usually cold or cranky but occasionally shows a soft, kind, mushy side.
Usually one of those people who hits their crush, but secretly loves everything they say/do XD.
And part of the reason is just because that’s her personality (she’s an ISTP), but the second reason is because when she meets him it’s about a year or so after she’s been redeemed and even so, she’s still very much struggling with everything, and how she views herself.
She can’t forgive herself fully, and she’s struggling with her inner voice still (she had made a coping mechanism as a child that was very unhealthy, and it ties in some with her being Destined by The Light One, but that’s a bit complicated XD. Long story short; she pretty much at one point found herself having dual personalities, literally seeing her dark nature as a person she could speak with).
anyway, said all that because her and Arthur’s relationship is just very sweet while it’s also very hilarious.
He accepts her completely for who she is, some of the reason being he’s a thief, having lived on the streets most of his young life, and knows what it feels like a bit to be the outcast, even though Corvina doesn’t consider him to be anything close to her level.
But she doesn’t accept herself and it’s just 😭
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